《Avneil - being with you》Avneil
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So guys here with my next part...
Hope u enjoy it....
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And guys my school is going to end in a month....so there is a little but load also by the end of May my final exams are coming....so sorry if i am not being able to update frequently....
Thank you guys for this.....my story got 341 ff award...do keep reading and loving the story..thanks...😘😘😘
Here we go.....
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So next morning.....
The birds were chirping....
The wind was cool....
After the storms everything's was peacefully and blooming....
In the room where avniel slept...(now u guys might be thinking door lock tha...main under kaise aayi...toh main aap log ke liye pura ghar durne ke baad window dekha...and it was open all night...but I got to know in morning so I went in 😉😉😉😂😂😂)
Neil wakes up to see his love of life...his world laying in his arms......he kisses her forehead....Due to which she wakes up....
Avni:"good morning neil..."
Neil:"good morning jaan..."(to which avni blushed..she get up to go but neil pulles her back....)
Avni:"neil kya kar rahe ho....."
Neil:"biwi ke saath romance.....ab ghar pe toh sab mere pyaar ke dushman bane hai....toh yahan karne do....(while kissing her neck...)
Avni:"neil dekh time kya hua hai...(she checks) omg 10 baj gaye....Neil hume ghar bhi jana hai...Plz...."
Neil:"no....."
Avni:"neil baki sab or bebe kya kahingi..."
Neil:"yahi ki..hum unki wish puri kar rahe. Hain."
Avni:"wish...."
Neil:"kyun tumhe yaad nahi..."
Avni:"kya neil saf saf batao...."
Flashback...(guys this already happend at the beganing of my story...if u haven't read the part do read it....it's called...Neil's surpise....)
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avni:(tensed and than realized something)"by the way what ever happen between us was good and not wrong"
neil:(shocked)"avni kya ?!!!"
avni:"haan ab bebe ki wish puri ho jayegi "
neil:(confused)"kyun si wish"
avni:"tillu ka billu ki wish"
neil:"tillu ka billa??(just then he realized that avni was talking about neil's kid)
avni:(laughing inside)"haan tillu ka billu yeh fir billi jo bhi ho "
neil:"wait wait wait avni, you are going to far , i was just kidding ham dono ke bech esa kuch nahi hua "
avni:(started laughing out loud, neil totally confused)"toh main bhi joke he kar rahi hoon"
neil:(little angry)"avni!!!! and whats this tillu ka billu , it sounds so weird"
Flashback ends....
Neil:"ab yaad aya.....tillu ka billa ya billi...."
Avni:"haan woh...."(suddenly neil phone rings...)
Neil:"yahan bhi koyi kabab me hadi....koyi muhje mere wife ke saath quality time kyun nahi spend karne deta....."(Avni giggles and he picks up the phone...)
Sweata:"tillu kahan hi tum log...bhool gaye kya aaj pooja hai ghar pe....."
Neil:"pooja???"
Sweata:"main kya karon iska...tillu tu acp Neil khana toh hai...per demaag nahi tere main...aaj raksha bandan hai....shaam ko pooja hogi...or rakhi bhi bandni hai...yaad hai...."
Neil:(bites his tongue) opps bhool gaya...haan haan hun aaye....."(he cute the call)
Avni:"kya hua...."
Neil:"aaj raksha bandan hai.....or main bhool gaya ab Kya karonga...."
Avni:"don't worry gift ghar pe hain....maine pehele hi le liya tha...."
Neil:"oh avni ur great....thanks god Verna pata nahi sab mera kya haal karte...especially karina....chalo ready hoke inkalna bhi hai..."(he starts to leave but see avni is lost somewhere)
Neil:"kya hua gum ho....."(shaking her)
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Avni:"woh woh kuch nahi...."(she goes and gets ready.....)
After that they set off for home....
Mean while in khana house....
All the preparations are going....karina and maddi bua have gone out to get rakhis....."
But...some where....
Man1:(over call):"kaam hoga sir....."
Man 2:"good ab aaye ga muzza....just wait and watch mrs. Avni Neil khana...."
Back in the car.....
Avniel were heading home and avni was lost some where.....
Neil:"avni yeh ganna accha hai na..."(no response) "avni....(so response ...shaking her)avni..."
Avni:"haan haan neil kya hai..."
Neil:(noticing this)"avni kya hua hai tumhe.... jabse mom se baat hui tabse dekh raha hoon.. tum kahin koyi koyi si ho...kuch baat hai toh bata na..."
Avni:"nahi nahi koyi baat nahi hui....bus ese hi..."(Neil was going to ask but at the piont they reached home....)
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Hope u enjoyed it....
Plz do vote and comment...
Next update after 70votes and 60comment
And do comment who do you think the men were ...what kaam were they talking about....
Precap:"new entry....who do u think it is.. and bad or good....and why do u think avni is lost...."
Remember 70votes and 60comment ..
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