《Avneil - being with you》the big surprise....
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So guys i am here with my next part.....
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home.....(after reaching home they show everyone the picture....and all are very happy seeing the new memeber of the family...especial mishti...she was excited for the baby..)
Later neil took avni to their room so she can rest .....
In avneil room.....
Avni was laying on the bed talking to nanno.....while neil was busy finding something in the closet when he finds a dairy.....the cover page of the dairy said "Avni Ayesha's dairy....do not touch..."
Neil:(seeing avni had disconnect her call)"avni yeh dairy...."
Avni:"oh yeh...yeh meri dairy hai...bachpan ki...main likha karti thi jab main choti thi..."
Neil:(nervously) "aah avni...can I read it..."
Avni:(laughs)"neil....isme puchne ki kya zarorat pardlo....tumhata hak hai...."
Neil:"nahi woh is liye...ki yeh tumhari dairy hai...or kisi or ki dairy nahi pardni chahiye..."
Avni:"per main toh tumhari hoon na..."(they shared a lovely eyelock....Neil breaking the eye lock sat next to avni on the bed.....and opened to the book and skipped 2-3 pages ....)
Date: July 10th 2017
Dear dairy...
Aag pata hai kya hua....neela maa or maine humhari favorite movie dekhi....uske baad neela maa ne muhje ice treat di....neela maa kitni acchi hai....har wakt(time) muhje kush rakhne ki kosis karti hain....per main kya karo meri kismat hi esi hai...accha yeh sab chordo....or ek great news suno.....aaj humne aapni tayari complete ki....or kal...kal main milongi dayavani Mehta se....kal hogi mere badle ki suruyat...
Entry ends....
Neil flips the page.....
Date:July 11th 2017
Dear dairy....
Argh main us langur ka chatni bana dongi.....kitna accha plan tha...sab chupat kar diya....pata hai...main aaj xyz point (same mountain by water....Avneil FIRST Meeting spot) thi....or wahan ek langur aaya...or uski wajah se hum dono....hum dono pani main ghir gaye....or jab meri ankhe kholi .....Toh...toh woh langur muhje pakra hua tha....main usko wahi samja diya....... per muhje uske saath pura din bitana para...last main pata chala woh police wala hai....shayad ishi liye langur tha....police walon se toh muhje bachpan se hi problem thi.....
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Neil:"accha bhai itni problem hai....muhje....or main langur..."
Avni:(cutely like a baby)"woh us time tumne mera plan chupat kiya tha...main kya karti...."(Neil smiles at her cutness and flips few more pages.....)
Date: may 28th 2017
Dear dairy....
Neil itna bhi bura nahi hai...balki woh bahut accha insan hai....dayavanti mehta neil is fayda utha rahi...rea se shaadi karke uske paise chahiye dayavanti mehta ko.... per main aapni behen ki zindagi barbad nahi hone de sakti....or dayavanti Mehta ko neil ke parivar ko ese hi dhuka dete hue nahi dekh sakti..... kal shaadi hai..muhje kuch bhi karke yeh shaadi rokni hogi....
Entry ends....
Neil flips to the next page....
Date:june 6th 2017
Dear dairy....
Pichale kuch dino main bahut kuch hua....I am married...to neil....now I am Mrs.neil kahana.....bahut kuch ho gaya ...or aag aag toh muhje pata chala ki neil...Neil janta hai...ki main avni hoon......or woh mera saath dega...muhje insaaf dega...Neil bahut accha ensan(person) hai.... Neil me pariwar wale bhi bahut acche hai....bebe...papa....or sweata aunty bhi...mana woh muhjese naraj hai.....Per main unhe manaogi.....maa keheti hai ki yeh hi mere perfect family hai....per main nahi manti.. main yeh deserve nahi karti.....pata hai....aag maa me muhje bataya ki jab main choti thi...toh mera ek hi sapna tha ki meri shaadi bahut dhoom dhaam se ho...per i guess maa or neela maa ke saath jo hua uske baad I never believed in love....or woh grand shaadi wala sapna bhi kahin peeche choot gaya.....
Entry ends.....
Neil:"tumhara grand wedding ka sapna tha....tumne bataya kyun nahi...."
Avni:"neil sapna tha........jab main 8 saal ki thi tab tha....or jab 10 saal ki hui....or meri life ne jo turn liya uske baad lakho sapne peeche choot gaye...."
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Neil:"waise tumhe pata hai...mera bhi sapna tha..grand wedding ka ...per juhi ke baad....chordo......"(he closes the book and keeps it on the side table.... he side hugs avni and talk to her about random thing.....when suddenly someone knock on their door....Neil opens it to find sweata...)
Neil:"mom...aap.. Kya hua..."
Sweata:" Neil...humhe tumse or avni se baat karni...ek min neche aaoge...."(Neil nodded and sweata leaves....)
Neil:"chalo mom ne neche bulaya..."(he helps avni and they both head down...)
In hall....all were gather....
Avni:"kya Hua...sab theek hai na..."
Neil:"mom bebe...bolo na kya baat hai..."
Bebe:"humne kuch decide kiya hai..."
Avneil:"kya..."
Neela:"ki hum tum dono ki wapas se shaadi karenge....."
Avneil:(not realizing what they just heard) "oh ok....(after it struck there head)"wait what...."
Riya:"actully maine tum dono ki baat suni...ki both of had a dream to do grand wedding...and neela aunty told me how ur wedding happend...so I told it it vidihut and we all thought why not get u guys married again......."
Avni:"thank you.....per ese kaise wapas se shaadi...."
Neela:"common beta...sabhi taraf se gift samaj lo..."
Priya:"haan di plz...sahe function karenge....haldi mehendi sangeet all...plz.."(Avneil look at each other than at all other and than smile and nod in agreements.....all become happy and cheer...)
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Avni:"so aap log bhi aana zaroor....."
Neil:"kyunki ab hogi avneil ki grand wedding.....with full masti and full romance...(pulling avni close)
Avni:"with teams... toh aap kiske saath hai...."
Neil:"team lardke wale ....yahin ki meri..."
Avni:"ya team lardki wali yahin ki meri..."
Neil:"waise aap log jiske bhi side ho....main toh hamesha apni avni ke side hoon...(winks)
Avni:"so are u all excited...for our wedding...cause hum toh bhai bahut zayada hai..."
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