《Avneil - being with you》family time....
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so guys I am here with my next update.....
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lets get directly to the reading....
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they cuddled and slept....avni felt so relaxed in his arms and this night she got the world best sleep ........avni felt the neil will be with her no matter what happened.... and she felt so relaxed that she slept in less than few min.....
next morning.......neil and avni went to the police station to investigate about this rang mahel topic.....neil didn't want avni to get involved....but she said that this is related to dayavanti Mehta....and she also thought that this is some how related to meher.....
neil:"dd kuch aur info mili"
dd:"no sir..."
neil:"okay main abhi aata hoon commissioner se baat kar ke....."(neil left)
avni:"dd muhje tumse ek help chahiye...."
dd:"haan bokiye na bhabhi..."
avni:"tum yeh baat neil ko nahi btaoge ok..."
dd:"okay"
avni tells dd about meher and all there meeting.....
dd:"okay bhabhi aap uska sketch bana shaki hain ...."
avni:"haan.....main ek kaam karti hoon kal hi tum ek sketch artis bola lo main kal aske details de dongi ..."
neil:(coming in)"kiski details....."
dd:"ah...sir woh..."
avni:"kuch nahi neil bus ase hi....."
neil:"okay chalo.....humhe aaj ghar jaldi jana hai..."
avni:"kyun"
neil:"neela ma ka phone aaya tha....."
avni:"okay...."
they left for home......at home....
neela:(stopping avneil from entering....)"rooko..."
avni:"kya Hua maa...."
neela:"ek surprise hai....anke band..."(she main them blindfold and took them to there room....)
neela:(opening there blind fold)"yeh lo pahen ke niche aao..."
avni:"per...maa..."
neela:"no question just come...."
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avni neil got changed and walked down stairs.....
avni:"yeh intna andera kyun hai avni..."
neil:"pata nahi....."
famliy:"surprise......"
neil:"yeh kis liye..."
mishti:"woh actually aap or angle itne buzy reheteho so we thought to do a party just us family members......"
avni:"thank you . ...."
neil:"so party main karna kya hai...."
mishti:"games....dance...singing....all of that..."
neil:"nice so let's start...."
they sat down......
bebe:"first we will play antacshari...."
sweata:"nice who will start....."
neil:"bebe aap....."
bebe:"sings......mere angne main tumhara kya kaam..."
bebe:"aab neela....h se"
neela:"sings......haaste haaste kat gayen raate zindagi unhi chalti rahe....."
bebe:"avni ab tu ga m se....."
avni:(going to mishti and picking her up)"mare ghar aaye ek nanhi pari....."
avni:" neil ab tum"
neil:(holding avni's hand and dancing with her romantically) "ishq wala love....."
avni:"ab kya karna hai..."
mishti:"dumpsharads...."
neil:"okay so the team's are .....neela ma, me dad, and avni,bebe mom...."
mishti:"and I am the supervisor..."
all:"okay ma'am...."
bebe :"so Neil ke team se prakash and hamari team se sweata...."
avni:"okay per tose karke pata karte hain who goes first..."
neela:"I will tose...heads yah teals neil ...."
avni:(interrupting) " maa mujhe heads..."
neil:(bring innocent) "okay fir tales for me "
neela:"ready"
neil:(whispering to avni) "dekha jitenge toh hum hi"
avni:(whispering) "accha dekh Lena "
neil:"accha agar main jita toh kya"
avni:"toh Kya? "
neil:"toh tunhe muhje sabke samne kiss karna hoga...."
avni:"or agar main jiti toh...."
neil:"toh....(thinking)...hmmmm..... muhje karna hoga jo tum khahogi... "
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avni:"done....(to herself) plz God Neil ko mat jitane dena...warna pata nahi mara kya hoga..."
neela:(tosing the coin) " head to avni tale toh Neil "
bebe,sweata:"heads....heads...heads..."
prakash,neela:"tales, tales, tales "
neela:(seeing the coin) "it landed on..........heads "
bebe,sweata: "yeah... we go first "
neil:(to himself) "shit....ab ye lady don muhjse pata NAHI kya kar vaye gi"
avni on the other hand was jumping and do happy...everyone was confused what happened except neil.....
neil:(whispering) "okay okay you won the bet....."
bebe:(heard what he said)"bet .....?what bet"
avni:"bebe woh actually .... maine or neil ne bet lagayi thi...no if heads comes and I win he has to do what I say and if tales comes and he wins I have to.....have too...."
bebe:"have to what"
neil:(tring to cover up) "she has to do what I say..... and she is happy that she won..."
sweata:"oh ...well .....avni neil se kuch accha punishment dena......esa muka baar baar nahi aayi ga "
mishti:"accha game khele "
bebe:"haan toh sweata prakash ko film bol "
sweata:"haan"
sweata tells prakash a film(muhjse dosti karoge ) after 4 trys Neil guesses it....
avni:"bebe ab aap or neela maa...."
neela gives bebe a movie and she acts on the 3 try avni guess the movie was....hum aapke hain kyun...
bebe:"ab avni or neil ki bari....."
mishti:"ek min the score are tri and this time it will be different...."
avni:"matlab mishti... "
mishti:"is baar superman ko main ek movie dongi and aap sabko guess karenge......okay"
all:"okay"
neil:(after listening to the movie )"ah...mishti yeh koyi movie NAHI hai.."
mishti:"hai superman.....aap kar sakte ho...."
neil:"okay"
neil acted and no body was able to guess......then neil took avni up and did it with her still no one understood and avni asked him to do it again.....
avni:(seeing Neil's action)"I LOVE YOU!
Neil:"correct....I love you...."
bebe:"are wah avni tune guess kese kiya"
neela:"bebe ab do pyaar karne wale bina kahe ek dosare ki baat jan sakte hain toh yeh toh inki dill ki feeling hai "
sweata:"wah mishti....ise bolte hain choota packet bara damaka..."
neil:(whispering in avni's ear)"I love you wify "
avni:(whispering back) "I love you too hubby"
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so guys I hope you like this....
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thank you for supporting me...
precap:"avni's punishment for Neil....."
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