《Avneil - being with you》avni in danger
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so guys I am here with my next.....
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here we go..
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while this avni points the gun at dayavanti Mehta....suddenly someone hits Neil's head and points a gun on his head...
avni:"amol....."
amol:"haan di main aap apni gun niche karo warna main is acp ko mar donga "
dyavanti mehta: (laughing) "wah...yeh hai mera pota...good job amol..."
avni:(full in anger)"tu gun neeche rak warna .."
amol:"warna kya di "
avni:"mat bol muhje tu di....jab tu muhje di bulata hai toh mari maa ....aisha maa ka apman hota hai"
amol: "I don't care "
avni:"ab tune mera decision bahut easy kar diya (pointing the gun toward amol) ab main tuhje bhi maar sakti hoon"
neil:"nahi avni tum asa kuch nahi karogi"
avni:"nahi neil aaj mat rokana....main phehele hi sab kuch kho diya ab main tumhe nahi kho sakti hoon (to amol)last warning amol for main gun chala dongi"
dayavanti gets tensed and push avni and run with amol...while avni was about to hit the table when neil came and safes her but his hand got a little cut from which blood came out and accidentally avni's maang got filled with neil' s blood...
neil:(holding avni.)"tum theek ho"
avni:"haan or tum ..."(he nodded )
then avni saw dayavanti Mehta running away and she ran behind her ...
neil:"avni ruko...(to dd while giving him the phone)dd ye ballu ka phone hai isme prove hai samal ke rak ..."(saying this he gose behind avni)
at khana house....
neela:(entering khana house)"avni...avni"
bebe:"arre neela tu"
neela:"haan bebe main avni kahan hai..."
bebe:"avni or neil dono hi ghar pe nahi hai...pata NAHI avni toh 2days se ghar nahi aayi neil ne bola tumhare ghar pe hai..."
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neela:"nahi bebe main avni se 1week se nahi Mili..."
sweata:(coming in )"kya ...phir woh kahan hai..."
neela :"ek min main ali se puchti hoon..."
ali:(on call)"hain neela aunty "
neela:"ali avni or neil kahan hai"
ali:"aunty woh actually..."
neela:"ali bata..."
ali:"aunty woh actually...
I went to police station to meet neil but over there dd told me about avni in rang mehel and how neil went to safe her and ......"
neela:"and ...."
ali:"juhi"
neela:(confused) "juhi??"
ali:"neela aunty yoh don't worry neik will safe her .....I have to go bye..."
neela:"yeh juhi kyun hai..."
sweata:"ju...juhi"
neela: "hain juhi..."
sweata tells every thing about juhi and neela is shocked
neela:"woh zinda hai"
sweata, bebe, prakash: (shocked)"what..."
neela:"hain avni juhi ko bacchane rang mehel gayi hai...."(she tells them everything)
sweata:"yeh kya ho gaya...."
neela:(dropping to the floor) "yeh nahi ho sakta...main apni beti ko meri jeise zindagi nahi de sakti "
bebe:" neela don't worry avni ko waise zindagi nahi milegi....juhi neil ka past main or avni aaj or aane wala kal..."
at rung mehel......
rangani pandit was tired to the pole so she didn't run away...dd and the other officers took all the girls and goons out of rang mehel ..while juhi followed neil....
avni:"dayavanti Mehta bahar aao...tumhe pata hai...aaj yahan se ya toh tum bahar gao gi ya toh main...."
avni was about to move forward when neil came and stoped her ...
neil:"sshhhh...avni yeh gun muhje do..."(he hugged avni and then held her hand )"dayavanti Mehta bahar nikalo.... tumhe pata hain amol tumhari dadi ka asali rang"
avni:"nahi neil woh..."
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neil:"nahi avni aaj amol ko such jane do..."(he plays something on the projector...it was the vedio in which avni went to jail and dayavanti admitted all her crimes and Also she admitted that she is using amol and amol is nothing to her....(* guys if yoh donr remember than this is when dayavanti kiddnaped avbi and avni and Neil made a plan to make her admit her crime ....so she went to jail to talk to her....)
amol:(coming out from th hiding spot pulling dayavanti...)"yeh sab sach hai...(to dayavanti)
dyavanti mehta:"nahi yeh joot hai main teri dadi hoon nah tu mera amol"
amol:"nahi aap meri dadi nahi hai...app ek bahut buri ensaan hai "
dyavanti mehta: "yeh sab tumhari wajah se..(goes to avni but Neil stops her)"tum ise paap ke booj se pyaar keise kar sekte ho"
neil:(looked at avni and saw her crying)"paap ka booj avni nahi tum ho...or main avni se bahut pyaar karta hoon and I will do any thing for her....do you get that..."(while all this someone was watching them and that some one is no other than juhi..)
dyavanti got so angry that she got a fire stick and made a circle of patrol around her to burn her.....while she was about to burn her juhi yelled watch out avni....and push dayavanti so she landed in the circle....(by the way the circle was around a pole the same pole that pandit was tied to) while this the fire stick fell causing the circle to put up...but dayavanti held Avni's hand while her other have of body was burning...
avni:" neil tum juhi or amol ko yahan se leke jao...."
neil:"nahi main tumhe chord ke nahi jaonga.."
avni:"neil tum jao juhi or amol ko bacchao..."
amol:"didi..."
avni:"amol go...."
neil:"per avni(the fire was spreading rapidly)
avni:"Neil plz jao mere liye jao..."
neil:"first pormise me that you will also come out after us...."
avni:"Neil i promise main tumhe chord ke nahi jaongi now go"
juhi pulled neil and amol out of rang mehel..
as soon as they got out boom...a sound can and the building collapsed.."
neil running towards rang mehel but stoped by the police officer standing there
neil:(crying and screaming )"avni tumne promise kiya tha you can't leave me ....plz avni...."
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so guys I hope you like this....
plz do vote and comment and tell me what do you think Avni died....
thanks for supporting me...
precap:"is avni death or is there another twist...."
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