《Avneil - being with you》Avneil meeting
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So guys I am here with my next part....
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Khanna house...
It was around evening time when Neil come back home....his face showed no emotions as he left to his room without uttering a word....
Bebe:"sunny sab ready hai na janne ke liye..."
Prakash:"haan bebe..."
Neela:"ek min bebe...main Neil ko bhi leke aa rahi..."
Sweata:"use laane ki koyi zarorat nahi hai neela ji..."
Neela:"plz sweata ji aaj nahi...aaj ke din uska hona zarori hai...aaj uske dadaji ka birthday hai.. or dharshan ke uska hona bahut zarori hai..."
Bebe:"per neela ji..."
Prakash:"bebe....(nods his head no) neela ji aapko ji theek lage aa kijiye....hum gardi me hain....(and they all leave....neela goes to Neil's room to see shruti sitting ...and talking while Neil is busy in his own world ignoring her.....)
Neela:"Neil...me I talk to u for few mins..."
Shruti:"actually aunty he is busy u can come later...."
Neil:(ignoring shruti comment)"boliye maa..."
Neela:"...beta hum sab mandir ja rahe tum bhi chalo...pls...its a request...."
Neil:"theek hai maa....chalo...(he gets up to go ....)
Shruti:"Neil me bhi chalon ghar behet ke bore ho rahi hoon..."
Neil:"tumhe jo karna hai woh karo...."(and he starts walking out.....with neela maa while shruti also followed making faces....)
Outside .....
All were seated in their car....neil goes and sits in his car...shruti was going to sit in the passenger seat but neil asked neela to sit front as it is more comfortable for her....shruti was mad but went and sat in the back...soon they reached the temple.....
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While on the other hand....
Avni:"arru...nainu...jaldi aao ...."
Aarav:"kya hua mumma..."
Avni:"chalo tum dono hum bahar ja rahe..."
Naina:"kahan mumma...."
Avni:"temple or fir pani puri khane...."(both kids jumped hearing pani puri...and avni headed out of house...not before telling riya....)
In avni's car......
The driver was sitting forward....and avni and the kids was sitting back....
Naina:"mumma hum temple kyun ja rahe..."
Avni:"beta...aaj aapke great grandfather ka birthday hai..."
Aarav:"woh humhare saath kyun nahi hai..kahan hai woh..."
Avni:"woh bhagwan ji ke pass hai beta....is hi liye hum temple ja rahe....ab kitne sawal pochonge tum dono....chup chap beheto 2 min...."(soon they also reached temple....)
In temple.....
Avni enters with the kids...and tells both of them to pray to God.....while she joins her hands and closes her eyes....the kids...cutely follow what avni dose...
Pandit:(to avni)"beta prasad "(avni take the prasad in her hands and makes the kids eat than eats the rest her self....)
Avni:"pandit ji aaj mere dada ji ka birthday hai.. toh plz aap yeh prasad sab baccho me baat dena...dhanyawad..."(pandit ji nods and starts heading back...)"chalo baccho...."(as she goes to the back side of the temple to do parikrama.....neil and his family enter the temple.....all go and pray to bhagwanji and get prasad... )
While on the other hand.....avni and the kids are done with the parikrama and are heading back to the front of temple....
Naina:"mumma ab hum pani puri khane ja sakte hai plzzzz...."
Avni:"haan baccha wahi toh ja rahe hai..."
Aarav:"mumma me na teeka wala khaonga..."
Avni:(tickling him)"accha baccha.....teeka....."
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Aarav:(laughing)"... mumma nahi....no tick....tickling...."(and he starts running )
Avni:"aaru...beta ruku...(avni runs behind him holding naina hands....while running avni bumps into someone and close her eyes in the fear of falling....but feeling nothing she opens her eyes and gets shock....yes she was safe from hitting the ground....and yes someone had saved her...but that someone was none other than Neil....they both share a painful eyelock which was broken by neela...)
Neela:(tears in her eyes )"...av...avni..."(coming back to the real world avni separates from Neil...Neil was just looking at her...with tears in his eyes....while avni wiped her tears and naina hide behind avni....)
Bebe:(tears)"avni putter...(cupping her face )"kaisi hai tu beta..."
Sweata:"meri bacchi...kahan chali gayi thi tu..."
Prakash:"puttar ji....tu tu aapne papa ko chord ke kyun chali gayi..."(all very looking at her with tears....shruti was not there as she had gone to get something from the near by store...)
Aarav:(running and hugging avni)"mumma kya hua...aap yahan kyun ruk gayi..."
Sweata:(seeing the kids...)"avni...beta...yeh ....aarav or naina hai ..na.."
Naina:(hiding behind avni...)"haan...per...sap kaun ho...."
Avni:"aarav naina tum dono gardi me jao....(to the driver )"aap plz dono ko le gayi me abhi aati hoon..."( he nods)
Aarav:"nahi mumma aap bhi chalo na..."
Avni:(sits on her knees)"aaru...aap jao me abhi aa rahi hoon...or naina ka dhayan rakhna...."(aarav nodded....he held naina hand...and they both went with the driver ...avni stands up and wipes her tears...)
Neela:"avni baccha..."
Avni:(sternly to Neil )"I am sorry for bumping into you...(and to family ) now I should leave..."
Bebe:"avni beta..."(but she didn't listen....while going she bumped into shruti )
Shruti:(yelling)"dekh ke nahi chal sakti..."(seeing avni and in anger)"tum....tum yahan..."
Avni:"haan me....or dekh ke tum nahi chal rahi thi...anyways...will u move out of my way....so I can go..."(saying so she sits on the car and leaves...)
Shruti:(standing next to the family )"wah...nahi car....pata nahi kis amir insan ko ab pasaya hai...."(neil didn't say anything....while everyone else looked at her in anger...neil without saying anything left from there...)"aare Neil ruku toh...."(before she can say anything neil got in his car and left....here the family also sat in their car)
Sweata:"sorry shruti car me jaga nahi hai....tum riksha se aa gao...(saying so they also left in the car...while shrutu fumed in anger....)
Meanwhile in avni car .....
Both kids were playing...while avni was looking out the house...blankly.....she gets flashes of the past .....
Flashback.....
Avni:(crying holding the babies)"neil meri baat mano maine kuch nahi kiya....tum toh jante ho muhje..."
Neil:"avni tum itni Careless kaise ho sakti ho....tum janti ho phir bhi tumne..."
Avni:"per Neil me..."
Neil:"bass avni muhje kuch nahi suna..."
Flashback ends...
Avni thoughts were broken by naina voice...
Naina:"mumma pani puri aa gaya..."(avni looks out to see the pani puri stall...she wipes her tears.....Smiles at the kids.. and they all head out to eat pani puri.....soon they head back home.. after enjoying the pani puri....)
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So guys hope you enjoyed it...
Plz do vote and comment...
I will update next part after 120 votes
Precap:"bebe tells prakash to find out about avni....more flashback...and a big twist...."
Remember 120 votes...
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