《Avneil - being with you》insecure
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so guys I am here with my next update.....
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so here we go...
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neil:(walked an turned her towards him.....wiping her tears..)"agar....juhi hoti toh muhje tum....Mari pyaari avni kaise milti haan bolo wify...(a smile appears on her face)
avni:"phir tumne us driver ko pakara "
neil:"nahi....actually wahan koyi witness nahi tha....ek tha per woh bhi nashe main dhooth......"
avni:"toh tumne is liye police force join kiya...."
Neil:"nahi.....us din se I thought that I will make every bad think I can and give justice to people who need it....."
avni:"Neil tum kitne acche ho ....aaj kal tum jese log duniya main kahan milte hain....."
Neil:"ab muhje jeisa perfect koyi hai hi nahi"
avni:"toh tumne woh chor ko pakara..."
neil:"Maine use saza dene ki baja use sudara...ek moka diya.....and know he is a good man ......"
avni:"Neil tunne muhje use nahi milaya "
neil:"tum use danti ho...."
avni:"main ....kyun neil"
neil:"dd"
avni:(shocked )"dd"
neil:"haan"
suddenly wind blow and due the wind all paper started to fly.......avni and Neil were picking the paper up when they bumped there head together....and had a eyelock.....in background this sond played......
Tu safar mera
Hai tu hi meri manzil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil
Tu mera Khuda
Tu hi duaa mein shaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil
Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Junoon hai mera
Banoon main tere qaabil
Tere bina guzaara
Ae Dil Hai Mushkil
Yeh rooh bhi meri
Yeh jism bhi mera
Utna mera nahi
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Jitna hua tera
Tune diya hai jo
Woh dard hi sahi
Tujhse mila hai toh
Inaam hai mera
Mera aasmaan dhoondhe teri zameen
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Zameen pe na sahi
Toh aasmaan mein aa mil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil
Maana ki teri maujoodgi se
Ye zindagani mehroom hai
Jeene ka koi dooja tareeka
Na mere dil ko maaloom hai
Tujhko main kitni
Shiddat se chaahun
Chaahe toh rehna tu be-khabar
Mohtaaj manzil ka toh nahi hai
Ye ek tarfa mera safar, safar
Khoobsurat hai manzil se bhi
Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi
Adhura hoke bhi
Hai ishq mera kaamil
Tere bina guzara
Ae dil hai mushkil
avni:(breaking the eyelock) "Neil ek or bar warna mere sing nikal aayenge.. bull ki tarah "(neil laughed and they bumped there head together...again....)
neil:"waise maine pheleli biwi dekhi jo apne pati ki ex-girlfriend or unki love story sunke gussa nahi kiya"
avni: "waise sirf tumhi unique nahi ho.....main bhi ek unique peice hoon....Mr. perfect neil khana"
neil:(pulling her close) "ishi liye toh main kehe tha hoon....mainri wify sirf mari hi hai"
avni:"haan...haan...perfect husband ki perfect wify"
neil:"waah...tum bahut smart ho rahi ho"(pulling her more close so there is no space for even air to pass through)
avni:"Neil kya Kar raha hu...."
neil:"shhhh....(neil tucked her hair strand back and kissing her cheek)
avni:"Ne.....neil "(avni pushes neil and runs to the bathroom and shuts the door behind)
neil:"kab tak bahgogi...so din toh main bhagne nahi donga....."
when Avni changed and came out of the restroom she saw neil had already slept.....she went and sat next to him.....
avni:(swying his hair)" neil I know that you love me .....but I also know that I am not as good as juhi.....I am not the one who you deserve....thank you neil tumne muhje itni khushi di.....but agar main juhi jaisi hoti toh sayad main tumhare kabil hoti.....(she got cut off in the middle)
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neil:(still closed eyes)"nahi tab NAHI "
avni"neil woh...actually..."
neil:(sitting up) avni it's okay I know you feeling a little insecure but that's normal for any women....but I loved juhi know she is my past and you avni is my present and future.....I love my avni ....and I want you to stay the way you are because I love you the way you are.... you are my avni ....my lady don avni...."
avni:(hugging neil)"neil your the best ...i love you.....o love you very much.."
neil:"I love you too wify.. "
they cuddled and slept....avni felt so relaxed in his arms and this night she got the world best sleep ........avni felt the neil will be with her no matter what happened.... and she felt so relaxed that she slept in less than few min.....
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so guys I hope you like this one...
thank for the votes and comment on my last update... .
plz do comment and vote for this one too ....
thank you.....
precap:"will avni know the meher is juhi...what twist are there to came..."
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