《Avneil - being with you》angry neil
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at evening vidihut was discharged......everybody went home....
at khanna house.....(in living room....all were seated....avni was lost and neela notice this)
neela:"avni beta....kya hua kuch para shani hia kya.."
avni:"nahi maa....."
neela:"kuch toh hai....neil beta tumhe kuch pata hai.."
neil:"nahi maa...waise bhi aapki beti muhje kabhi kuch bata ke kab karti.."(gets up and leaves)
avni:(teary eyes)"maa main aayi..."(she left)
sweata:"in dono ke beech fir kuch hua kya...yeh neil bhi na...woh esi halat main hai phir bhi esa sab karta...main na is tillu ko chordongi nahi.."
bebe:"aaj peheli baar tune acchi baat hi...main bhi tere saath hoon.."
neela:'aare aare...neil ese hi uspe gussa nahi hoga kuch hua hoga....neil avni se bahut pyaar karta.. toh i think humhe inme parnegi zarrorat nahi woh log dekh lenge.."
bebe:"hmm neela theek kehe rahi.."
in avneil room....(neil was sitting of the bed..... avni enters and locks the door she wipes her tears....neil sees her and gets up to go but avni held him)
neil:"avni leave me.."
avni:"nahi chorongi....kyun choron....tum mere sawal ka jawab do..."
neil:"main nahi donga.."
avni:"tumhe dena parega.... neil tum muhje ignor kyun kar rahe...maine kya kiya...."
neil:"avni leave me..."
avni:"nahi...pehele jawab do.."
neil:"tumne kya kiya...tumne kya nahi kiya yeh pucho....tumne aapni jaan khatare main dali ...mere bachhe ki jaan khatare main dali...mere bare main socha nahi...tumne kisi ke bare main nahi socha....maine bola tum nahi aayongi phir bhi zabardasti ghardi main beheti...jab tumhe meri baat suni hi nahi toh phir main tumse baat hi kyun karon.."(saying this he left)
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avni:(fell on the bed)"neil i know maine aapni or humhare bache ki zindagi khatare main dali per mishti ko main kuch kaise hone deti....woh bhi meri bachi hi hai...(wipes her tears) per ab main tumhe mana ke hi rahongi..."(she also goes down...)
in hall(all boys were sitting and playing and girls were in kitchen)
neela:"avni beta...kya hua kuch toh bol na.."
avni:"maa woh..(she tell her about why neil is angry)
neela:"toh neil coreect hi toh hai tujhe aapna dhayan rakhna chahiye tha na....tu uski baat kabhi nahi sunti...."
avni:"maa..."
riya:"sorry avni...maine bhi zid ki tabhi neil tumhe le gaya.....sorry meri wajah se yeh sab.."
avni:"nahi pagal hai kya tu.."
bebe:"accha use manane ka kuch socha..."
avni:"nahi.."
priya:"di ek kaam karo.."(tells in ears..)
avni:"thank you priya..but yeh kaam karenga.."
riya:"100 %"
avni:"okay.."
in hall (all boys were seated suddenly music started and all the girls come out wearing a saree and a umbrella and music started and all started rolling there umbrellas...)
avni :"(singing and all dancing behind her)
neil:(getting up to go but stopped by the neela and seweata by their umbrella)
avni:(holding her ears in front of him)"(holding his hand
neil:"
avni:(still holding hands)"
neil:"(pulls his hands away)
avni:(pulling him by his collar)"
neil:"
avni:(doing hand expressions)"
neil:"
avni:(giving her hand)"
neil:(pushing it away)"
avni:(in anger pushing him on the sofa)"
neil:(nodding as a kid)"
avni:"
neil:"
avni:"
neil:"
avni:(joining hands )"
neil:(pushing it aside)"(saying this he left to his room)
avni:(becoming sad)"nahi mana.."
riya:"dont worry man gayega.."
bebe:"beta tu ja use baat kar.."
avni:"woh bhag jata hia.."
vidihut:"ab nahi bhagega.."
avni:"kaise.."
vidihut:"ek min....mishti.."
mishti:"haan papa.."
vidihut :"mera ek kaam karoge.."(mishti nodded and vidihut told in her ears and she giggled and showed thumbs up)
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