《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 17|Where is Avni?
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A leap of a week and half has come. Mishti's bond with Avneil and other members of the khanna family has grown. She became more comfortable in the place. Neil still hasn't gotten any information on Mishti's guardian.
Sweata:(to Avni)"Avni beta hum log ja rahe hain. Tum aapna or mishti ka dhayan rakhna ok."
Avni:"haan mummy ji aap tension mat lo"
Sweata ,Neela, Prakash and bebe left to their destination While Neil was getting ready to go to the police station.
In Avneil room..
Neil:(on phone with dd,while Avni entered)"haan dd...theek hai....or kuch pata chalta hai toh batana....or haan ragu pandit ke bare me kuch pata chala....?"
Dd:(on phone)"sir woh ek info Mili hai..."
Neil:"ok great. Me 10 min me aa raha hoon.."(he kept the phone down and turned to she Avni) Aare Avni tum kab aaye. Mishti kahan hai. Neeche hogi na sabke pass"
Avni:"nahi woh so rahi hai. Aur sab log bahar gaye hai."
Neil:"accha theek hai. Main office ja raha hoon. jaldi aane ki khoshis karonga. "(He said kissing in her forehead )
Avni:"okay"
Neil:"(seeing mishti standing on the door)"Mishti aap uth Gaye?"
Mishti:"good morning "
Avni:"good morning Mishti "
Neil:"good morning "(Neil goes and kisses Mishti on the cheek)
Mishti:(stopping Neil who was about to go by holding his hands)"or angel ka?"
Neil:"kya"(Avneil look on confused )
Avni:(confused) "Mishti mujhe kya"
Mishti:"angel ko kissy nahi di aapne supermen "
Neil:(seeing Avni who now was blushing) "woh...woh...."(He said as he moved his hand through his hair)
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Mishti:"maine dekha tha car main jab hum kamirpur se aa rahe the"
Avneil Remembers the car incident and blushes while look at mishti shocked.
Flashback.....
Avni:"haan"
Neil:(Trying to lighten the atmosphere) "waise tum mishti ke aate muhje hi bul gayi"
Avni:"kya, Main tumhe kab bholi"
Neil:"Nahi bholi ( he asked as he started coming closer looking at her lips. The car was stopped at a red light )
Avni:(pushing him away) "Nahi bholi hoon theek hai. Ab tum mat bholo ki we are in a public place and you are driving a car"(she said as she pointed towards the red light which had turned green)
Neil:(making an grumpy face he started to drive)"hmmmm"
Seeing him all grumpy, Avni smiles and moves closer and kisses his cheeks. Neil gets shocked by the sudden act.
Neil:(Shocked) "Yeh...Yeh kya tha?"
Avni:"jo tumhe chahiye tha aur jisko liye tum gussa ho gaya the.."
Neil:"accha ab public me nahi hai hum"(he said with a smirk )
Avni:"Neil focus on driving "
Mishti:(waking up)"aap log kya baat kar rahe ho"
Flashback ends..
Mishti:"maine dekha tha angel ko kissy dete hua"
Avni:(feeling shy and trying to change the topic)"Neil tumhe late ho rahe hai na"
Mishti:"phele kissy "
Avni was about to say that there is no need for that when Neil gave her a kiss on her cheek.
Avni:(shocked) "yeh...yeh...kya....tha"(She asked stammering )
Neil:(smiling) "main ja rahe hoon. Bye Mishti....Bye wify"
At police station, Neil was talking to dd about some cases and was really busy. After 2~3hr, Neil was working on some file when he sees Mishti standing by the door.
Neil:(confused seeing Mishti alone)"mishti aap yahan akele"
Mishti:"superman!!"(she runs towards him and hugs him)
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Neil:(hugging Mishti) "Mishti aap yahan kya kar rahe ho or Avni Kahan hai"
Mishti:"woh actually main Ali bhaiya ke saath aayi thi ice cream khane phir mujhe aapke friend dd uncle yahan dikhe toh main under aayi..."
Neil:"or Avni woh Kahan hai"
Mishti:"woh toh...."
Flashback.....
Mishti is playing in her room. After few minutes Avni enters.
Avni:(coming in with Mishti's favorite dish)"Mishti dekho me kya layi hoon aapki favorite dish"
Mishti:"thank you angel"
Mishti was eating her dish when Avni's phone rang.
Avni:(picking up the phone)"hello ...kya...per....ok I am coming.."
Avni:(in tension)"mishti aap kha chuke "
Mishti:"haan. kya Hua angel "
Avni:"nothing come with me."
Avni took mishti out of the house and locked the door then she sat in a rickshaw and went to Ali's cafe.
Ali:(was busy servings the customers when he saw Avni enter with Mishti) "Avni tu or Mishti yahan ? Hi mishti how are you "
Mishti:"fine"(She said with a sweet smile)
Avni:"Ali tu mishti ka khayal rakhna until I came back."
Ali:"haan theek hai per Avni tu ja Kahan rahi hai and Neil woh Kahan hai"
Avni:"Ali Neil police station Gaya hai or ab koyi saval nahi I am going okay chal bye"(Saying that Avni rushed out)
Ali:"okay Mishti first we will eat poha and than we will do masti."
Mishti:"yeah!!!"
Flashback ends....
Neil:"usko call aaya and she got tensed?"(He asked himself confused )
Ali:(from the background) "Mishti Mishti aap Kahan ho"
Neil:(going outside )"Ali Mishti yahan hai"
Ali:"oh thank god"
Neil signals dd to take Mishti away for a bit.
Ali:"Neil main jata hun tum mishti ko ghar le jana"
Neil:(stopping Ali)" Ali tum ko pata hai kya ki avni Kahan gayi hai..."
Ali:"nahi muhje laga tunhe pata hoga "
Neil told ali everything that mishti told him.
Ali:"Neil don't worry she will be back....."
Neil:(nodding) "yeah maybe your right, thanks"(Saying that Ali leaves )
Neil:(thinking to himself) Avni yaar tum kahan ho..."
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