《Avneil - being with you》Holi
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So guys i here with my next part......
Hope u enjoy it....
Plz do vote and comment....
And as avneil didnt celebrate holi...In the show...Here I present to u guys Avneil's first holi after marrige...😂😂bahut zayad advertisement ho gayi ab sheeda story pe aate hain...
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Next mornings when neil woke up he saw avni sleeping next to him....she had her face cover.....neil slowly got some color in his hands from a plate full of colors he put under the bed yesterday ...
Neil:"ab dekho avni main kaise challenge jeeta hoon..."(he pulles the cover and throws the color But to his bad luck avni was not there but few pillows and a wig was there...)
Avni:(come laughing from behind) "chu chu chu chu chu....bechara neil...fail ho gaya...maine bola tha rang pehele main la gaon gi....."(saying this she take the some color and throws on neil but neil hides under the blanket.....)
neil:"tumhe kya lagta hai .... that you are very smart well you are but not as smart as me.....color toh tumpe pehele main hi lagaonga......:
avni:"okay lest see...."
sweata:(from outside)"avni......"
avni:"aayi mummy ji..."
at hall.......(all approached in the hall and was waiting.....except juhi..)
dresses.....
prakash:
sweata:
neela:
juhi:
bebe:
mishti:
avni:
neil:
avni:(putting color on bebe ):happy holi bebe.....(hugges her..)
bebe:"happy holi puttar..."
all put colors on each other except neil and avni and juhi also cause she was not present.....than all went out in the garden area to play with all.....
And the colors where set at the side tables....
Mishti:"yeah....angle main gaon kehlne...."
Avni:"haan...."
Everyone was buzy in playing....there were so many things...like bhaang ka stall and big pool in middle....and what not....
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Juhi:(entering and seeing everyone playing holi...then her eyes goes and neil who is standing with his frinds and avni who is far away from neil standing by bebe....)"ab dekho avni neil ko pehele rang main lagaon gi....or tum dekhti rahogi...."(saying this she moved towards neil with some color in her hands....while neil was going towards the family members....and avni was having a taal of colors in her hand....)
Juhi:(approaching neil)"hi neil happy Holi..."
Neil:"happy holi...."(she was going to out color when avni was walking by and some kids came running and pushed her due to which the plate of color in her hand went in air and landed on juhi's head....and avni triped ....)
Avni piont of veiw......starts
I was walking with a plate of colors in my hand...but few kids come running and pushed me due to which the plate of colors went in the air flying and I was about to fall on the floor...I closed my eyes in the fear of getting hurt ....but I didn't feel the pain...when I open my eyes I saw the most amazing eyes staring at me....I didnt fall but I was in the arms of my lovely husband......we had a cute eyelock and forgot about the surrounding...I don't know why but when ever I see neil I get lost into some different world and well I guess this i the power of love.......our eyelock was broken when I heard juhi screaming....Neil made me stand and what I saw next I couldn't do anything but laugh ...juhi was standing fully covered in color.......she couldn't see cause color went in her eyes ....and it was hurting....I was really controlling my laughter when I heard neil laughing and all others too.....I signed neil to don't laugh...but neil couldnt hold it...
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Avni's point of view ends.....
Neil's point of view starts....
Juhi was going to put color on me...I didn't want that cause I wanted avni to put it first.....suddenly I saw that few kids come running and pushed avni which made her trip...I held her before she can fall.....her eyes were tightly closed.....I guess she was in fear of getting hurt when she didn't feel any pain she openedher eyes...and our eyes met....I always just get lot on her....this never happend with juhi....maybe that was just a crush and avni is my love true love....we were lost in our world when I heard juhi screaming...omg she always ruins my moments...I hate her for that...then I made avni stand proper....when I look at her ...I saw that the plate of color avni was holding was on her head and she couldnt see anything so she was screaming...I couldn't hold it anymore and laughed like a crazy person...well it was not only me all were laughing at her....... and she was just screaming "aahh it's hurting....bahut jal raha hai..."...Avni signalled me not to laugh but I couldn't...it was not me...what can i do when she look like a crazy person........
Neil's point of view ends......
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Avneil:" happy holi to all reader. Or should we say for u guys belated happy holi . Well for us it just started.....thanks for reading our story...and giving so much love to us......
Keep reading and enjoying our love story....one more thing...plz tell write madam.. what u would like to see...in this holi celebration... ."
Neil:"plz do tell and make sure it is related to romance...(winking)"
Avni:(hitting his shoulders slightly )"chheee...neil yahan toh mat bolo...."
Neil:"kya avni...dekhaye yeh ase hi karti hai..or agar aap sab log mere se pyaar karte hai toh meri wish puri kijiye...I want to romance with her and this depends on u guys only....(making a sad pout)..."
Avni:" waise yeh sab chordiye and plz vote and comment so yeh story aage or lambi jaye..."
Neil:"oh haan..."
Avniel:"yeh toh bus trailer tha...picture abhi baki hai mere dost..😉😉😉.."
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So guys thanks for the comment and votes....
Plz do vote and comment on this on too....
And yeah as Avneil said picture abhi baki hai mere dost...this is just beginning the whole holi festival is left...😉😉😉
Plz do vote and tell what u want to see...
Next update after 50 votes and 40 comment
Precap:" more holi festivals...who do u think will put color first avni or neil..."
Remember....50votes and 40 comments...
Love u guys.....😗😗😗
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