《Avneil - being with you》Neil's punishment!
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so guys i am here with my next part...
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avni shows dd the vedio and then avni tells neil and dd everything she saw whenshe went to rang mehel , when she saw juhi....
avni:(turning the audio device on)"chalo ab is me sunte hai ...we might find a clue...."
ragani pandit :(throw audio)"isse aaj raat ke liye acche se ready karo aaj raat ek barde client aarahe hain....(toward juhi) "yeh humara khuhinor hai...."
neil:(hearing this) " this is all my fault if I had investigation more she wouldn't have been in this situation ..."
avni:(hugging him)"neil listen I know this is hard but plz we have to do this for juhi ...plz be strong "
neil:(breaking the hug)"we will safe them right avni?"
avni:"yes neil we will dont worry..."
dd:"sir main search warrant ke liye baat karta hoon aap log ghar jaye ..."
avni:"okay(she takes neil home )"
avneil room...
neil:(on phone ...)"haan dd kya hua...."
dd:"sir it will take 1 day ...so we will get to know tomorrow about the warrant "
neil:"ok dd let me as soon as something happens and plus tomorrow i am not coming to work so sab samal lena anyways tomorrw we will not be able to do something so ....."
dd:"yes sir dont worry app bhabhi or family members ke saath enjoy kariye... mein aapko updated rakonga..."
neil:"thanks dd....good night"
dd:"yes sir....good night(phone call ended)"
avni:"kya hua neil"
neil:"nothing woh....dd said it will take one day so we cant do anything before tomorrow night.."
avni:"okay tum tension mat lena everything will be fine..."
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neil:"hmmmmm waise tumne koyi punisment sochi nahi"
avni:"nahi....chalo ab so jate hain raat bahut ho gayi"
neil:"humm"
they both slept cuddling....next morning ....at breakfast table..
mishti:"angle aapne superman ko punisment dedi"
avni:"nahi"
sweata:"aare haan tum dono ko ek dosare ko punisment deni thi na"
neil:"haan maa maine toh dedi and avni did it also ..,but she has not given yet.."
bebe:"accha kya punishment di thi"
avni:"actually bebe woh..."
neil:"haan haan bolo avni kya punishment de thi"
prakash:"accha leave that so avni have you thought of neil's punishment.."
avni:"no papa ji"
sweata:"i have one ...neil has to make you happy the whole day by doing different staff.."
avni:"hmmm not bad idea..."
neil:"ok ....(towards avni) Mr.Neil Khana at your sevice"
mishti:"okay so superman make angle happy by giving her a surprise gift"
neil:(to himself)"humm esa kyunsa gift avni ke face pe smile le aaye ga"(then a idea struck him)
avni:(seeing neil go)"Kahan ja rahe ho"
neil:"tumhara gift ready karne"
neil left ....after 20 mins he came back down and made avni and other family members sit in living room and projected a PowerPoint of avni's moments i khana house with neil...
after watching the video ...avni had tears in her eyes...
neil:"avni i didnt mean you make you cry ...i am sorry ...if you dont like it its ok.."
avni:"neil these are tears of happiness...thank you neil this a the best gift...."
bebe:"neil sacchi main bahut accha gift hain.....purani yaadein yaad aagayi"
the whole day neil did what avni said and tried to make her happy in every way ....
avni:"neil your punishment ends now"
neil:"thanks wify"
bebe:"you did a great job neil ..."
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prakash:"haan neil beta it was a hard job but you did it in a very nicely way.."
sweata:"chalo ab chalke dinner karle...."
avni:"haan chalo"
mishti:"khane main kya hai"
avni:"aapki favorite aalo ke parathe"
mishti:(excited)"really thank you angle ...i love you"(and she hugs avni....everyone is happy seeing mishti and avni's bond...it looked like she was her really mother....now mishti was a part of khana family ....she was a part of avneil...without her everything felt uncompleted)
later after dinner at avneil's room.....
neil:(on phone with dd)"kya we didnt get the warrant but why"
dd:"sir they are saying we need prove ..."
neil:"ab prove keise milega ......okay i will do something thanks dd(cuts the call)"
avni:"kya hua"
neil:(frustrated)" warrant nahi milla"
avni:(sitting beside neil on the sofa)"dont worry neil we will fined some way...."
neil:"hummmm"
avni:"main tumhare liye pani leke aati hoon"
in kitchen ...
avni was taking water while bebe entered...
bebe:"arre avni tu yahan"
avni:"haan bebe woh main pani lene aayi thi ...or app"
bebe:"woh main Ramayan ka pat par rahi thi ...abhi water lene aayi..."
avni:"accha..."
bebe:"tuhje pata hai itne saalo se par rahi hoon lekin every time i get a different meaning .."
avni:"accha is baar kya mutalab mila"
bebe:"dekho duniya main problems to hoti hai...ravan ki lanka bhi hoti hai or ravan bhi lekin ye sita ki zimadari hai ki woh lanka jaye ..."
avni:(getting a idea)"bebe you are great thanks appne meri problem solve kardi..."
bebe:"accha chal ab jake soja good night"
avni:"good night bebe"
in avneil room...
avni:(entering room)"neil i got an idea"
neil:"oh no...i was thinking that you are not getting any crazy idea and here you came ...."
avni:"neil ek baar son to lo"
neil:"avni tumahara idea hai mutlab danger toh hoga hi.."
avni:"neil..."
neil:"okay bolo"
avni:"toh dekho main abhi bebe se mili ..she told me about Ramayan .....so see sita had to go to ravans lanka for ram to come and destroy it .."
neil:(confused)"toh ...isse humhare topic se kya mutlab"
avni:"dekho...ravan lanka=rang mehel....ravan=ragani pandit ....ram=you....sita=me..."
neil:(understanding her plan)"no..no..no you are not going to rang mahel alone...."
avni:"neil tum meri baat samjo....we have to ..to safe juhi and other girls ...please neil..."
neil:"nahi avni ...and this is the last time.....after this you will not talk about this again ..do you get that"
avni:"but neil..."
neil:"no buts no cuts no coconuts... you will not go and thats final... ab chalo go and sleep tomorrow i have a meeting with the CM and then we will decide ok but you will not go to rang mehel...."
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so guys I am here with my next update...
hope you enjoyed it...
plz do comment and vote ...
thanks..
precap: "avni goes to rang mehel...what will happen when juhi finds out that avneil are merried...."
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