《Avneil - being with you》Khana's and Patel's Part 3
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so guys I am here with my next update......
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here we go....
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ali:(yelling)"arre yaar bus karo ..."
viren:"baccho ki tahara lardna band karo..."
avneil:"hum ..(looks at each other) hum kahan lard rahe hain"(with a cute innocent face)
jenvi:"awwwww"
avni:"kya hua..."
viren:"tum log ek dum perfect couple ho....cute , sweet, romantic, tashan, everything...."
neil:"per woh mare din ka sabse accha din tha"
avni:"mara bhi.....chalo ab bottle spin kare..."
everyone:"haan"(they spun the bottle and it landed on juhi....)
avni:"juhi truth ya dare..."
juhi:"hmmm......truth.."
jenvi:"ok.....tells us your hobby..."
juhi:"i ....i like dancing ..."
jenvi:"waah ..nice...me too"
juhi:"ohh(smiled)
viren:"okay lets spin(they spun and it landed on jenvi"
avni:"truth ya dare"
jenvi:"dare...."
neil:"ok....kiss viren .."
jenvi:(fully red)"kya"
viren:(also red)"tu muhjse kya chahata hai"
neil:"kya yaar teri help kar raha hon...tujhe free kiss mil rahi hai lele...tu toh ese bol raha hai jeise tone kabhi apni biwi ko kiss nahi kiya.."
viren:"toh tu ese kyun bol raha hai jaise tu avni ko har rosh kiss kar tha hai"(avneil look at each other and remember thier morning kiss that they do every morning...)
ali:"kya Hua kahan kho gaye"
avni:"ku...kuch....nahi (trying to divert the topic)chalo jenvi dare pura karo..."(jenvi kissed viren cheek and they spun the bottle again and this time it landed on avni )
neil:"truth or dare wify..."
avni:"dare...."
jenvi:"sing a song that would express your feelings when you realized that you love neil "
neil:"so actually she has to sing a song that expresses her feelings when she found out she loves me right..."
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ali:"neil that's exactly what jenvi said..."
neil:"I know I am just clarifying...and thanks janvi...I would love to listen to this..."
viren:"ready
avni:hmmm"(and avni starts singing,*neil sang the boy part)
jenvi:"waah ...yeh toh perfect song hai....avni tum toh bahut smart ho...itne kum same me itna accha gaana soch liya...."
avni:"thanks jenvi"
ali:"chalo kuch or khele...."
neil:"hmm per kya..."
ali:"accha let's to couple compatibility test..."
viren:"per tum or juhi"
ali and juhi :"humhe nahi khelena hum dekhenge "
neil:"okay but question kyun puchega"
dadi and bebe:"hum"
avni:"bebe...dadi aap"
bebe:chain hum lenge tum down I couple ka compatibility test"
jenvi:"okay"
bebe:"upne partner ka birthday "
avni:"12 Feb"
neil:"4 june "
jenvi:"10 Jan "
viren:"26 nov"
dadi:"aapne partner ka favorite dish "
neil:"poha"
avni:"bhindi ki sabji "
jenvi:"aalo ke parathe "
viren:"aalo puri"
bebe:"good ab aapne partner ka favorite color"
avni:"blue "
neil:"all colors "
jenvi:"black"
viren:"pink"
dadi:"accha ab ...apni biwi ko koyi gift do no isi ghar main hai and you have 5 min after that you better have a gift"
Viren and neil:"kya dadi 5min main..."
bebe:"your wasting time"
they ran to find somthing......after 5 min
they come back
viren:(giving jenvi a teddy )"yeh lo muhje yeh hi mila...."
jenvi:"yeh mere liye bahut hai "
viren: I love jenvi"(hugged her)
jenvi:"love you too"
neil:(holding her hand)"avni main tumhe koyi gift nahi donga main tumhe ek promise
....promise ki main hamesha tumhara saath donga....promiss ki main kabhi bhi tumhe kuch nahi hone donga.... main hamesha tumhe pyaar karonga...marte dam tak"
avni:(tears in her eyes)"Neil...yeh best gift hai"
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thanks you ....
precap:"last part of khana and patel, will juhi tell neil about her jaan"
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