《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 10|Neil's care for Avni
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Here we go...
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Neil and avni were lost in their eye lock in the pool when dd came back looking for them.
dd:(seeing avneil) "ahem ahem"(he said breaking their eyelock )
Neil:"dd woh..."
dd:"koyi baat nahi sir we will meet at night for the meeting "(he leaves)
Avni and Neil go to hotel room. After an hour or so.
Avni:(sneezing and talking to herself) "yaar because of this Neil I got sick '' sick and now what will I do"(Neil is by restroom door laughing)
Avni:"Neil tum Haas rahe ho , very bad go I won't talk to you"
Neil:(goes towards A who is sitting on the bed )" Avni yaar sorry. esehi haasi aa gayi "(Avni get up from bed and goes to the couch)
Neil:"mujhe se door ja rahi hi? waise kanon ke haath bahut laambe hote hai "( goes and sits on the couch)
Avni:"per Abhi mere ye nank(nose) bahut thandi hai, so Mr.Neil Khanna kuch solution hai?"
Neil:"han hai na yeh "(taking the bowl of soup )
Neil feeds avni with his hands and avni just looks at him with loving and caring eyes
Avni:(seeing at Neil's clothes) "Neil tum kahan ja rahe ho"
Neil:"ek meeting hai I will just go and came back as soon as I can ok"
Avni: "ok"
Neil goes, when he was about to go to his car he sees Ali checking in.
Neil:(going toward Ali)" Ali tum yahan? "
Ali:"haan woh actually cafe ke kaam se aaya tha "
Neil:"ok"
Ali:"tum yahan"
Neil:"haan woh main or Avni honeymoon pe aaye hain "
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Ali:"oh ok"
Ali:"tum kahi ja rahe ho "
Neil:"haan kuch kaam se "
Ali:"or Avni?"
Neil:"woh room main hai"
Ali:(to himself) " this is the right point I can spend time with Avni and no Neil disturbances "
Neil:"ali ...ALI!!!"
Ali:"haan"
Neil:"main chalta hoon"
Neil left and Ali went to his room to keep his backpack and than to the place by the hotel to plan a surprise for Avni.
Neil:(going to start the car)" haan dd bus nikle raha hoon"
dd:"sir meeting is cancelled for a week so enjoy your honeymoon, actually 5i am heading back to home they said due to weather at their place they can't come here"
Neil:"ok"(cuts the call and goes to room)
Avni:"Neil tumhari meetings?"
Neil:"woh cancel ho gayi "
Avni:"Neil tumhe pata hai hotel ke samne landslide hua hai"
Neil:"accha"
Avni:"haan "
At the place by hotel
Ali:"avni ab tak aayi kyun nahi ,main avni ko leke aata hoon"
Person:"sir landslide hua hai aap hotel nahi ja sakte"
Ali:"kya landslide? ab main raat me Kahan rahonga?"
Person: I have a cottage you can spend night there"(he left)
Ali:"are yaar , ab agar Avni came here before the landslide than its good"
Ali asked the person about if he saw a girl but he said no
Ali:"call karke puchta hoon"
On call
Receptionist:"hello how may I help you"
Ali:"is the room 521 guests in there room"
Receptionist:"yes sir ,just now her husband also came"
Ali:"ok"(cuts the call)
Ali:"yaar now I am stuck and avneil are together"(angry)
Hotel.
Neil:"Avni do you know Ali is her too ,for some cafe work,in the same hotel?"
Avni:"what Ali here"(she felt something wrong)
Avni:"waise Neil tumhari meeting kyun cancel hoyi?"
Neil:"woh actually main upni wify ko akele chord ke nahi ja na chahata tha."
Avni:"neil sach bolo..."
Neil:(laughing)"weather issue ki wajah se meeting cancel hoyi, accha ab tum chalo rest karo"
Avni:"neil woh main nahi so sakthi"
Neil:"kyun"
Avni:"tumhe pata hai na I just slept few hr back and I am not sleepy "
Neil:"ok we can talk until you sleep"
Avni:"per neil your sleep?"
Neil:"I am also not sleepy"
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Sorry for the short update , actually I was not feeling well so I wrote less.
Plz comment if you liked it.
Precap: "will ali separate avneil or there will be a twist "
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