《Avneil - being with you》Khana's and Patel's
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so guys i am here with my next update ......
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thanks for the support ...
i hope you like it ......
here we go
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jenvi:"or yeh bacchi yeh aapki beti hai na"
avni:(looked at mishti than at neil) "woh yeh actually...(but she got cut off)
neil:(picking mishti up) "haan yeh humhari beti hai mishti"
avni:(happy)"haan yeh humari mishti hai" (and kissed mishti's cheek)
everyone who heard it was happy except on juhi...
juhi:(in mind)"neil has moved on ......per ab jab neil ko pata chalega ki woh meri jaan toh kya hoga.....neil toh kitna khush hai avni or misti ke saath ...."(her thought was disturbed by dadi)
dadi:(when avni and neil and mishti touvhed her feet and took blessing)"jeete raho putter....sweata bari soni bahu hai teri toh...or yeh bacchi bari pyaari hai"(then avneil and mishti took blessing from manish and swarna ..)
neil:(bringing neela front)"yeh avni ki mom hai neela"
ruhi:(pointing toward juhi and ali)"yeh kyun hai papa"
avni:"yeh ....yeh mere friend hai ali or juhi ..."(avni brought them front and introduced them to everyone)
dadi:(while giving them blessing )"jeete raho....humesha ek saath khush raho"(*guys so dadi and Patel family members thought that ali and juhi are a couple and they are married 😂😂😂...i know juhi is not even a good partner for ali ...but just i put it ....)
ali:"dadi hum shadi shuda nahi hai"
dadi:"oh sorry beta ..."
manish:"chalo ab under chalte hain.."
everyone:"haan"
they all go inside and settle them selfs ....the living room was quite big...
Manish:"hum itne dino baad mile ....kuch game ho gaye..."
prakash:"haan kyun nahi..."
bebe:"theek toh pahele kya..."
dadi:"mere pass ek hai..."
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bebe:"kya "
dadi:"are woh yaad hai jab neil or viren ke bacchpan main yeh log(pointing toward sweata prakash Manish swarna) parties main kelte the "
bebe:"aare woh...haan..it's perfect"
all youngster(*I mean neil and avni genaration) "kya"
dadi:"dance ..."
viren:"aare dadi dance karna itna easy hai..."
bebe:"aare easy ke bacche puri baat toh sunle..."
avni:"or kya hai bebe"
bebe:" tum logo ko dance toh karna hai lekin ek paper pe or woh paper every few min baad chota hota gayega...and you have to dance continuously without stepping of the paper ...the last couple on wins..."
neil:"okay bebe done..."
bebe:"okay tillu dekhte hain kyun jeeta hai..."
they place newspapers and avni neil, jenvi viren,
bebe:(towards manshi swarna prakash and sweata)"tum log bhi jao"
all 4:"hum"
dadi:"haan tum now go...(to ali and juhi) tum log bhi jao"
ali and juhi:"hum hum kaise "
bebe:"aarey gane hain .....tum dono friends ho na ...come on..."
so now every couple was on the floor...bebe , dadi , ruhi , and mishti were eagerly waiting to see who wins...
bebe:"ready..."
all:"yessssss"
dadi:"music..."
(the paper was folded)
(ali and juhi got out and paper was folded even smaller)
(Manish swarna prakash and sweata were out and the paper was again folded)
(now both couples were left...paper was again folded.....there was only place for one person to stand ...avni kept her feet on neil and they were so close that air couldn't even go through same for jenvi and viren)
at the end of song both couples were still lost in each other's eyes and both couples won this game...
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so guys I hope you like this......
plz do comment and vote.....
thanks for the support.....
precap:"more games and fun.....(yeh bus trailer tha picture abhi baki hai 😉😉) couples comparability test ...."
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