《Avneil - being with you》one in all means....
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So guys i here with my next part...
I know sabko bahut intazar kar wa liya ab title dekh ke toh pata hi chal gaya hoga ki surprise kya tha or agar nahi toh....read karlo pata chal gayega....😉😉😉
Okay so without wasting time let's get in it....
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As soon as the audio ended petals started falling on avni....she wiped her tears and looked up...the light went on and the door opened...she walked out to the hall...
Sweata:"avni yeh le tera liye diya neil ne..."
Avni:(face lit up hearing of neil)"neil ...neil yahan hai kya..."
Sweata:"nahi beta subhe sehi gayab hai...yeh mere dressing table pe tha note ke saath bola avni ko do..so I did..."
Avni:"okay mummy ji..."(Sweata left and avbi read the note...)
Note starts...
Hi wify..muhje bahut miss kar rahi right..(avni nodded like a little kid...) well bus thori der or.. accha ab chalo jaldi ja ke bahar ek ghari hai usme beheto....or haan no question..see u soon wify 😘😘😘
Note ended...
Avni did as said and went out side to see a black car waiting for her...with a driver out side...he opened the gate for her and avni sat in and the car ride started....
Avni:(in mind)"neil ne mera aaj ka din bahut special banaya...per woh hai kahna i want to see him hug him....neil pura din tumse nahi mili..kahan ho yaar...."(her thoughts were broken when the car stopped and few ladys come and took her to a tent like room....and gave her a note..)
Note starts....
Thora or intazar wify...intazar ka phal mita hota hai...ab yeh log tumhe acche se ready karke mere pass layenge...waiting to see u..love you...😘😘
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Note ended....
One lady:"maam aap bahut lucky hai..kitne loving or caring husband mile aapko jo aapke liye yeh sab kar rahe....."
Avni:(smiles)"hmmm lucky toh main hoon....."(they make her get ready and all....)
Avni dress....
The ladys lead her to a open area where there were lights lead a the way....
She followed the light and it led to the beautiful sight ever
A beach.....with a little table patio and a little house by the water....
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he was amazed by the veiw.....
Avni:(calling out for neil) "neil kahan hi tum plz aao na....dekho bahut tarpa chuke....aao warna main gussa ho gaongi..."(folding her arms and pouting...)
Neil:(to himself) "chalo beta..warna teri jansi ki rani tuhje kacha chaba gayegi...."(he comes out and stands in from of avni...)
Neil dress.....
Neil was just staring at avni and same with avni...they both were lost in each other beauty.....than neil comes forward....takes avni hand and bends down....
Neil:"avni tum janti ho how much I love you...but I Wil say it again...Avni I love you so much and jabse tum meri zindagi main aayi meri zindagi main rang bar diya tumne...muhje pata nahi tha pyaar itna khubsurat hota hai...tumne muhje iski khubsurati dikhayi...muhje is kabil samaja ki main tumhe pyaar kar sakun woh sari khushi de sakun jo tum he kabhi nahi mili....i am sorry avni I know mere se bahut sari galtiyan hui or mera past humhe haunt kar raha hai..per jab tak main zinda hoon...Main sirf tumse pyaar karonga marte dam tak....(Avni put her plam on his mouth and nodded her head in no ...removing her hand) nahi avni muhje aa bolen do....man tumhe har woh khushi dena chahati jo tum deserve karti ho...Kya tum muhje tumhe pyaar karne ka ..khushiya dene ka hak dogi...kya tum muhje ko aapna baongi.....(Avni had tears in her eyes...she nodded her head ....Neil took out a ring and made avni wear it...)
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Avni made neik stand and hugged him tight....Neil huged her back....after that neil pointed toward the sand and...
I love you was written on the sand with lights around it....
Neil:"chalo ab kahna kha le...."
Avni:"hmm...(they had dinner and after finishing dinner) "so what's nexts..."
Neil:"itni excitement...."
Avni:"ab aaj subhe se itne acche surprise mile excitement toh hogi hi na..."
Neil:"okay close ur eyes....."
Avni:"per..."
Neil:"avni yaar plz..."
Avni:"okay..."( Avni closed her eyes and neil took out a box from his pocket)
Neil:"ab kholo..."(she opens her eyes too see a beautiful necklace.....
(The design is like the 1st pic but the letters are like the 2nd pic....N and A)
Avni:"neil...it's it's beautiful...."(neil moves her hair aside and makes her wear the necklace after that he kisses her neck to which she moans his name....than he goes in front of her takes her hand and says...)
Neil:"will you dance with me...."(she noddes her head in yes......)
They dance on the song mahubaat barsa dena tu sawan aaya hai....
After dancing on this song they both ended in a pose like this....
They both were lost in each other eyes...when the sound of thunder broke it and it started to rain......neil and avni ran to the cottage.....they were a little wet.....
Inside cottage...
Neil:"barish bahut ho rahi....bahar jana muskil hai...."
Avni:"hmmm...."(avni starts shivering....Neil takes his coat of and puts it in her...they share a cute eyelock......and the eyelock is broken by a loud thunder....which makes avni scared and she hugs neil tightly....he hugs her back to indicate all is ok....than he pulles out of the hug and kisses her forehead, followed by cheeks and lips.....after they broke the kiss due to oxygen lack...avni turns around and gose stands by the window...Neil smile at her antics and goes to her....moves her hair aside and kisses her neck and back....than he turns her around and picks her up and walks to the bedroom....he puts avni on the bed and closes the door of the room.....(*ab door close kar diya so how do i know what happend inside...😉😉😉😉when door opens only than I will know...)and they became on in all means.....😘😘😘😍😍😍
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