《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 7|Are they going?
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So guys I am here with my new update.
I hope you liked it.
Thanks for all nice comments and votes.
All of your guesses were good but to know the real villain keep reading.
If you got it right than congrats so here we go.
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Neil:"I can't go on honeymoon!!"(everyone was shocked)
Sweata:"kya tillu kyun, kyun nahi?"
Neil:"mom woh actually mujhe kaam hai , ek case hai. I need to solve it urgently. Toh no honeymoon ,sorry"
Avni:(in her mind)"haan haan why would he go with me , koyi kaam waam kuch nahi hai bus ek bahana hai mare saath nahi jaane kha "
Neil:(in mind)"avni mujhe tumhare saath jane hai per I can't. "
Avni:(still in mind)"Neil tum na bagard bille , idiot ,stupid ,monkey ho...(angry )"
Neil:"(In mind)"haan haan avni mujhe paata hai tum mujhe bagard billa, monkey , idiot bol rahi hogi per..."(he got disturbed)
Sweata:"Neil khahan kahan kho gaye tum"
Neil:"nothing mom ,so final no more discussion, no honeymoon"
Bebe:"Neil per..."
Neil:"nahi Bebe..."(and left to room)
Bebe:(to Avni)"Avni "
Avni:"haan Bebe.."
Bebe:"tu Neil ko mana na"
Avni:"Bebe Neil buzy hai let it be"
Sweata:"nahi Avni tum Neil ko manao mare liye plz"
Avni:"per mummy ji woh.."
Sweata:" nahi you will make him go I know you can do this"
Avni:"okay..."(she went to room)
Prakash:"sweata ji why did you tell her that?"
Sweata:"prakash ji dekho Avni Neil ko mana ke he rahe gi I know and they will go to honeymoon"(whole family smiled)
In Avneil room...
Neil was talking to dd when Avni came in.
Neil:"haan dd be ready tomorrow "(cuts the call. He sees avni and get busy in his files)
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Avni:(walking towards Neil)" Neil woh mummy ji ne kaha ki woh..."
Neil:(smiling inside )"Avni woh file dena"
Avni:"file ?"
Neil:"haan file dedo na plz"
Avni:(getting angry due to neil ignoring her)"here take"
Neil:"(enjoying inside)"thanks"
Avni:"Neil listen to me"
Neil:"haan bolo na avni"
Avni:"neil woh we will go on honeymoon ok"
Neil didn't respond.
Avni:"neil....NEIL!!!!"
Neil:"haan what did you say"
Avni:(angry)"tumne kuch nahi sona "
Neil:"sorry woh I was busy in the file why what did you say"
Avni:"Neil woh...(got cut off in middle)"
Neil:"Avni can we talk later I need to work now"
Avni:(angry going out of room and talking to herself)"Neil tum na , itne busy ho ki meri baat sone ka time nahi hai"
Neil:(in mind, smiling)" Avni ,I know tum mujhe honeymoon ke liye manane aayi thi ,but sorry I also need little fun!!!"
In neela's house .
Neela got a phone call.
Neela:"hello"
Ali:"hello aunty how are you ?"
Neela:"I am fine, just came back home so tired"
Ali:"from where?"
Neela:"Avni's house ,woh I gave them honeymoon packet"
Ali:"honeymoon!!!"
Neela:(heard a knock on the door)" Ali I will talk to you later bye"(cuts call)
At Ali's house.
Ali:(to himself)"honeymoon,no Avni is only mine I will not let Avni and Neil became one "(anger)
At neela's house.
Neela opens the door to see Avni.
Neela:"avni tum yahan?"
Avni:"maa mujhe tension ho raha hai being me chocolate"
Neela:(got chocolate)"why tension"
Avni:"maa woh Neil "
Neela:(tension)"Neil ko kya hoya"
Avni:"nothing he is not listening to me now how I will make him ready for honeymoon"
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Sorry guys for the short update , I was really busy.
Plz comment if you like it .
If you guessed Ali as villain you were right
I hoped you liked it. I will update soon again sorry for little update.
Precap: "how does Avni make Neil ready for honeymoon, will Ali be able to make avneil separate or there will be another twist"
keep reading to know....!!!!
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