《Avneil - being with you》leap.....
Advertisement
So guys i am here with my next update....
Hope u enjoy it....
Plz do vote and comment....
Also the silent reader if u don't than how will I know u like my story Or not....so plz do comment and vote....thank you....
Here we go....
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
Not much have changed in khana house....
After that day (raksha bandan) aman started living in khana house...aman and every bodys bond grews....few days later juhi also came back to khana house...she used to try to grab neil attension but mishti and sweata usally made is hard to achieve....aman also started to feel that juhi is here with the wrong intentions but used to forget it..thinking it's his imagination.....Avneil were getting more time to spend together at night...cause neil used to say he need this file that file and call Avni in the room fast...all understood his intentions and uncouraged beacuse they also wanted a little tillu tilli....juhi always was fuming in angry due to her plans flopping and avneil closeness.....she also was trying hard to earn mishti but our mishti always makes her plans fail....these all happend in these 2 weeks....
Present time....
Avni in her room..neil is sleeping ...she just woke up when she gets a call...
Avni:(on call while going in balcony so dosent disturb neil)"hello....kyun bol raha hai...."
Girl:(over call)"hey avni ....muhje nahi pehechan...."
Avni:"aare ...riya tum..."(guys this is not ria avni sister....this is her collage friend...riya...I will show pic...very soon....and ur get to know about her and her role as the story progresses...)
Riya:"yes pehechana.....finally...or bol kaisi ho..."
Avni:"theek hoon....or tum kaisi ho..."
Riya:"main bhi mast....as usual..."
Advertisement
Avni:" or bol achanak meri yaad kaise...."
Riya:"oh woh main kuch din baad india aa rahi...."
Avni:"really kab or kahan..."
Riya:"2 din main....Mumbai...."
Avni:"that's great yaar...Main bhi mumbai main hoon..."
Riya:"really than u have to come pick me up..."
Avni:"zaroor why not...tu rahegi kahan..."
Riya:"woh meri behen hai...uske saath..she is living at her friends house...."
Avni:"oh... okay.... chal fir jaldi aa..milke bahut sari baate karnge...."
Riya:"hmm abhi main chali....baad main baat karti.....bye.."
Avni:"hmm bye..."(cuts the call see neil awake...) tum kab gage..."
Neil:"abhi thori der pehele.....kise baat kar rahi thi...."
Avni:( very excitedly) "oh meri collage ki best friend...Riya...pata hai woh 2 din baad india aa rahi Mumbai...."
Neil:"oh that's nice....accha chalo...fresh ho gao...neche chalte hai...breakfast pe...."
Avni:"hmmm"
At breakfast.....
Avneil enter....everyone already present....
Neil:"good morning...."
All:"good morning...."
Bebe:"kya hua avni beta...itni dal dal kyun ho...."
Avni:"pata nahi bebe....subhe se accha nahi lag raha... "
Neela:"are u okay beta..."
Avni:"hmmn maa don't worry..."
Neil:"tumne muhje kyun nahi bataya...."
Avni:"woh i didnt want to tense u..."
Neil:"avni what do u do of u.....chalo doctor or pass chale..."(starts to get up but avni stops him)
Avni:"neil I am fine....don't worry...."
Prakash:"beta neil sahi bol raha..."
Avni:"nahi papa ji...I am fine...triedness ki wajah se hoga.. "
Bebe:"are u sure..."
Avni:"yes...."
Bebe:"okay ..."
All were having breakfast.....
Mishti:"angle....aap mera favorite.. custured bana sakti...."
Advertisement
Juhi:"main banati na mishti...."
Mishti:"nahi muhje sirf angle ke haanth ka khana...."
Juhi:" per mishti..."
Aman:"it's okay juhi....Mishti..ke liye di bana degi...right di..."
Avni:"haan main bana deti hoon."(she gets up to go but her vision get bad and she faints...Neil catches her on time...all yell avni/di/angle.....
Aman:"di anke kholo...."
Bebe:"avni...ise kya hau...."
Sweata:"tillu ise under leke ja....Main doctor bolati... "
Neil pick avni up and takes her in their room... he makes her lay on the bed...and is continuesly patting her face .....
Neil:"avni utho na...."
Sweata:"neil doctor....( she leads the doctor in.... they all go step out .....Neil is walking back and forth in front of door......all are worried...Juhi is really happy..... suddenly doctor come out....)
Neil:(rushes to him) " doctor how is my wife woh theek toh hai use hua kya...."
Doctor:"mr khana...relax...your wife is fine....it just little sickness....congrats aap father bane wale....."
Neil:(not realizing what doctor say...)"see main use bolata aaram karo per woh...wait what...appne kya khaha.......Main father...."
Doctor:(smiling) "yes mr khana aap father bane wale hai....she is pregnant...."
Neil:"really...(to sweata ...)mom main dad ban gaya.....dad...u heard na..."(prakash nods to doctor) dose she know...can I meet her...."
Doctor:" yes u can...and she dosent know u tell...."
Neil:"thanks doctor......"( he goes in ..everyone is still out side...the door is closed...)
Neil enter to see avni eyes closed...he goes and sits next to her...he kisses her forehead due to which she opens her eyes....
Avni:"neil muhje ..Kya Hua..."
Neil:"avni muhje baat mat karo.....(to baby but avni doesn't understand) aap kaise ho..."
Avni:"neil tum kaise baat kar rahe..."
Neil:"aapne baby se...."
Avni:"baby se ka kya matlab yahan or toh koyi...(she relized....her eyes became watery... touching her stomach) "Neil...main main "
Neil:"haan avni...tum maa or main papa bane wala hoon....ur pregnant..."
Avni:(hugging neil) "thank you neil..."
Neil:"I love u...."
Avni:"I love u too...."
Avneil:(keeping there hands on avni tummy) "we love u three...."(they laugh and hug each other)
。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
Hope u enjoy it...
Plz do vote and comment...
Next update after 70votes and 60comment ...
Guys important...actully in naamkaran it didnt show Avneil moments with the baby....and Avni pregnancy staff...like her mood swing and all...I want to show that...because I my slef want to see it..so by including in my story maybe we all can imagen it in naamkaran.....
Precap:"juhi reaction for avni pregnancy....family and avneil....who is riya and her enter will bring what twist...."
REMEBER 70 votes and 60comment
Advertisement
- In Serial145 Chapters
Titan's Throne
30 year old Bastian Smith died and reincarnated in a different body in a world different from Earth. The body he was in was that of a 12 year old abandoned boy of noble birth. Bastian was at a loss. This new body also had a dragon looking tattoo on his chest. When he touched it something strange occurred. A powerful voice resounded in his mind: “To the owner of the Titan’s Mark be warned. You shall bear great power but you also bear a curse. Anyone who bears this mark is a child of I, the Great Ambevilius. Emperor of all that is under the heavens. If slay or subdue 1000 mark bearers, you shall become a successor of mine. This is not a destiny you can escape, so fight in the name of my glory!” At this moment the memories belonging to this body merged with his own. This was the Sovereign Continent; a place where cultivation is everything, a place with many wonders, a place where only the strong are just! Bastian then began his long and arduous journey…to earn the right to sit on the Titans Throne! --- Novel by Patriarch Onion (Also the author of Solitary Sword Sovereign) and hosted on theonionjunktion on royal road with the commentary of the beautiful and handsome Cookie. Please support my patreon, i really could use your support. Please also visit my facebook page. Follows and pledges will lead to more chapters guys. Thank you for reading my story so farhttps://patreon.com/theonionjunktionhttps://facebook.com/TheonionjunktionxComments and criticism are always welcome! Twitter @onionjunktion95, Instagram @theonionjunktion
8 187 - In Serial6 Chapters
The Demon Lord and I
A world where different races coexist in peace and live in harmony. The humans,werebeasts,undines,elves,dwarves, and many other races.The peace lasted for hundreds of millennia till the GREAT WAR came. It's started with the Gods fighting over power then the world got affected. Many races started fighting with each other like elves and the dwarves, demons and heavenly beings, werebeasts fought each other because of their differences.Many died even the immortal gods got killed by some unknown forces. Then after 600 years all the races and the gods reconciled and have a truce. Still there are still races who still fought with each other.and the year now is 267 A.G.W (After Great War).Bare with me here I'm not good with english...this story is only a teaser(depends if someone want's me to continue this)
8 133 - In Serial9 Chapters
Tools of Slaughter: Story of a Human
In a world filled with war and horror, she was a tool of slaughter. She fought her way emotionlessly through the war for her masters' commands. But it isn't until they die that she realizes how much the people she killed meant to her. ... People say that being immortal would be an incredible dream come true, but they are liars. Immortality is a nightmare. People also say that they would rather have no feelings than to feel hurt. But she would rather feel something than to feel nothing at all; especially when people who care about her die right in front of her, under her own hands. She would do anything to become human. To live, to feel, to die. To be in control of her own fate. Even if it means losing everything.------------------------------------------------
8 158 - In Serial14 Chapters
Loving him from afar [Completed]
Ruby Williams has had crushes that came by and went within a few days or weeks and she knew it was going to stay that way. However, when she encountered Sam Miller in her sophomore year, she knew this wasn't just a mere crush. A short story of unrequited love, filled with heartbreak and regrets. ..."That night, I got my heart broken by someone who wasn't even mine to begin with."...🥇Highest rankings🥇#1 first heartbreak#1 highschoolcrush#1 untold love#2 lettinggo#3 teenage crush#4 highschool crush#5 non fiction#7 first crush#12 letting go#19 one sided#20 unrequited #23 unrequitedlove#40 regret
8 183 - In Serial10 Chapters
Fairy tail Ships Comics
Highest Rank #44 in Fanfiction 10/29/16This is for all the fairy tail fans out there😊GaLe, Nalu, Jerza, Gruvia Comic strips/fan art Funny, Romantic, Sad Please enjoy!!DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE FAN ART FEATURED IN THIS BOOK. I DID NOT CREATE ANY OF IT . I FOUND ALL OF THE ART ON PINTEREST AND DEVIANART. HIRO MASHIMA OWNS FAIRY TAIL. I wish I could give credit to every artist for each individual art piece featured in this book but I have neither the time nor the patience to find that information, sorry.
8 77 - In Serial16 Chapters
A Nobody Special
An old man is dying... fervent atheist. No family, that remembers him... not like he tried to be remembered. He just faded from the minds and hearts of those closest, he felt his life slipping away slowly.... worry of living slipping from his tired old mind. Then he dies. ,What happens next? Read the story to find out.... (will be adding more of the content thingys as i go along.... cause it happens when i feel like it) Mature in the sense that this isn't a light read... might be depressing...
8 145

