《Avneil - being with you》Naamkaran
Advertisement
Hey guys....I am here with my next part....
Hope u enjoy it....
Plz do vote and comment.....
Here we go...
。。。。。。。。。。。。 。。 。。。。。。。
Soon it was night time.......avneil room...
The babies were sleeping peacefully in the crib...while avni was cleaning the room...and Neil was working on office work...
Neil:"avni...5 min ho Gaye...ab me tumhari bilkul nahi sunoga..chup chap bed pe leto...and arram karo..."
Avni:(busy in cleaning )"bus Neil 2 min or..."
Neil:(gets up....and picks avni up...and makes her lay on the bed)"an chup chap yahan leto or arram karo..."
Avni:"per neil...abhi sirf 7 bhaje hai..."
Neil:"toh...esa kahan likha hai...ki 7 bhaje banda so nahi sakta...tumne subhe se bus kaam kaam kar rahi ho...thora arram bhi karo.....abhi toh tum hospitals aayi ho...its not good for ur health..."
Avni:"okay fine...so rahi hoon..."(he cover her with blanket and soon avni fell asleep ...while Neil goes back to do his work)
After 30 mins....
Neil finishes his work ...he gets up and sees it 7:30pm ....he sees his wify is peacefully sleeping....he was admiring his wife when he hears little noise....he turns to the grib to see his princess sleeping like her mother...but his champ was wide awake....neil smiles and picks him up and goes and sits on the couch....
Neil:(rocking the baby)"kya hau champ neend nahi aa rahi...dekho tumhari mumma or sister....are deep in sleep..."(he was talking to champ when their was a knock on the door...neil goes and opens the door to see neela and bebe)"aare maa ...bebe aaye na..."
Neela:"woh hum kahan dene aaye the...socha ki tum dono aaj kamare me kahan kha lo...avni kahan hai.."
Neil:"maa woh so...rahi..."
Bebe:"or yeh chotoram kyun utha hai..."
Neil:"bebe plz...isko bhi aap koyi naam mat dedena....tillu type...warna puri zindagi meri jaisi gayegi...."
Bebe:(hitting neil)"accha baccho...ider de my muhje....(she takes the boy from Neil and starts playing with him while Neil keep the food on the table...)
Neela:"Neil tum dono acche se kha lena...or haan...kal baccho ke naamkaran ki puri tayari ho gayi hai...bas...tum dono 10 bhaje tak aa gana neeche....10 bhaje subh muhurat hai..."
Advertisement
Neil:"ji..."(bebe hands the baby boy to Neil and they head down....neil slowly keeps the baby in his crib as the baby sleeps and goes to wake avni up...)
Neil:"avni...avni utho dekho khana kha lo phir so jana..."
Avni:"neil sone do na...bahut neend aa rahi hai..."(covering herself with blanket )
Neil:"accha avni bas...2 min...pls...(he makes avni sit on the bed and starts feeding her food....after avni is done eating her make her sleep again and eats his food....soon he also goes to bed and cuddles up with avni and asleeps...)
Morning around 6.....
The babies start to cry....which wakes up avni.....she goes and feeds the babies and makes them sleep again...
Avni:(to herself )"ab me kya karo...Neil toh so raha...or muhje neend bhi nahi aa rahi hai...ek kaam karti hoon fresh hoke kaparde ready kar leti hoon..."(avni freshend up and took out clothes for herself ...neil and her 2 munchkins.....by the time avni finished it was already 7...hearing the noise neil woke up ....)
Neil:(sitting on the bed)"good morning wify...."
Avni:(excited and happiness shown in her voice)"good morning Neil..."
Neil:(pulling her on his lap)"kya baat hai aaj bari khush lag rahi ho..."
Avni:(wrapping her arms around his neck )"kyun na hoon...aaj mere baccho ka naamkaran hai...(suddenly her eyes get wet)"neil tumhe pata hai....mera kabhi naamkaran nahi hua...ne bahut khush hoon ki mere baccho ko meri jaisi zindagi nahi mili....unka.....unka naamkaran hoga Neil...or aaj jab inka naamkaran honga tab muhje lagega ki mere bhi hua tha kabhi....(Neil wipes her tears and hugs avni....)
Neil:"shhhhh avni....woh Sab purani baat hai...or aaj bahut bara din hai...humhare baccho ka naamkaran....ese thori rote hai ese din pe...(diverting the topic)"or waise bhi....maine jo apni princess ke liye naam chona hai...woh sabse best hai...."
Avni:"haan toh mere bete ka naam bhi best hoga..."
Neil:"accha ji..."
Avni:"haan ji..."(they giggles and hug each other again...)
Soon time passes and it was time to get ready for pooja...
Avni:"neil dekho me ready ho gayi...bas tum or bacche bache hai...tum jaldi gao ready ho tab tak me babies ko ready karti..."
Neil:"haan ja raha hoon..."(he goes in to change while avni makes the babies ready)
Advertisement
Avni:(picking up the girl)"awww my baby looks so cute....(kissing her...she was playing with the baby when she hears noise of the baby boy..)"haan haan I haven't forgotten you...come here...(saying so she picks him up also...)
Just than Neil comes out....and smiles seeing his wife and babies playing ....
Neil:(walking over to them and taking the princess in his hands)"kya baat hai...mere princess or champ to bahut accha lag rahe.....or unki mumma ko humhari zaan hi lelegi...(said as he leaned over only to be slightly pushed by avni)
Avni:"Mr.khanna behave....u are now father of 2 kids..."
Neil:"Mrs. Khanna but I am also a hubby of the most beautiful women in the world....sorry...second beautiful....first will be my daughter..."
Avni:"accha accha ab chalo pooja ka time ho raha..."(they head down and ...as avneil move down the stair with their babies in their hands...all look at them in awe.....khanna has invited some close friends and relatives only..)
Avneil 👇
The babies 👇
Lady:"haaye....kitne sone lag rahe...."
Mishti:"angle...babies kitne cute dikh rahe...chote chote..."(avneil smile)
Bebe:"baccho Tum dono pehele pooja me beheto..."
Avneil:"ji bebe...(they both sit down with the babies in their hands...and the pooja starts )
(Okay guys...I have no idea ki naamkaran ceremony me kya hota hai....so I will skip all the pooja part...justgo to the point where they name the babies.....hope u all understand...)
Pandit:"ab aap bacchon ka naam unke kaan me bole phir sub ko bole...."
Avneil:"ji..."
(*side note...I had a hard time deciding names..so....I picked out 10 names ... 5girls ...5 boys...put them in a chit and randomly picked the names...so if you don't like them than I am sorry...it was random...and thank you all for suggesting amazing names....)
Avni:(whispers the name to the baby boy...while he giggles....than she kisses his forehead and says the name to all)" humhare baby boy ka naam hai....
AARAV......AARAV NEIL KHANNA..."(neil smiles)
Pandit:(to neil)"ab aap"
Neil:(also whispers the name in his princess ears...while she smiles...then he says it out load...)"or humhari princess ka naam hai.....
NAINA.....NAINA NEIL KHANNA "(all clap....and soon the pooja was over...everyone one got up...)
Bebe:"kitne sone naam hai...Naina or Aarav....kisi ki nazar na lage...."(she kissed both their foreheads....soon all the guest leaves and only family members are present)
Vidihut:(taking naina from neil)"hello....baby....sorry...naina...(he starts playing with him when they hear a voice )
Voice:"NEIL....."
Neil:(shocked)"shruti "
Shruti mehra......neil childhood friend.....they have studied together till 10 grade...than she moved due to her parents job....has a brother...
Shruti runs and hugs Neil....
Shruti:(breaking the hug)"omg neil...you know how much I missed u....and look at u man...looking handsome yaar..."
Neil:"shruti....Tum kab aayi India and why didn't u inform me..."
Shruti:"isko surprise bolte hai stupid...."
Neil:"oyee......"
Shruti:"what oyee.. "
Man:"aare koyi ider bhi dekhlo..."
Neil:"Rohan...."(goes and hugs him)
Rohan mehra....brother of shruti Mahra....twin of shruti...best friend of Neil...
Rohan:"tu toh muhje bhool hi gaya haan.."
Neil:"nahi yaar tuhje kaise bhool sakta...under aa..."
Rohan:"namaste aunty...uncle...aare bebe...kaise hai aap..."
Bebe:"me theek hoon beta tum dono kaise ho..."
Shruti:"aare ek dam mast bebe..."
Mishti:"papa yeh kyun hai..."
Vidihut:"pata nahi beta..."
Shruti:"omg omg....babies...(she rushes to avni and vidihut who were holding the babies...)"yeh aapke hai...wow...kitne cute hai..aapko pata hai muhje na babies bahut pasand..hai..."
Rohan:"pagal hai yeh...ignore her...hi me rohan. ...Neil ka dost .."
Avni:"hi...avni.."
Rohan:"beautiful name ..."
Avni:"thanks..."
Rohan:"waise bebe aaj kuch hai kya.."
Avni:"haan aaj mere baccho ka naamkaran tha.."
Shruti:"oh wow kya naam rakha..."
Avni:"AARAV and NAINA "
Rohan:"bahut pyare naam hai..."
Shurti:(to vidihut and avni)"sap dono ke baach bahut cute hai..."
Vidihut:"aare nahi yeh..."
Shruti:(cutting him off)"aare neil...opps sorry me aapse baad me baat karti....okay...neil suno na..muhje mera kamara dekha do plz...come(she starts pulling him...neil looks at avni...woh signal him through her eyes to..go...he shruti and rohan leave)
Riya:"vidihut lao naina ko muhje do...or avni tu chal me teri help karti in dono ko chage karane me...priya tu bhi aa ja..."
Priya:"haan di..."(they 3 leave )
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
So guys hope you enjoyed it...
Plz do vote and comment....
It's a long update only for u guys...
Next update after 170 votes...
Precap:"what twist will the new entry make..."
Remember 170 votes....
Thank you guys sooo much...for loving this story....and giving it number 1 postion for the tag avneil 💖💖💖💖💖
Advertisement
- In Serial6 Chapters
The Medieval Legend
With necromancy, they come as deceased relations, in dreams, sometimes they are real.But sleight and animosity fill their hearts, Cravers of proclivity are likeliest to drown in their artificial words.They came to carry out their mistresses will, her annual necromantic rite, where familiar spirits in selected parts of the world are conjured. They would tell the kings about the golden city in their dreams, that it is unbeknownst to none but few who had no map or something that could convey them over the oceans to the golden city, Affirmative, the land does exist. The destinies of a visitant is coming and going, but none but one, who has stepped foot on the shores of the golden city (eastern Amazon), has ever made it home.Only Van-markus and his crew of dutch pirates has.Five Empires drowned in those words about the golden city.. The Japanese Empire, The British Empire, The Roman Empire, The Igbo's. they all journeyed to the golden city unbeknown of the evil that awaits them there.
8 206 - In Serial10 Chapters
Iron and Wood - A Tale Of Empire and Clans
For centuries, the Midlands had been split into fragments. A once glorious, united Empire has become a shadow of its former self. Unity has not returned, and not for the lack of trying. The greatest of these successor states were the Li Dynasty to the south, the rulers of old, and the Emerald Empire to the North, with its vibrant vitality. Unity is the end goal, and both will sacrifice anything to attain this elusive dream. For unity would surely solve the conflict that had long plagued this once prosperous continent. The Ironwood Clan was a prime player. Some would consider them the ones holding the reigns to the horse named 'Unification'. Iron and wood were the backbones of civilization; similarly, the Ironwoods were the backbones of the Northern Empire, and by extension, the people of the Midlands. Their methods, as questionable as they might be, had strengthened the North. Yet, were they enough? In the midst of it all, a young Ironwood who had lost his path must once again find his way. For the sake of his own wellbeing; for the sake of his clan; and for the sake of the Empire and its subjects. However, is he willing to sacrifice for the good of all? Is he willing to condemn some for the sake of others? Is he willing to make the right, albeit harsh, decisions? Only the heavens would know. Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, events and incidents are the products of the author’s imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. Additionally, any views and beliefs expressed by the characters are not the author's own. The story is also not an endorsement of any actions taken within. The 'profanity' and 'sexual content' warning tags are there to be safe (and to leave room for potential future changes), but for now these two things are not inside this novel. This is my take on 'cultivation', though it might be somewhat disconnected from the general idea of the genre. Release schedule: Two chapters a week. The cover was created using wombo art. While I believe that creations using the app are in the public domain, if that is not the case, I will take it down.
8 133 - In Serial68 Chapters
His Best Friends Daughter- BK1 TPBS 1st draft
Amazing cover by @covermeredd. check out her writing! Hot!*******"I don't understand why we have to get married Dad. I'm only seventeen and he's..." her arm flung towards him as she sat down in the chair across from him in a huff. "he's OLD!" Ouch!****************************Book 1 ofThe Price Brothers StoriesAs a favour to a friend Damon agrees to marry his daughter Anna. Anna needs protection that only Damon can give her. Anna has suffered through some terrible things and now she's coming out the other side her father informs her that she's getting married 'for the best' to a possessive, controlling man who is literally twice her age. Her father's secret reason catches up with them all when a voice from the past returns and is determined to take Anna away.*********************************** © This story is sooooo copyrighted from the first thought to the last word I write. Don't disappoint me. Hi all. While at the moment it's set as PG-13 there is the possibility that wp will make some of the chapters private through this book and to read those you'll need to be following me, there is also the possibility that I may make some restricted myself. Again, I'm an aussie, we have different spellings for some words so please take that into consideration. We have laws that allow 16 yr olds to marry with permission. 16 is considered the legal age of consent for having sex.©COPYRIGHT. All rights reserved.*********#15 in General Fiction 31/12/2014#667 in Romance 17/11/2014
8 104 - In Serial27 Chapters
Sage Of An Era
Every Era a great Sage appears in the world, vastly surpassing every other Sage and takes his rightful place on the Throne and inscribes their name in history as one of the prominent Monarch. Ryan a boy from the slums wakes up in a room to meet an eccentric middle aged man with a whimsical personality. However, this man is more than what meets the eye, a great Sage who wants to raise Ryan for reasons that no one knows except for himself. -------- I'm a uni student, so a pretty busy guy and writing for fun, lemme know what you think and I'll try posting as much as I can.
8 126 - In Serial45 Chapters
Duology: Light
Matthew Baronia is a prodigy among his peers, a young man recognized by his kingdom. As a fighter, a knight to be specific, Matthew is expected to take on the monsters that trouble the surrounding cities of his kingdom. Joined by his friends, Brian the dragoon who acts before he thinks, Eric the Cleric who loves to chat, Jessica the hotheaded mage, and Adriana the sarcastic Rogue, Matthew must escort a group of archeologists. Their job seems simple, but danger lurks, and a scheme is being devised while the team is pre-occupied. All the while, Matthew must deal with the woes of a team leader.
8 75 - In Serial162 Chapters
New Eden Online
AetherGear, the cutting-edge technology that brought about FullDive Virtual Reality and revolutionized the world. When the device's genius creator announced a new game for his system, entirely designed by him, hundreds of millions lined up to play. Enter the world of New Eden Online, a paradise for those ready to give their all. Note: This story is also available on Wattpad.com and WebNovel.com
8 160

