《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 18|Any clue?
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Neil:(thinking to himself) "Avni yaar tum kahan ho..."
dd:"sir bhabhi ka kuch pata chala kya. Ali sir ne kya kaha.."
Neil:"pata nahi dd. Avni ka kuch nahi pata chala. Ali ko bhi kuch nahi pata...."
dd:"bhabhi yahi kahi gayi hogi. Aap chinta mat karo she will be back soon. Try calling her.."
Neil:"I already called her 5 times she is not picking up."
Mishti:(coming in)"kya Hua superman. Angel Kahan hai..."
Neil:"Mishti don't worry angel will come Soon. let go home"
Neil:(to dd)"dd Avni ka phone record muhje chahiye. Call records and last traced destination. I want everything ASAP"
Neil and Mishti reached home. While going in they see neela, bebe,sweata and prakash getting out of car.
Sweata:(seeing Neil and mishti) "accha tum log bahar ghomne Gaye the good "
Bebe:"Neil Avni Kahan hai?"
Neil:"bebe woh..."
Neela:"kya Hua Neil, Avni Kahan hai...."
Neil takes them in and mishti goes in her room while Neil tell everything to the family members.
Neela:(worrying)"kiska call aaya hoga. Avni Kahan gayi hogi..."
Bebe:(praying) "plz Avni ko theek rakhna bhagwan "
Prakash:"kuch nahi hoga Avni ko. She is a brave and strong girl"
Suddenly the Neil's phone rang.
Neil:(picking up the call)"hello"
dd:"sir I got the details and I am coming to your house but I just think the number Bhabhi got calls from today look really familiar."
Neil:"okay dd come fast..."(put the phone down)
Neela:"Neil kya bola dd. Avni ka kuch pata chala"
Neil:"nahi but don't worry neela maa Avni ko kuch nahi hoga."(30 mins passes by quickly but it felt like ages for the family)
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Bebe:"Neil raat ho gayi Avni ka kuch bhi nahi pata chal raha hai."
Neil:"aap log chintha maat karo main Avni ko kuch nahi hone donga..."
dd:(entering khana house)"sir I got the info."
Neil:"good dd.( He turns to the family members) aap log aapne aap ko samalo and plz mishti ko kuch maat batana..."
Sweata:"main mishti ko dekhti hoon"
Sweata and Bebe go to check on Mishti While neela , prakash , dd and Neil are looking at the phone record.
Neela:"yeh number....yeh new number hai."
dd:"ek aur baat. Bhabhi ka phone iss call ke 1 ghante baad switched off ho gaya tha "
Prakash:"per Avni toh aapna phone kabhi nahi band karti."
Neil:"dd is phone ko trace karo."(dd nodded and called someone to trace the phone)
dd:"sir yeh toh last humare police station ke pass Mila tha."
Neil:(confused) "police station but how ?"
dd:"sir main check karke bata hoon..."
Neil and dd kept investigating for hours trying to find a clue. Any clue to reach Avni.
Neil:"neela ma plz aap ja ke so jayo It's 11 already."
Neela:"Neil main kaise.."
Sweata:"neela ji chaliye."
Sweata took neela to her room and made her sleep than she came to Neil and dd who were still investigating.
Sweata:"Neil main janti ho ki tu bahut dara Hua hai under se per hum logo ke liye bus strong bane ki acting kar raha hai. Plz don't worry Avni ko kuch nahi hoga "
Neil:(having tears in his eyes )"ma....Avni......woh.....theek hogi na?"
Sweata:(consoling neil)"haan beta. Avni bahut strong hai she will be fine."
Neil:"per maa....woh kahan hai..."
Sweata:"Neil woh aa gayi gi. Hum usse kal find karenge per uske liye tumhe bhi rest ki zarorat hai. tum so jao"
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Sweata tells dd to rest in khana house because it is late and tell neil to take rest so they can find avni tomorrow.
In Avneil's room...
Neil:(looking at photos hanging on wall)"Avni yaar tum kahan ho. Plz ghar aa jao." (in background a song starts to play)
Neil couldn't sleep all night. He just looked at Avni and his pics.
Next morning..
dd:(knocking Avneil's bedroom door)"sir....sir....open the door sir..."
Neil:(opening the door in a rush)"kya hua dd"
dd:"sir ek information mili hai"
Neil:(a little happy that they got some info about Avni)"kya sachme ?"
dd:"sir woh source se pata chala hai ki bhabhi ko muavla road pe dekha tha"
Neil:"muavla??"
dd:"haan sir"
Neil:"per munavla road to police station ke pass hai"
dd:"haan sir. kya hua kuch milla hai kya?"
Neil:"hain dd. Dekho munavla road police station ke pass hai or Avni ka phone record main last number police staion ke pass hi track hua."
Dd:(understanding)"oh yes sir."
Neil:"haan toh ab tum samje.."
dd:"Yes sir"
Neil:"dd chalo hum police station ke pass investigation karte hain...."
They left to the police station not before informing everyone of the new information found.
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Precap:"where is Avni? Will Neil find Avni"
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