《Avneil - being with you》Avneil will always be Avneil...
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avni:(trying to act normal beacuse she dosen't know he saw her haering the staff..)"arre neil tum yahan.... ba..baat ho gayi ...ju...juhi se ...main toh bus yahan hawa khane aayi thi..."(tear forming in her eyes she tried a lot to not let it fall but one fell....)
neil:(wiping her tears)"ab muhjese aapna dard bhi chupaogi"
avni:(turning around so he dosen't see her tears)"dard...nahi muhje kyun dard hoga..."
neil:(turning her around)"avni plz dont hide the pain inside you ...plz"
avni couldn't hold it anymore and cried her heart out while hugging him....he hugged her tightly...
avni:(still crying)"neil mere saath hi esa kyun hota hai.......bacchpan main bhi yahi hua tha....kya main itni buri hoon ki bhagwan mere saath ye sab kyun karte hain.........."
neil:(still hugging avni)"shhh tum buri nahi ho .....tum bahut acchi ho..."
avni:(crying) "pata hai....jab main choti thi...tab..maine ....maa ko toote hue dekha hai....main bahut roti thi per muhje kabhi nahi dikhati thi...every day newspaper main kuch aata tha...mere bare main but fir bhi muhjese woh chupa deti thi ki muhje bura na lage....sab muhje bolte the...ki main na....naj...najayaz hoon.. main paap hoon"
neil:(having tears in his eyes)"avni nahi tum najayaz nahi ho ...tum paap nahi ho...tum meri avni ho...meri avni....jo duniya ki sabse acchi hai....and ....i...i am sorry avni...hum itne muskil se ek hue or mera past humhe haunt kar raha hai......i am sorry......"
avni:"nahi neil tum sorry mut bolo..."
neil:"avni main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon or hamesha karta rahonga....marte daam tak....juhi ne Kahan ki mari ek bati hai ...ragani pundit ke bate ke paas ...muhje usko bacchana hoga........avni I know ye sab bahut muskil hai tumhare liya is liye (holding Avni's hand) if you want you can leave...i will not stop you ..."(saying this tears run through his eyes...)
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avni stared to walk away ......Neil was heart broken but he thought he deserved it and avni did nothing wrong.....
avni:(going back and holding Neil's hand and Neil looked counfused )"kya hua....chalo tumhari beti ko bhi toh durna hai...."
neil:(happy and also sad that avni is going through alot)"avni (hugging her in a bone crash hug) I love you....i love you so much....main kabhi bhi tumhara saath nahi chodonga...kuch bhi ho gaye...."
avni:"I love you too Neil....or tumhe kaise laga ki main tumhe chord sakti hoon....zindagi main muskile toh aati rahe gi per hum unka saath milke samana karenge........(break the hug)chalo already late ho gaya hai...kal bacchi ke bare main bhi pata karna hai"
they went inside...in avneil room.... juhi was still their lost In thoughts of avneil separation....her thoughts were disturbed by neil....who just entered holding Avni's hand...
neil:"juhi tum yahi hu"
juhi:(confused while avni was happy and why everything looked normal...)"ha....haan woh tum avni me peeche gaye toh muhje laga avni upset hogi so I should talk to her that's why I stayed (to avni) avni I am sorry meri wajah se tumhari zindagi me itne toofan (storm) aa rahe hai...."
avni:"nahi juhi yeh kismat ka khel hai......accha tumhe pata hai tumhari beti kaisi dikti hai..."
juhi:"nahi ...woh main use sirf ek baar dekha hai ....jab woh peda huyi thi"
avni:"theek hai koyi baat nahi...chalo ab jao tum so gao thak gayi hogi.."(she nodded and left.....)
neil's point of view starts....
muhje esa kyun lag raha hai...ki kuch toh galat hai...or yeh juhi se hi related hai....jab se woh rang mehel se aayi hai....bahut badal gayi hai......i am missing something...something big........nahi neil tu bahut soch raha hai...chal so ga....kal juhi ki beti ko bhi dorna hai....
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neil's point of view ends...
avni:"neil kahan kho gaye....chalo sote hain..."
neil:"hmmm..."
they both cuddle up and sleep ...while in juhi's room....
juhi's point of view starts....
arre yaar yeh...yeh avni kis mitti ki bani hai....neil ko chord hi nahi rahi...use kya farak nahi parta .....main kya karo.....nahi juhi Abhi meri beti ko waisepus lane main neil or avni hi meri madat kar sakte hai warna woh...(scared) woh pandit ka beta....nahi nahi...main Abhi kuch nahi karogi jab tak mari beti ghar nahi aa jati...
juhi's point of view ends...
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thanks for all comment and vote on the last update....
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and don't worry I know it has sad scenes but soon i will bring avneil romance...
I hope you like this...
precap:"new villain entry....juhi's reaction after finding that mishti is not avneil daughter..."
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