《Avneil - being with you》avni's dance!
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so guys I am here with my next update...
I am happy that you liked my last update...
plz do comment and vote.....
so without wasting more time let's get straight into it....
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juhi :"avni kya neil tumhara pati hai"
avni:"haan neil mera pati hai....I am Mrs.Avni Neil khana....."
dayavanti Mehta:"avni kya kismat hai Teri pehele papa ka pyaar maine chinna phir mumma ab tere pass ek pati tha toh uski bhi purani girlfriend aa gayi .....hahahaha"
avni:"chup tuhje upne papo ki shasa zaroor milegi....mera neil hume yahan se lekar jayega and tumhe shasa bhi dilayega "
dayavanti Mehta: "haha really...."
just then her phone rings.....
dayavanti Mehta:(on call)"oh okay perfect ...ya I will hide them ...than acp will not be able to find her....okay chalo bye...."(she tells juhi and avni to come down after 10 min and fast...saying this she left)
avni:(in mind)"ek min I think Neil ko search warrant mil gaya but if they hide us how will he find I have to tell neil to not come now ....but how yah that audio device...(to juhi )juhi tum niche jao main aati hoon"
after some time in police van...
neil:"dd we have to go on another mission so tell the officer to take ragani pandit to the police station...now..ok..."
dd:"yes sir..."
saying this neil and dd with some cops went for a argent case.....while at police station somehow ragani pandit was again successful in going to rang mehel...
ragani pandit: (entering) "woh aaj nahi aa rahe hain...lardkiyon ko ready karo aaj bahut important clint aa rahe hain....or is avni ko toh sabse khubsorat banao.....aaj ye hi maifil sajayegi..."
they took all girl and made them ready....in avni's room where juhi was making avni ready...
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juhi:"avni tumhe yahan nahi aana chahiye tha...."
avni: "dont worry juhi neil will come...don't worry..."
ragani pandit:(entering her room) "hahaha woh acp 2din ke liye bahar gaya hai kam se...aur tum uska wait kar rahi ho ....just remember one thing rang mehel mein jo aata hain woh mari merzi se or jo jata hai woh bhi meri marzi se...."
avni:"ragani pandit tum muhje ek cheese batao aaj kya hai....dashera or aaj ke din ravan ka end hua tha...toh tumhara bhi hoga...."
ragani pandit: "chup..ekdum chup...chalo isse leke aao galdi clint wait kar rahe hain..."(she left)
in the hall ....avni came and ragani pandit made her dance in front of all ...she danced on ....
while dance avni was remembering neil and her moments..how they met and how he converted her from ananya to avni....she remembered their confession..their first kiss......suddenly when the dance ended there was this guys who was gonna touch avni but.....
avni 's point of view starts.....
while I was dancing I was remembering neil and my moments than suddenly when the song ended this guys started coming toward me and was about to touch me ...I was feeling so discussed that I closed my eyes....when I opened my eyes I saw him laying on the floor..it looked like soneone punched him...but who...I turned to see the person to..my right and....
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so guys I hoped you like it...
plz do comment and vote...
and tell who do you think that person is....
thank you....
precap:"avni ya juhi....."
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