《Avneil - being with you》juhi ki jaan
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so guys I am here with my next update......
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they reached home and mishti was a sleep so neil carried her in her room and avni covered her with blanket...both of them kissed mishti on the head ......while this someone was watching and not being happy.....
in avneil room after sometime........
avni:"viren or jenvi kitne acche hai na...."
neil:"haan..."
avni:"aaj bahut maza aaya..."
neil:(going close )"hmm waise tumne jo gaana gaya woh tumhari actually feeling thi..."
avni:"neil kya kar rahe ho..."
neil:"tumhe nahi pata"
avni:"neil koyi dekh lega"
neil:"i dont care"
neil was about to kiss avni's cheek when they heard a knock on the door .... it was juhi...
avni:(avneil parting away)" juhi tumhe kuch kaam tha..."
juhi:"haan woh neil muhje tumse baat karni thi.."
neil:"haan bolo"
juhi:(looking at avni)"woh actually.."
avni:"neil main mishti ke pass jati hoon tum juhi se baat kar lo ..."
neil:"avni per kya jarorat hai"
avni:"neil its okay waise bhi main mishti ko dekh ne jane wali thi ... you talk i will be back..."(she goes.....
at mishti's room....
avni entered to see sweata swaying mishti's hair...
avni:"mimmy ji aap ... aap soye nahi.."
sweata:"nahi woh pani lene gayi thi toh socha ki mishti ko dekhlo..... tum nahi soye... or neil khana hai ...so gaya na woh..."
avni:" actually woh juhi ko neil se baat karni thi toh main yahan aa gayi.."
sweata:"per tumhe bhi udar hona chaiye na ..."
avni:"maine socha ..unko thoda time de do....juhi ke life mein in 5 saal main bahut huya hai...and i just want ki woh baat kar le.."
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sweata:"accha chalo tum jao aapne kamare main main bhi jati hoon.."
avni:"haan mummy ji main jati hoon bus mishti ko deck lon.."
sweata:"hmm(and she left)
mean while in Avneil room...
neil:"tumhe kya baat karni hai juhi"
juhi:"woh neil.... tumhe yaad hai ... ragani pandit ne meri jaan ki baat ki thi.."
neil:"haan ..."
juhi:"woh jaan meri beti hain...."
neil:(shocked)"b...be...beti...."
juhi:(crying)"hain neil meri beti...."
neil:"per kab..."
juhi:"jab mein rang mehel mein thi ...then i got to know that i am pregnant ... and ....when i had her ....they took her away from me... "(she falls on the ground...)
neil:(consoling her)"juhi....yeh... meri beti hain....?"
juhi:(nodding)"ye...yes"
neil:(to himself)" yeh kya khale hain bhagwan.... jab avni or mari zindagi itni acchi ja rahi hai phir mera past humko hunt karta rahta hai... kyun..."
juhi:"neil ...kahan kho gaye.."
neil:"juhi tumhe pata hai humhari bacchi kahan hai..."
juhi:"nahi...bus ye pata hai ki woh pandit ke bate ke pass hai.."
neil:"pandit ka beta...... uska ek bata bhi hai..."
juhi:"haan...neil tum hari bacchi ko baccha loge...."(hugging neil)
neil:(no hugging her back)"juhi dont worry i will save our kid...main humhari bacchi ko kuch nahi hone donga..."(while saying this he made her sit on the bed and drink water...when he saw avni standing by the door and had tears in her eyes ready to fall...)
neil:(as seeing avni running outside)"avni...."(he left behind her)
juhi:(in her mind)"wah maine toh kuch kiya hi nahi....thank you god ...ab avni neil ko chordegi and me ...my jaan and neil will live happily....see even gods wants avneil separation..."(*yeh juhi chuhi ko pata hi nahi ki god avneil ka separation nahi juhi chuhi ka end chahate hai and this is the first step towards that)
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avni's point of view....
i made mishti sleep and as mummy ji said i was going to my room when i saw juhi crying and hugging neil and neil telling her he will save their daughter and he will not let anything happened to her.... my world froze i felt all my past haunting me .. i wanted to cry , scream , why always with me ... why ... i ran from their....i went to the garden and all my past flashes were coming in my head ...it was like someone was stabbing my heart continuously ... why why with me only ... am i that bad to face all the troubles to get such life... then i felt a pat on my back ....the hand felt similar .. it was of course neil's hand ... i quickly wiped my tears ... i didn't want him to have more stress than he already has.... and i turned around facing him...
avni's point of view ends ...
avni:(trying to act normal beacuse she dosen't know he saw her haering the staff..)"arre neil tum yahan.... ba..baat ho gayi ...ju...juhi se ...main toh bus yahan hawa khane aayi thi..."(tear forming in her eyes she tried a lot to not let it fall but one fell....)
neil:(wiping her tears)"ab muhjese aapna dard bhi chupaogi"
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so guys I hope you like this....
plz do comment and vote....
thanks for the support....
precap: "will juhi know mishti is not avneil daughter....New villain entry... guess who"
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