《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 8|honeymoon!!
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So guys I am here with my next update.
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I hope you like this one too.
So here we go.
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Avni:"nothing he is not listening to me now how I will make him ready for honeymoon"
Neela: "Avni bacha give Neil some time"
Avni:"okay"(she goes home , next morning at Neil's office )
Avni:(standing out side police station on call )"Bebe aap sure ho"
Bebe:"haan puttar just do it "
Avni:"per kahan"
Bebe:"something high"
Avni:"okay"
In Neil's cabin.
Neil:"dd woh kaam jo bola tha ho gaya?"
dd:"haan sir ?"(they hear some sound)
Neil:"dd go and check where the sound is coming from"
dd:"yess sir"(dd goes out and sees Avni on cabinet)
Avni:(on cabinet and everyone around her)"suicide suicide"
incpector 1:"maam ji came down plz"
dd:(seeing this runs to call Neil)"sir , sir woh..... "
Neil:"kya dd"
dd:"woh basanti I mean bhabhi"
Neil:"what?"(and goes out to see what happened)
Neil saw Avni and thought that she is doing this for honeymoon.
Avni:"main aaj yahan me suicide karongi"(Neil kept starting at her)
inspector1:"per kyun maam"
Avni:(pointing towards Neil) "aap ke boss ki wajah se, I asked him to take me out on honeymoon but he said no due to that I will sucide today. and when someone dies you don't get rain in rainy season !"
inspector:(scared) "sir..."
Avni:"you will not get chocolate in winters "
inspector:"sirrrr"
Avni:"no ice cream in summer "
Bebe:(on Bluetooth) "don't forget aataa"
Avni:"aataa, aataa!!"
everyone and avni get confused.
Everyone: "aataa ?"
Avni:(slowly asked bebe without letting anyone know) "Bebe aataa mutlab"
Bebe:"kyunki aataa Kahan pista hai"
Avni:(to everyone) "haan haan , than Neil will go to jail and will be aataa pising pising...."
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Than suddenly Avni slipped and fell but Neil caught her in his arms. Avneil had a eyelock for a long time. Everyone seeing them left to there work except dd.
dd:"ahem ahem sir ye police station hai"
Neil and avni broke of there eyelock.
Avni:(taking out the Bluetooth)"woh bebe ka plan tha, so honeymoon?"
Neil:"haan haan baba we are going on honeymoon "
Avni:"thank you, thank you Neil...."(she goes from there)
dd:"toh sir aap Kahan ja rahe hain"
Neil:"kamirpur "(*guys I made up the name so you guys could imagine any place you want*)
dd:(confused) "per sir hum you wahan Jane wale the na?"
Neil:"haan dd ,main dono kaam so saath karonga. Subhe Avni ko ghumana and raat me meeting ."
dd:"per sir bhabhi?"
Neil:"Avni won't know anything "
At home Avni starts packing her bag when bebe and sweata enter.
Sweata:"putter I know you will be able to make Neil ready for honeymoon, go and enjoy a lot ok."
Avni:"Hain mummy ji "(smiling)
Bebe:"putter mera plan kaam kar Gaya na "
Avni:"haan bebe per main toh embarrase oh gayi na"(they all start laughing thinking about situation than Neil entered)
Neil:"what are you all laughing at?"
Avni:"Neil woh..."(got cut off in the middle)
Bebe:"woh bashanti kesi thi "(started laughing)
Neil:(laughing)"must thi"
Avni:"Neil!!"(avni felt embarrassed)
Sweata:"accha chalo Avni ne packing karli now go on to your honeymoon."
Neil:"haan mom ja rahe hain"( he takes suitcase from bed and goses down to car)
Avneil take family members blessings and go of for honeymoon.
At Ali's house....
Ali:"I got their destination from dd now have to know the excuse to go there."
Ali:(got an idea)" nannu I am going to kamirpur for some urgent work ok "
Nannu:"per kyun beta "
Ali:"woh cafe ke kaam se."
Nonnu:"go and come back fast."
Ali also heads of to kamirpur.
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So guys hope you liked my update.
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I will update soon.
Precap: "will Ali separate avneil,
how will Avni reacts to Neil going to kamirpur for work not for honeymoon to find out keep reading ."
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