《Avneil - being with you》pooja
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so guys I am here with my next update..
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so here we go...
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after talking to Ali, avni came inside and saw neil still busy working....so she sat on the couch .....waiting for neil she just fell asleep....after finishing neil saw avni slept on the couch waiting for him...
neil:(walking towards avni....)"kitni cute or beautiful lag rahi hain"(he kept admiring her.....than he sat next to her and kept her head on his shoulders so she can sleep properly......admiring he didn't notice when he also fell asleep)
next morning.......
avni woke up seeing neil sleeping on the couch with her.....when avni tried to move neil held her hand and pulled her close....
avni:"Neil tum jaage ho...."
neil:"my morning kiss wify"
avni:"Neil"
neil:"what....."
avni:(kissing neil cheek) "okay kush now let me go "
neil:"itni Jaldi kya hai......muhje abhi return gift toh dene do....."(he kissed avni on her cheeks and was about to kiss her lips but just than avni's phone rang......)
neil:"saath me puri ki puri duniya mere pyaar ki dushman hai"
avni after talking on phone got ready to leave somewhere......
neil:"kahan ja rahi hu......"
avni: "woh actually ali ne bolaya hai"
neil:"per itni subhe..."
avni:"haan....actually maine use kuch kaam diya tha....toh woh complete ho gaya hai....ok neil I am going bad main baat karte hain bye..."
neil:(to himself) "esa kyunsa important kaam hai"
avni and Ali at Ali's cafe.......
avni:"we need to go to that address "
ali:"okay if you say so "
they went but found no clue.....at home
avni:(in mind)"meher ke bare main kuch bhi pata nahi chala......arey how can I forgot kal to ganesh pooja rakte hain.......ab main khana house ki bahu hoon...toh main aaj ki pooja dum dham se karongi..."
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next morning....avni by chance send all family members out of house...to do preparation...
avni stared doing the paperation....all family members didn't know about it ......in evening....
avni:(opening the door) "hi.....surprise..."
everyone except neela was shocked to see ganesh pooja decorations.......neil has still not come.....
sweata:(to bebe whispering) "ab kya kare neil or avni ko kase sambhale..."
all the guest arrived except neil.....bebe,sweata, prakash are tenshed about neil and avni......just then Neil come and was who to see Ganesh pooja decorations.....
avni:(seeing neil goes to him)"neil tumhe mera surprise kesa laga.....family members ke liye or tumhare liye yeh pooja rakhi hain maine...."
neil was still in shock......he knew that avni didn't know her past.....just than bebe called avni and prakash went to talk to Neil....
prakash:"Neil ab kya...."
neil:"papa main yahan nahi rahe sakta...."
prakash:"lekin avni....usko kya kaho "
neil: "papa aap samalo plz "(neil left out side)
mishti:"angle aaj kya hai"
avni:"aaj Ganesh pooja hai"
mishti:"wow...."
out side....in gardin Neil was remembering the past when neela came there......
neela:"kya Hua neil .......main yahan yeh kahene aayi thi ki....thank you ...tumhari wajah se avni ko bagwan pe bharosa hua....so thank you Neil..."
neil:(in mind) "neil tum ye kya kar rahe ho....avni ke liye tum ko stong rahena parega..."
neela:"Neil kahan kho gaye....chale"
neil:"haan"
inside khana house......
pandit ji:(to avni):aap pooja kariye...."
avni:(sad)"neil....."
prakash:" woh use kuch kaam aa Gaya tha....tum pooja karo..."
avni sadly I'm going to take arti ki taal from pandit....just then Neil come and held Avni's hand and the taal....avni became happy...everyone was shocked and happy that neil came......
they did pooja on the arti.....
bebe:"bolo Ganpati Bappa
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mishti:(clapping hands.....)""""yeah pooja ho gayi"
avni:(to neil)"kya hua neil tum parashan lag rahe ho.....and you just dispersed ....."
neil:"avni can i have sometime..."
avni:"off course"
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so guys this is my update....
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and thank you...
precap:"will the past reveal..."
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