《Avneil - being with you》avneil home
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so guys I am here with my next update....
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here we go....
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neil:(to avni)"waise tumne jo mistake ki hai uski punishment tumhe milegi.."
avni:"maine kyun si galti ki...."
neil:"tumne aapni jan ko danger main dala"
avni:"per punishment kyun....okay kya hai meri punishment.."
neil:"ki kal pure din tum ghar pe raho hi koyi kaam nahi karogi or bed rest karogi"
avni:"per neil main bore ho jaongi "
neil:(going close to avni)"toh main hoona..tumhara time pass karne ke liye...waise bhi kal pura din meri chuti hai so"
avni:(pushing neil away) "neil hum kar main hain or (pointing toward the driver) yeh bhi hai"
neil:(disappointed face)"hmmm"
they soon reach home.....
Avni's point of view starts....
when we got out of car ....the lights of the house were closed i looked at neil and he also look confused....we went to the door and it was slightly open i pushed the door and walked in it was completely dark....neil held my hand and yelled
" bebe...mom...dad...aap kahan ho..."
than suddenly the light go on and every tells surprise....
Avni's point of view ends......
neela:(with tears in her eyes..ran to avni and huged her)"avni mera bhaccha tu theek hai na"
avni:(breaking the hug and wiping the tears)"maa ro mat main theek hoon"
neela:(went ad hugged neil)" tum theek hona..."(neil nodded)
like this each and every family members hugged avneil...
mishti:"angle i missed you"
avni:(picking mishti up )"I missed you too mishti.."
neil:(making a fake crying cute neil special face)"sirf angle ko miss kiya muhje nahi..."
mishti:"maine aap dono ko miss kiya...I love you both"(she said hugging both)
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avneil:"we love you too....(everyone adore there moments they looked like a cute happy family...)
neil:"waise ye decorations kis liye..."
sweata: "yeh meri beti ke ghar anne ki khushi main...or sab theek hone ke bhi"
neil:"sirf beti beta nahi"
neela:"arre ese keise nahi..mere bete ki anne ki khushi main bhi"
bebe:"arre ab Andre toh anne do un logo ko"
sweata:"opps sorry..chalo Andre chele cake katana hai"
they cut the cake and feed each other...than the whole family dances on
than avneil danced on a romantic song
on the other hand in the guest room juhi just woke up ....after hearing all the sounds...
juhi:"main kahan hoon....."(then she see' s some photos on the wall)"neil"
the photos were ...
juhi:(to herself)"yeh bacchi avni or neil ki hai ....(suddenly )pandit...ab nahi rahi..per meri jaan...meri....be..beti...or.....I should tell neil..."(she got of the bed and went to the hall ..she was going to tell but stoped seeing neil and avni really close to each other....she went back to her room and spelt..but she felt bad seeing neil with someone else.....)
while in the hall after dance everyone was enjoying when neil saw that avni was not here......
neil:(to neela ma) "maa aapko pata hai avni kahan gayi hai....yeh larki muhje har roj muhje heart attack deti hai..."
neela:(laughing) "kahan jayegi...aapni maa se milne gayi hai..."
neil:"oh...aisha maa.."
at the grave yard...
avni:(sitting on her knees crying .....)" maa...aaj hume humara aman mil gaya...or aaj dayavanti ka end hua...(just then beil comes and see's avni talking )aap bahut kush ho na....maa...plz ek baar ek baar muhje apne gale se lagalo...aaj appki bahut yaad aa rahi hai...plz ma...plz...."(she was broken ...neil went and held her...and huged her..)
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neil:(still hugging her)"avni tumhe pata hai tum duniya ki sabse lucky person ho...tumhare pass 3 maa hai sabke pass toh 1 hi...tumhare neela ma, mom, or aisha maa...or woh hamesha tumhare saath hain ..unka ashirvad tumhare saath hain...(he gave her the necklace which has picture of neela and aisha on it...)
avni:"Neil muhje bahut dar lag raha hai...itni khushiya mil rahi hai ki kahi kuch wapase bura na hu..."
Neil:"avni kuch nahi hoga....tumhe pata hai an tumhe sirf khushiya hi khushiya milegi....ab chalo ghar chale..."
they reached home and everyone went to there respective rooms to sleep....
next morning..in avneil room...
avni:(waking up and seeing neil still asleep )"neil kitna cute lagta hai sote hue..(she kisses his cheeks) muhje neil ke uthne se pehel uth kar kuch kaam kar lena chahiye warna agar isne muhje dekh liya toh muhje pata nahi kya karega...."(she starts to leave)
neil:(holding her hand)"tum muhje idiot samajti ho "(she looked at him and he opened his eyes)
avni:"ne ......neil tum uthe hue ho"
neil:"haan...per maine tumhari sari baate sun li....maine tumhe punishment di thi na"
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so guys I hope you like this....
plz do comment and vote....
thanks....
precap:"Neil takes care of avni due to punishment....avneil romance...someone jealous..."
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