《Avneil - being with you》Mr and Mrs Patel!
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so guys I am here with my next update....
thanks for all comment and vote....
I am happy you liked the surprise...
plz do comment and vote for this one too....
here we go...
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avneil were romancing and were about to kiss when sweata came and interrupted there romance...
sweata:"avni beta tum nahane ke baad mere kamare main aana kuch bat karni hai "
avni:"ji mummy ji"
sweata left......
neil:"toh hum kahan the..."
avni:"Neil tum jao muhje nahana hai..."
neil:"per avni...(before he can say anything she pushed him out...)
neil:(to himself) "yaar mom...Abhi hi ana tha....is ghar main sab mere pyaar ke dushman hai..."
while in juhi's room ....
juhi:(in mind)"mujhe kuch karna parega....neil ko bataon...haan ye sahi hoga neil ko batati hoon....(she starts to leave but stops) per avni hogi neil ke saath muhje neil ko akele main batana hoga...."
in hall....
avni:(coming in)"ji mummy ji aapne bulaya..."
sweata:"haan dekh Mrs. Patel ne hume khane pe bulaya hai...toh tum log 6 baje tak ready rehena and avni kuch accha pehena...they will see neil wife for the first time..."
avni:"okay main ready rahongi or neil ko bhi boldongi..."
sweata:"avni ek or baat.... juhi ko bhi bata do...or usko boldo ki agar woh chahe toh bahar jake ghoom sakti hai...or han yeh bhi bol dena ki humhe late ho sakta hai....main neil ko bol ke dd ko uske saath rahene ke liye boldongi..."
avni:"mummy ji woh humhare saath nahi chal sakti..."
sweata:"beta they called family memebers what will we say who is she and how is she related...."
avni:"plz mummy ji we can say she is neil friend and came to stay with us ....wait even ali is going right so yeah we can say that she is mine ali and Neil friend...."
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sweata:"but avni...."
avni:"plz mare liye..."
sweata:"okay...."
avni:(hugging sweata) "thank you..main jake sabko bolti hoon or ready bhi hoti hoon...."
sweata: "hmmm"
in juhi's room....
avni:(entering)"juhi..."
juhi:"haan avni..bolo:
avni:"woh aaj saam ko hum mr and mrs patel ke yahan kahne pe ja rahe hain...tum 6 tak ready rehena okay"
juhi:"okay....waise main kya peheno...mere kapade ...."
avni:"oh actually maine dd se bol kar tumhare liye dress mangvadi hai...unme se kuch pehenlo....okay chalo ab muhje mishti ko bhi ready karna hai or neil ko bhi bolna hai..."
juhi:"haan waise mishti bahut pyaari bacchi hai...tum teeno ek saath bahut achhe dikte ho..."
avni:(in mind )"muhje lagta hai ki juhi ko lag raha hai ki mishti meri or neil ki beti hai...muhje use batana hoga...(to juhi)"juhi woh actually mishti....(she gets cut of by mishti...)
mishti:"angle aap kahan ho...(enteringthe room)
avni:(picking mishti up)"kya Hua mishti..."
mishti:"muhje ready karo plz ..."
avni:"accha cholo...juhi tum 6 tak niche aagana okay..."(juhi nodded and avni and mishti left)
in avneil room....
avni was making mishti ready when neil came ....
mishti:(running toward neil)"superman...main kaise lag rahi hoon"
neil:"bahut achhi per aap ja kahan rahe ho.."
avni:"opps main tumhe toh batana ho bhol gayi.."
neil:"kya batana"
avni:"hume Mr and Mrs Patel ke yahan jana hai aaj khane pe...6 tak ready ho gao..."
neil:"accha or Abhi kya ho raha hai "
avni:"5:30"
neil:" tum jao ready ho maa ne muhje bata diya tha ...i am ready ...main mishti ko neeche leke jata hoon you get ready fast and come down..."
avni:"hmmm"
after 30 min avni comes down where everyone is present....avni comes down the stairs looking really good neil was just staring at her with his mouth open.....
mishti:"superman close you mouth...some insect will go in"
and everyone laughed ....
they left or Mr and Mrs Patel house..
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sorryfor the short update....
actually there has been lots of projects going on In my classes and I have not been having time to write .....so sorry if I don't update every day this week...
plz do comment and vote...
precap:"fun and games at Mr and Mrs Patel....how will neil react when juhi tells him the truth..."
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