《Avneil - being with you》Papa
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A little long update for all of you....enjoy...
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Khanna mansion.....
Sweata:"bebe aapne dekha....meri bacchi...avni....or aarav or naina kitne baare me ho Gaye...."
Bebe:"haan sweata..(seeing neela lost in her own thoughts ) neela..."
Neela:(having tears)"bebe...avni ....meri bacchi....uske ankho me kitna dard tha....woh...woh chupa rahi thi per muhje sab dikh raha tha....woh..."
Sweata:(hugging neela)"neela ji aap chinta mat karo...2 saal neil ki wajah se hum avni jo dhoond nahi paye...per ab hum dondenge...."
Bebe:"haan ...prakash beta...tu kuch kar na..."
Prakash:"ji bebe....."(just than shruti comes in the house all tired )
Shruti:"aare koyi pani do ..."
Sweata:"beta...tum Jake lelo kitchen se....waise tumhe auto mila..."
Shruti:"auto kya khak milta aaj auto ki strike hai..."
Sweata:"oh....sorry beta muhje nahi pata tha...(and laughs inside....you all might have guessed by now that sweata knew about this...)
Meanwhile in at vidihut house....
Avni enters with the kids...and as soon as she enters the kids run to their room....to watch their favorite show....Tom and Jerry.....
Avni:"aare suno( to a servant ) sab kahan hai..."
Servant:"woh maam....vivan sir or madam movie dekhne Gaye....vidihut sir mishti beta or riya madam ko park leke Gaye...2 ghante baad hi aayenge...."
Avni:"Accha theek hai...."(she goes in the kitchen while the kids were in the hall watching TV.....just than a guy enters the house...and as soon as the the kids see him they ran and hug him....and start shouting....)
Aarav and naina :"papa papa...papa...(he picks up them and kisses their cheeks)
Man:"how are my Cutiepies....."
Naina:"mumma....dekho...papa aaye..."(avni comes from the kitchen....)
Avni:"finally tum aa Gaye kitna wait kar rahi thi me tumhara...."
Man:"Anna tho tha na...bad kaam me pass gaya tha..."
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Avni:"aarav naina gao TV dekho muhje tumhare papa se kuch baat karni hai...."(kids go back to TV while avni takes the man to her room...)
Avni's room....
As soon as avni entered the room.....the man took her into a tight hug....
Avni:""(the man is none other than our Neil..😉😉...so laga jhatka.....)
Neil:(chuckling )"avni kal hi toh hum mile the...or abhi kuch der pehele bhi temple me...(just then he feels wetness on his shoulder ..he breaks the hug and sees avni crying...he cups her face.. wipes the tears...and and kisses her forehead...)"avni...yaar plz don't cry..."
Avni:"neil maine sabko 2 saal...2 saal...baad dekha...aarav naina woh log toh jante bhi nahi ki....woh unki family thi....neil...me kaise...yeh natak or kitna chalega...muhjse nahi hota ab..."
Neil:"heyy avni..tum toh meri lady don ho na...or I promise ab yeh natak or lamba nahi karna hoga....bas me almost punch gaya hoon sach tak .....uske baad sab theek ho jayega....accha ab rona band karo....woh dialogue bhool gayi kya...(dramatically )" pushpa I hate tears...."(avni giggles....)
Naina:(comes running in)"mumma papa...."
Neil:(picking her up )"aare mera princess...."
Naina:"papa meri cocolate (chocolate..).."
Avni:"woh kis liye..."
Neil:"woh is liye ki meri or princess ki deal hui thi...ki agar woh bahar sabke samne jab bhi me use milo....woh muhje papa nahi bulaye gi than me use chocolate donga...and as promised...."(takes 2 dairy milk from his pocket )"yeh rahe aapke or aaru ke liye chocolate..."
Naina:(Neil keeps her down and she starts jumping...and run to aarav yelling his name)"bhaiya...bhaiya..."
Avni:"arre naina suno....(but she had already left) kya neil tum hamesha ese karte ho...bacche hai woh .....hamesha tum unhe begarte ho....ab dekhna 20 min bhi nahi bacchegi chocolate dono gapa gap kha gayenge....phir khana khane me natak karenge....(avni continuously kept speaking.....but stopped and stood in shock as Neil sealed his lips with hers.....and starts nibbling on her lower lips....avni stood their in shock until Neil pinches her wrist and she starts to respond by nibbling on his upper lips......they have a passionate kiss...with avni hands in Neil's hair...and neil arms...on her wrist pulling her closer....after about 10 to 15 mins they end the kiss and rest their foreheads together )
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Neil:(licking his lip)"uff that was amazing...."
Avni:(blushing and hitting Neil shoulder)"
tum na ek dam besharam ho..."
Neil:"avni yaar...humhari shaadi ko 5 saal ho Gaye....humhare bacche bhi hai 2 saal ke...phir bhi tum itna sharmati ho ek kiss me.."
Avni:"Neil chalo sab log aate honge...mugje khana bana hai..."(saying this she left without listening to his reply......neil also follows her out...)
In hall....
Avni was making sure the dinner gets ready on time while....neil was busy playing with the kids...just than vivan vidihut...mishti...
.riya and priya enter....
Mishti:"superman......"(hugging him)
Neil:"mishti yeh chocolate aapke liye...or haan in dono ko mat dena...bahut kha chuke hai...or uski wajah se muhje bhi lecture mil chuka hai..."(all laugh)
Vidihut:(hugging neil)"hi neil ....."
Neil:"hi vidihut....riya woh tumhe kal mango khane ka mann tha na..."
Riya:"tha kahan jiju abhi bhi hai...per kya karon....is musam me mangos milte kahan hai..."
Neil:"accha...ek kaam karo...woh table pe jo box hai usse kholo..."(she goes and opens it...to find a box of mangos )
Riya:(screaming )"mangos...omg omg jiju...ur the best...."
Vidihut:"aaram se riya..."
Riya:"opps sorry..."(avni rushes out hearing the scream )
Avni:"kya hua riya tu theek hai na..."
Riya:"avni dekh mangos...."
Avni:"tu bhi na dara diya muhje...ab tu zayda jump wamp mat kar....7 thwa mahina chal raha hai tera..."
Riya:"sorry na ...priya tu khayegi....mangos tere toh favorite hai na....(giving it to priya...but before she can give her....priya ran to the bathroom.......all rushed behind her...to see her vomiting...)
Aarav:"mumma chachiji ko kya hua...."
Avni:"kuch nahi beta..."(neil called the doctor and he arrived within 10 to 15 mins... all were waiting outside...while the doctor checked her...naina was in Neil arms while aarav sitting on avni lap....vivan was very tensed...just than the doctor came out with a big smile...)
Doctor:"congratulations....she pregnant...woh bhi 2 weeks..."(vivan stood in shock while all congratulated him)
Vidihut:(hugging him)"congratulations mere bhai..."(all head in and congratulate priya...and head fo dinner letting priya rest...after dinner all head to their rooms...)
Avneil room....
Avni was setting up the bed to sleep when the kids come and start jumping on the bed...
Avni:"aarav..naina...yeh kya kar rahe ho..."
Neil:(coming from bathroom)"aare wah...bed pe jumpy jumpy I will also join...(he also jumps on the bed...while aarav and naina fall on him...)
Avni:"Neil....."
Neil:"kya hua avni..."
Avni:"tum theeno ko dikh nahi raha me yahan kaam kar rahi hoon..."
Neil:"raat me kya kaam...chalo aao aapke so jao...(he said pulling avni...in the bed...avni signs as she knows their is no use to argue and lays down...soon everyone drift off to sleep except avni....)
(Just imagine the kids smaller)
Avni:(In mind)" much hi dino me aarav or naina ka 3rd birthday bhi hai...pls bhagwanji kuch toh karo ki iss saal humhara pura pariwar humhare saath ho....pls..."
Avni saw Neil naina and aarav seeping peacefully hugging each other......and she remembers the day everything....changed..
Flashback....(guys this is where the chapter ended...)
Avneil reach their rooms...sleep unaware of the storm that will hit them the next day....
Next morning......
Neil wakes up first to see aarav playing with his tshirt....and giggles....naina and avni was missing...but than he heard the bathroom shower open...
Neil wakes up and starts playing with aarav when avni comes out all dressed in her saree and has naina in her hands...
Flashback to be continued.......
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Next update after 150 votes and 10 lengthy comments...
Precap:"continuation in flashback....what truth are avneil talking about.....aarav and naina birthday will bring a twist in avneil life....is the twist good or bad..."
Remember 150 votes and 10 long comments....
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