《Avneil - being with you》Truth..
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the song ended but avneil were still lost in each other....
everyone:"ahem ahem..."
avneil separate
neil:"ahhhh so bebe how was my song...."
bebe:"bahut accha dil cho liye mera toh per i am sure avni's also..."(this made avni blush and neil also blushed...)
mishti:"aap log phirse tomato ban gaya...kyun"
all laughed at mishti's innocent except juhi she was so angry that she left for her room without anyones notice....but then something struck sweata..
sweata:"ek min....phirse ka kya mutlab.......yeh log pehele bhi blush kare...."
mishti:"blush ..blush kya hota hai...or yeh log brush nahi tomato bane the aaj subhe wahi abhi be bane..."
neela:"mishti woh...brush naho blush hota hai...or woh sab chordo...subhe kya hua tha..."
avneil:"nahi...kuch nahi.."
avni:"mishti chalo main aapko khana kilaon...."
neil:"haan mishti chalo.... "
bebe:"per use bolne toh do subhe hua kya .."
mishti:"woh aaj subhe kitchen main.."
avni:"nahi..."
neil:"mishti aap apne kamare main jao i will tell them okay..."(saying this they send her to her room...)
prakash:"batao to hua kya.."
bebe:"neil aaj subhe kya hua tha..."
neil:(blushing)"woh..woh...muhje ek phone aaya tha...(he picks up phone and acts like talking to dd and goes to his room....)
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all:"avni..."
avni:"woh woh..muhje bhi ek call uthana tha...bye"(she also rushed behind neil)
in avneil room...
avni enters and shuts door behind her and looks up and sees neil with his phone....they look at each other and what happened and burst out laughing..
avni:(controlling her laughter...)"yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua...."
neil:"main...main kya kiya..."
avni:"tumne hi toh woh holi keheli..."
neil:"per main toh romance kar raha tha...or romance karna mera huk hai..."
avni:"neil....toh kya meri wajah se hua.."
neil:"maine ye kab kaha.."
avni:"tumhara mutlab toh wahi tha.."
neil:"avni tum pagal ho gayi kya.."
avni:"main nahi per tum ho gaye ho..."
they both look at each other then burst out laughing again
avni:"hum sacch me pagal ho gaye hain.."
neil:"haan"
avni:(avni becoming serious) "neil woh muhje tumse ek bahut zarori baat karni hai.."
neil:"kya hua avni...bolo..."
avni:"woh mishti..woh"
neil:(getting tensed)"kya hua avni"
avni:"mishti tumhari beti hai.."
neil:(shocked)"kya ..."
avni:"han mishti hi woh bacchi jiski baat juhi kar rahi thi..."
neil:"per ..per..."
avni:"neil mere pass prove hai.."(she shows him DNA reports which are positive)
neil:"per ye kab..."
avni:"woh actully...."
flashback starts...
that day when neil and mishti slept on avni's lap...
avni:(in mind)"agar mishti boli ki woh wahan akele reheti thi then maybe mishti hi neil ki beti ho sakti hai...yes main yeh pehele kyun nahi soch...mishti bhi 5 saal ki hain...vidihut ke saath reheti thi...toh maybe neil is mishti's father...... muhje pehele prove lena hoga....(she takes hair piece from mishti comb ...and was about to take neil but she saw her comb and remembered that juhi used it so it had her hair...so she took those instead of neil's.)"kal jake test karvalongi.."
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flashback ends....
avni:"phir main dusare din hospital gayi or...
flashback starts...(at hospital)
at cabin of doctor......
avni:"hi doctor main I come in...."
doctor:"oh hi ...aaye na....."
avni:"doctor woh maine test kar vaye the uske reports aa gaye...."
doctor:"ji haan....reports positive hai..."
avni:"positive sacchi...(she became very excited)
doctor:(smiling) "ji ....per ab muhje lagta hai aapko apne pati ko bata dena chahiye.....ye baat unko Janna zarori hai...."
avni:"ji doctor thank you for help ...."
doctor:"no problem...pleasure is mine....."
flashback ends....(*people who guessed avni and DNA test reports congratulation u were correct..)
avni:"toh ese hua tha.."
neil:"avni tumne muhje bataya kyu nahi"
avni:"main pehele prove lene chahati thi...ab hum juhi ko bol sakte hain..."
neil:"haan per abhi nahi she might be sleeping...maybe tomorrow..."
avni:"okay..."
neil:"hum mishti se mil sakte hain plz..."
avni:"haan chalo.."
in mishti's room....
mishti was fast asleep due to the triedness of party....neil goes and kisses her forehead....
neil:"mishti ab makn tumhe kabhi bhi kuch nahi hone donga..tumne un 5 saal main bahut saha per ab nahi...ab tumhe sirf kushiya milegi...."(he said as a tear escaped his eye...avni who witnessed this was crying...beacuse she remember all her past and her fathers death...and she ran outside to the garden area.....)
in garden area....
avni was sitting on the bench looking at the sky...
avni:(crying)"ma papa aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hai...plz aagao...ek baar papa gale laga lo plz......bus ek bar apni beti ko hug karlo....i am sorry ....mari wajah se sab hota hai...sab meri galti hai....main deserve nahi karti kuch ishi liye aap dono muhje chord ke gaye na....main bahut buri hoon....(she was crying when she felt a hand on her shoulder and quickly wiped her tears....and turned to see neil there...)
avni:" neil woh...muhje neend aa rahi hai...."( she tried to go but neil held her wrist and pulled her....)
neil:"avni ......"(she couldn't hold it anymore and hug him and cryed...)
avni:"neil ....papa or mama ki yaad aa rahi hai....who muhje kyun chord kar gaye kya main itni buri hoon kya maine kuch kiya hai...kya.. kya ......"
neil:(hugging her tightly) "nahi avni tumne kuch nahi kiya....tum bahut acchi ho ...or papa or muma tumse bahut pyaar karta hain...and who hamesha tumhare dil main hai..."
avni:"neil ....muhje unki bahut yaad aa rahi hai.....mere saath do bhi raha who muhje se chin gaya.....(breaking the hug)...muhje muhje tumse bhi door chale ganna chahiye kahi...god tumhe ...nahi nahi...main tumhare saath nahi rahe sakti....nahi.. muhje janna hoga....main ...."
the next thing what happend....was shocking....
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this is for all people who wanted this....i hope u like it....
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so guys hope you enjoyed it...
sorry for any mistake
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next update after 40 votes and 20 comments.....
precap:"what will happend when juhi knows mishti is her daughter and not Avneil....and what will happend when vidihut finds mishti...."
do comment and tell wht u think happend next ....and why was it shocking....
remember 40 votes and 20 comments....
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