《Avneil - being with you》surprise...

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So guys i here with my next part....

Plz do vote and comment....

Some of you gueesed some didn't but I would like to credit for getting it right......so without letting you guys die of curiosity let me tell u what's it was...in the update...

So let's start...

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In morning avneil room...

Avni wakes up in the morning and dosnt find neil next to him....she thinks that neil dosent do anything in the morning without her morning kiss......

Avni:"restroom me hoga..avni don't worry..."(she lookes towards the restroom and sees the door open and lights off....)"wahan bhi nahi hai...neil gaya kahan...muhje tension ho rahi....."(suddenly she sees a note on the table with a rose..)

Avni opens the note and reads it....

Note starts...

A rose for my rose....(Avni blushed) I know ki tum muhje dhoor rahi thi...per main gayab..ab soch rahi hogi...kahan gaya..morning kiss bhi nahi li...toh uski barpai tum karogi....waise tum soch rahi hogi makn kahan gaya...(Avni noddes) woh main nahi batonga....or han...ab jao fresh ho gao....jaldi...go ..love u my jaan...(Avni blushed again.)..or han blush karna band karo...tum bahut ...age ke liye bacha lo.....chalo jaldi se ready to wify...or closet main dekho.....

Note ended.....

Avni:"yeh kya tha...or neil kahan gaya...closet main kya hai ....(she goes and opens the closet... there was a gift with a note in it...)

Note starts....

Dear wify...ab yeh jaldi se pehen ke aao....or niche gao.....waise yeh tumpe bahut acchi lagegi...waiting to see u in it...ab jaldi ready to....😘😘😘

Note ended...

Avni blushed reading it and got ready....

The gift neil gave her was a western dress...

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Avni got ready and went to the mirror...where she found another note stuck to the mirror

Note starts....

Hey beautiful...yeh dress itni acchi NAHI thi..per tumne peheni toh mera piont of view change....bahut acchi lag rahi hoon....

Ab chalo...niche gao...

Note ends.....

Avni goes down....while walking down the stairs...flowers start falling on her ..

(Imagen avni instead of her)

Than she went to the dining table...all were sitting...she came and sat all gave her compliments....but when she asked about neil bebe gave her another note....

Note starts.....

Arre wify..... keep patience...tumhe mere bina ek pal bhi nahi rehe sakti....acha chalo apni anke baand karo or socho tumhari favorite dish....(Avni did as said and saw poha in her mind...when she opened her eyes she found poha in front of her)....tan tana.....your favorite poha from humko cafe....ab jaldi se breakfast karo...(Avni happy face turned into sadness...)arre arre..sad face kyun don't worry main breakfast kar liya...relax..ab tum bhi karlo....love you...enjoy....

Note ended....

Avni looked at the delicious poha in front of her eyes...than at everyone who was smiling.... than she started eating her poha...

After finishing the servant brought a flowers bouquet....

Avni:"yeh kisne diya..."

Servant:"maam..bahar yeh delhke gaya kaha aapke liye...."

Avni take is and finds a note in it.....

Note starts......

Roses are red

voilet are blue

Your my sunshine

And I love you....

Note ends....(*so sorry guys i know it sucks but this is the onky thing ghat I could think of related with rose and love)

Sweata:"arre prakash ji...aapko apne bete se sikna chahiye....dekhiye kitne acche surpize deta hai.. aapne muhje kabhi nahi diya...."

Bebe:"oh madam madona...zayada fly mat kar...pehele avni jaisi ban to......"

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Sweata:"nahi bebe Avni jaisa koyi nahi..meri beti lakho main ek hai..."(huges avni)

In vidihut house....

Vidihut:( on call )" muhje uske bare main info chahiye...abhi.....I don't care do it fast..."(cuts the call)

Vivan:(entering) "kiske bare main bhai..."

Vidihut:"kuch NAHI..."

Vivan:"bhai bataye na...mishti ke bare main hai kya..."

Vidihut: "nahi vivan...woh bechari toh pata nahi kahan hai..kaisi halat main hain..."

Vivan:"toh fir...."

Vidihut:"kuch nahi woh...(he got a call)...majn tuhjese baad main baat karta...."(he goes)

Priya:"kya Hua vivan..."

Vivan:" bhaiya ne...mishti ki fikar ki....I know woh use pyaar karte but...us meher...(became angry) uski wajah se mishti ko ese treat karte...I wish mishti mil gaye...."

Priya:"don't worry kuch nahi hoga...."

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So guys hope you enjoyed it....

Plz do vote and comment...

Thanks for support....

Hope u get the idea of what's going to happend next....guess..guess...

Next update after 60 votes and 50 comment

Precap...:"neil continues his surprise.... dose vidihut love mishti...why is he angry on juhi...what happend in the past...."

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