《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 23 |kiss
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so guys I am here with my next update......
Thanks for the sweet comment and votes on my last update.....
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so here we go......
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Neil:"that's it"(he just kissed her on her lips....to stop her......there kiss was very passionate .....they broke the kiss due to lack of oxygen....avni was dumbstruck)
neil:(seeing avni and smirking )"so ab narazgi door"
avni:(still in shock )"ne....nei..... neil..."
neil:(smiling)"haan wify "
avni:(starts to blush and
turns around....)"neil mein woh"
neil:(turning avni around) "avni dekho main....woh lardkiyo ke saath flirt kar raha tha but to make you feel jealous....plz don't be angry.... you know na how much I love you....plz avni....plz...av...(he was cut of in the middle by something... )
avni just kissed neil on his lips....neil was shocked by the sudden reaction...... but then he to got in to that kiss......they were so into the kiss they forgot. about all their worry... dayavanti Mehta......ragu/ragani pandit....vidihut....everything....finally avni broke the kiss.....
avni:(breaking the kiss)"neil tum explain maat karo i trust you ....I know how mush you love me and I love you too....and will always love you till my last breathe....."(saying this she started to go but Neil stoped her by holding her hand)
neil:(pulling her close)"ase kase jane de sakta hoon.....phele ek or baar kiss do.."
avni:"Neil kya kar rahe ho....muhje Jana hai...."
neil started moving forward and avni moving backwards.......until she couldn't due to the wall behind her..
avni:"neil"
neil:"phele kiss... ."
neil started to go close to her lips.....avni closed her eyes....they were about to kiss when they heard a knock on the door...
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mishti:(standing outside the door knocking) "angle ...superman door kholo"
neil:"aare yaar sab maire pyaar ke hi dusman hai "
neil leaves avni and makes a sad face ....avni was going when she sees his face .......
avni:(going towards neil and kissing him on his cheeks) "ohnn neil don't be sad...."
avbi goes opens the door while Neil was smiling touching his cheeks....
avni:(opening the door) "mishti aap yahan...or aap soye nahi"
mishti:(hugging avni)"woh muhje bura sapna aaya ki aap wopas se mujhe door chale gaye"
avni:(assuring mishti) "muhje kuch nahi Hua....mishti I am here. .only here..."
avni took mishti to her room and made her sleep.....
mishti:"aap muhje woh lori sonao na...pario wali"
avni starts singing.............(*for guys who miss ayesh .......and also for those who love this lori)
Aa leke chalun tujhko
Ek aise desh mein
Aa leke chalun tujhko
Ek aise desh mein
Milti hain jahan khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhes mein
Milti hain jahan khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhes mein
Pariyon ke bhes mein..
Aa leke chalun tujhko
Ho chand chahe aadha
Ho phir bhi roshni
Ho chand chahe aadha
Ho phir bhi roshni
Ummeed jo na chhute
Har baat hai bani
Raaton ke sur se nikle
Subah ki raagini
Lori tujhe sunaun
Lori tujhe sunaun
Bachpan ki ek main
Lori tujhe sunaun
Bachpan ki ek main
Milti hain jahan khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhes mein
Pariyon ke bhes mein..
Aa leke chalun tujhko..
Main aasmaan ko khidkiyon se
Ghar mein laa doon
Main aasmaan ko khidkiyon se
Ghar mein laa doon
Saare ke saare taare
Yahan chun le la doon
Sapno mein rang mann ke
Yoon hi bharti aayi hoon
Har dard bhool jaaun
Har dard bhool jaaun
Yoon hi khel khel mein
Har dard bhool jaaun
Yoon hi khel khel mein
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Milti hain jahan khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhes mein
Pariyon ke bhes mein..
Aa leke chalun tujhko..
Dena tu mann ki shakti
Maalik mere mujhe
Dena tu mann ki shakti
Maalik mere mujhe
Meri katha vyatha
Hai sab pata tujhe
Main jab bhi dagmaagaun
Tu thaamna mujhe
Chhode hain swapn saare
Chhode hain swapn saare
Teri dekh rekh mein
Chhode hain swapn saare
Teri dekh rekh mein
Milti hain jahan khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhes mein
Milti hain jahan khushiyan
Pariyon ke bhes mein
Pariyon ke bhes mein..
Aa leke chalun tujhko..
Lalala.. mmm...
avni kissed mishti's forehead and headed to her room....thinking about neil and her moments ...she was also blushing a little....
avni:(entering the room seeing neil all ready a sleep.....)"yeh kitna cute hai.....😍😍😍 "
she goes to him makes him sleep properly....and than just lays next to him takes his hand useing it like a pillow and sleeps....
next morning......
neil woke up and felt some wieght on this right hand....he turned to see avni sleeping peacefully holding his hands......neil goes close to her kiss her forehead.....
avni:(waking up by the kiss)"neil ....good morning..."
neil:"good morning...."
avni gets up and looks at neil who was looking too cute.....so she kisses his cheeks because she couldn't resist......
neil:"yeh kyun....aaj kuch hai kya...."
avni:"Neil tum bahut cute lag rahe ho toh maine de diya"
neil:"aapne is cute hubby ki ek baat manogi...."
avni:"kya"
neil:"muhje everyday ek morning kiss chahiye plz "
avni:(blushing) "neil...."
neil:"kya it is and you have to give me"
avni:"Neil chalo get ready we have to focus on our mission....."
neil:"hmmmm"
they got ready and went down to eat breakfast......
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Thank you .......
precap:"what' s neil and avni' plan...."
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