《Avneil - being with you》forgiveness
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vidihut:"ab nahi bhagega.."
avni:"kaise.."
vidihut:"ek min....mishti.."
mishti:"haan papa.."
vidihut :"mera ek kaam karoge.."(mishti nodded and vidihut told in her ears and she giggled and showed thumbs up)
Avni:" kya plan hai..."
Vidihut:"kuch nahi tum bas jao or use baat karo...baki humpe chordo...."
Avni:"ok...(she goes in her room to see neil in the balcony....she goes near him)"neil...(Neil see her and starts to leave....he goes to the gate but it was not opening... )
Neil:"yeh gate kyun nahi khol raha....."
Avni:(also confused) "pata nahi...."
Mishti:(from outside) "angle ....superman jab tak aap aapna fight over nahi karte...this door won't open....."
Neil:"mishti plz door kholo..."
Vidihut:"no neil...pehele avni se baat karo...or hum ja rahe...avni call karna jab Neil man jaye ....."(they left)
Neil:"avni unhe bolo khole..."
Avni:"nahi.. pehele meri baat suno..."(Neil leaves to the balcony... avni follows him)"neil dekho I know maine galti ki....per main kya karti..mishti ki jaan ko khatara tha....(Neil was looking straight) "neil I know main hoon pagal....main hoon selfish...main tumhare...humhare bacche ke baare main nahi socha...I am sorry neil....plz muhje koyi bhi punishment dedo...(tears rolling down her eyes) but plz...plz muhje baat karo....I can't handle ur ignorance....muhje under se bahut hurt hota....plz neil I am sorry...."(she looks down crying .....Neil looked towards her....)
Neil:"avni uper dekho.....(avni looked at him....seeing tears in her eyes his heart hurted....he wiped those tears... )"avni I am sorry...meri wajah se tumhari ankho me ansu aaye...."(avni nodded her head in no)"avni main darr gaya tha....jab woh juhi ne gun chalayi muhje laga maine tumhe kho diya...maine humhare bacche ko kho diya... meri zindagi rook si gayi thi ek pal ke liye....ishi liye main tumse....I am so sorry...."
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Avni:"nahi neil galti meri thi tum kyun sorry bol rahe...."
Neil:"per..."
avni:"per wer kuch nahi...galti meri thi....tumhe pura hak hai muhje datne ka.... toh tum muhje danto ge..."
Neil:(strictly)"ok dantoga...."
Avni:(cutely) "lakin zara pyaar se..."(with pout)
Neil:(copying avni)"haan main bhi wahi kehe raha tha...dantoga per pyaar se..."(both looked at each other....they stared laughing....and shared a sweet hug....)
Avni:(breaking the hug)"accha chalo ...main vidihut ko call karti ki woh door khole...(she started leaving when neil pulled her gently so the baby is fine)
Neil:"itni jaldi kya hai..."
Avni:"kya kar rahe neil..."
Neil:"arre yaar shaadi ho gayi ...Pyaar ho gaya...bacche ho gaye "
Avni:"what..."
Neil:"sorry correction I mean hone wale hai...phir bhi (mimicking avni) kya kar rahe ho neil...."
Avni:"neil abhi time nahi hai romance ka...."
Neil:"romance ke liye time nahi bas 2 log chahiye hote...."
Avni:"wah...toh jao kisi or ko pakard ke romance karlo...."
Neil:"okay....(startes leaving...)
Avni:(pulles him back)"mai ese hi bol rahi thi...tum toh sach man liye..."
Neil:"ab kya kare ...jab wife romance ke liye na kare...toh fir muhje koyi or lardki find karna parega na..."
Avni:(angrily...but cutely...due to pregnancy harmones) "koyi or lardki ko dekh ke dikhao..."
Neil:(kissing her cheeks...)"arre meri cute wife....hum toh sirf tumpe marte hai....or zindagi bhar tumpe marte rahenge....because I love you my lady don..."
Avni:(smiles) "and I love u too my supercop..."
Avneil:(putting their hands on her belly ) " and we love u too baby...."(Neil kisses her belly)
Avni:"chalo ab main call karo...muhje bhook lag rahi..."(she calles vidihut and he comes and opens the door... )
In hall.....
Avni:"neil muhje bahut bhook lag rahi...."
Neil:"kya khana hai appko..."
Avni:(thinks)"ummmmm....pav bhaji...."
Mishti:"muhje bhi...."
Sweata:"okay main banati...."
Neil:"nahi mom wait...main banonga...."
Prakash:"tu akele nahi hum sab.. "
Vivan:"okay toh aaj gents kichen me or laidies plz aap relax ki giye... "
Mishti:"chacho...aap muhje kaise bhool gaye..."
Vivan:"oh sorry all laides and princess....an theek hai madam....(Mishti nods all laugh)
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