《Avneil - being with you》avni meets someone...
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neil came out of the restroom which broke avni thought....
neil:"tum fresh ho gao main neeche ja raha hoon....."
avni nodded and went to restroom .....soon avni joined neil and they had breakfast with the family....after the lovely family time....neil left for office......
avni:"neil toh apni important file ghar pe bholgaya....."
sweata:"haan......beta tu jake de aa...."
avni:"ji mummy ji......(avni left for police station..... but on the way she met some one...)
at police station....
dd:"sir woh file kahan hai.....jisme details hai ...."
neil:"woh.... main ghar be bhol gaya......how careless can i be.....dont worry at lunch time i will go home and get it...."
dd:"okey sir...."
in road.....by neil's police station.....
avni was walking when a girl accidentally bumped into her........
avni:"sorry ...sorry...aap theek hai..."
girl:(covering her face)"ji main theek hoon....tum theek ho..."
avni:"haan..."
suddenly a boy came from behind......
boy:(angry)"tum yahan kya kar rahi ho...."
girl:(scared)"woh...woh....."
boy:"ab....woh woh karna band karo or chalo....."
they left......and avni was still standing there feeling something really weird
avni:(to herself)"muhje esa kyun lag raha hai ...that she is in big trouble....she was so scared...."
dd:(sseing avni standing outside form the window....)"bhabhi ...yahan..."
neil:"kya....(he also sees avni and goes to her...) avni tum yahan...."
avni:(coming out of her thoughts and seeing neil)"haan neil main....woh tumhari file dene aayi thi"
neil:"how do you know i needed this file...."
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avni:"woh you took it to breakfast with you but forgot to bring it here so i thought..."
dd:"wah bhabhi ....ye file bahut important thi.....thank you aap le aayi..."
avni:"dd thank you maat bolo....."
neil:"chalo tum humare saath hi lunch karlo...."
avni:"per main Kahan nahi layi"
dd:"hum bahar se aap dono ke liye kuch order kardo ...."
neil:"nahi dd"
avni:"toh hum kya khayenge "
neil:"tumhari favorite pav bhaji woh bhi chpati style"
avni:(a smile on her face)"really neil thank you....."
at the pav bhaji stall.....
avni:(eating a bite)"hmmmm kya taste hai"
neil:"kya hua acchi nahi hai...avni kuch toh(he got cut of In the middle )
avni:"bahut acchi hai neil....wah maza aa Gaya "
after eating, avni was waiting for neil outside a shop.....neil went in beacuse he had some work.....then suddenly avni saw the same girl from morning ....but this time she can see the boy who was with her in the morning ......yelling at her.....
avni:(pushing that boy away from the girl...to the girl)"tum theek ho......(the girl nodded ...to the boy)"tum use mar nahi sakte.. "
boy:"tu khone hai....and don't interferin our matter.. "
avni:"tu samaj nahi aa raha...police ko bulao...."
they left from there hearing the name of police .....
avni:"tum theek ho....tumhara naam kya hai"
girl:"mare naam meher hai....."
avni:"oh bahut accha naam hai.....or main avni hoon... so friend "(forwarding her hand out)
meher:(smiling) "friends...."
avni:"main tumhe apne pati se milati hoon"
meher:"abhi muhje jana hoga....bye ...see you soon."
meher left just than Neil came there....
neil:(patting in her shoulder )"avni chale...."
avni:"haan"
at police station.......
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neil:"avni maine rang mahel ke bare main info mili hai"
avni:"okay...."
neil:" rang mahel ek esi jaga hai jahan womens ko sell karke... (he couldn't finish)
avni:"it's okay neik I understand. .......but ragani pandit ise kase Mili hai...."
neil:"she is the leader of all this... "
avni:"what"
neil:"haan"
avni:"doniya main ase kase log hain.....matlab lardki hoke....lardkiyo ka sauda karna......."
neil:"huummmmm"(just than Neil's phone rang)"hello "
mishti:"aap ghar kab aa rahe ho"
neil:"aa rahe hain beta....kyun kya Hua..."
mishti:"kuch nahi mujhe aapki yaad aa rahi hai "
neil:"hum aa rahe hain"
avni and neil reach home......
mishti:(running and hugging avni while crying)"angle...."
avni:"kya hua mishti.....aap ro kyun rahe hai ho....."
mishti:"woh woh ......sir"
neil:"sir......?"
mishti:"sir muhje le gayenge"
avni:(getting on her knees)"mishti its okay ... sir yahan nahi hai.... relax........"
mishti:"muhje nahi jaana.... i want to stay here with you superman... and other family memebers"
neil:"mishti aap yahi rahoge....so dont cry okay..."
mishti:"saachi"
avni:"mucchi......ab chalo raat ho gayi hain... aapke sone ka wakt ho raha hai"
avni made mishti sleep and than .... she was in her room thinking about the meher......just than neil entered.....
neil:(seeing avni tensed)"kay hua.... tum tension mai kyun ho"
avni:"nahi kuch nahi..."(suddely avni's phone rings it was ali....)
ali:"hi avni kya kar rahi hai..."
avni:(going in the patio)"ali woh actually i what to tell you something.......(avni teels everthing that happend with meher and the boy...)
ali:"avni... plz dont say you want to help her... and give that boy punishment....."
avni:"that exactly what i will do"
ali:"no avni you won't"
avni:"will you help me or not...."
ali:"okay"
avni:"get me some some info... and dont tell anyone about this not even neil okay..... he is already in tension"
ali:"okay.... "(she hang up the phone)
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