《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 6|Avni's Proposal
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Neil was at police station talking to dd about ragu pandit case. At home Sweata went in Avneil's room and saw Avni crying on the floor having Neil's photo in her hands.
Sweata:(going toward Avni) "Avni! Avni beta kya hua beta?"
Avni:(wiping her tears) "nahi mummy ji main woh actually....."
Sweata:"mujhe sab pata hai, Neil ne sab bata diya Hai"
Avni:"aapko sab pata hai?? aapko kya pata hai?"
Sweata:" I know beta, you also love Neil I have seen it in your eyes. I also know that you think that you are not right for Neil and he deserves someone better than you. But beta you need to know you are the best for Neil and he loves you alot. I will show you wait!(she goes to the drawer and get few things)
Avni:"yeh kya hai mummy ji"
Sweata:"beta tumhe yaad hai jab Neil aur Rea ki shaadi thi, tab ek din main Neil ke room, woh apartment wala room, me gayi thi and I saw that he had pictures of you and stuff about you all around the room hidden. "
Avni:" about me? (little shock but happy)
Sweata:" and case 123 he had made it his passion and I don't know when that passion became into pyaar, beintehaan pyaar! "
Avni:(Her tears had stopped and she was happy inside) "aur yeh kya hai mummy ji"
Sweata:"yeh, yeh ring hai jo woh tumhare liye laya tha, he said to me jab main avni ko aapne dil ki baat khahonga tab I will make her were this ring! "
Avni:" mere liya per mummy ji aapko pata hai na ki mara past Neil ke liye...... Woh"
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Sweata:"Avni tumhe mujhpe trust hai?
Avni: "haan mummy ji"
sweata:"tumhe Neil pe trust hai"
Avni:"haan"
Sweata:"than we both are telling you , you are the best wife and the best bahu anyone can have"(listening to her Avni had tears in her eyes)"Avni plz tum mere neil ke saath hamesha rehna, Avni promise me you will never leave me, neil, and our family plz beta . "
Avni:(crying)"mummy ji main appke aur Neil or is family ke saath hamesha rahungi . Mummy ji aapko pata hai Neil always used to say to me that god gave me a second chance to have father, mother and dadi and he was right aap log ne muhje itna pyaar diya hai thank you, thank you so much "(they both hugged each other , Avni felt that at that point all her mothers (Neela ma, Aisha ma , and Sweata ma )were hugging her, at that point she felt the like she was the luckiest person on this planet "
Sweata:"chalo now call Neil and tell him your feeling "
Avni:" per woh kahan gaya hai"
Sweata:"opps I forgot, Neil toh police station gaya hai"
Avni:"police station?"
Sweata:"hain woh dd ka call that kuch case ke bare me baat karni thi"
Avni:"oh ok"
Sweata:"pata mujhe especially bola tha ki mom avni ko bol dena per main hi bhol gayi"(they both started laughing)"now go and call him and tell him your feeling go"(Avni nodded her head and smiled , as sweata went. Avni called neil )
Phone Convo.
Neil:"hello, haan avni kya hua?"(he said looking through his files )
Avni:"woh actually Neil.."
Neil:"hain Avni bolo..."
Avni:"Neil tum busy ho? ghar kab aaoge?"
Neil:(keeping his files down)"nahi busy nahi hoon, I am just going to my car will be at home in 10 mins"(he said as she walked out of the his cabin and signalled dd that he is leaving )
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Avni:"nahi Neil kya tum beach wale mountain ke paas aa sekte ho?"
Neil:"haan per kyun Avni "
Avni:"Neil just meet me there na please. "
Neil:"ok come I will meet you there"
At the mountain by beach (*by the way this is where they met the first time*)
Avni stood by railings looking at the beautiful sight, Neil come to her from back confused at why she called him here.
Neil:"Avni main aa gaya, kya hua why did you call me here?"
Avni:"Neil, do you remember this place where we first met ?"
Neil:"yes how can I forget our first meeting spot"(saying this he smiled thinking about their memories)
Avni:"Neil , pata hai when I saw you for the first time I hated you so much , I thought you were like the other cops. I thought you are always ruining my plan but than after meeting you few times I thought you are a good guy who will keep every one happy and you are not like other police officer.(Neil smiled at this)Neil you started turning me into the real me .when I tried to break your and Rea's wedding, one of the reasons were I couldn't let Dayavanti Mehta destroy your life and your family trust. I didn't know why I used to get tensed and take care for you . Than we got married and I got a really good friend in you .
Neil:(smiling and was so happy)"Avni .."
Avni:(going down on her knee)"Neil I don't know when I fell in love with you, but I did. I LOVE YOU NEIl, I REALLY REALLY LOVE YOU!! will you except this unperfect girl? (just than avni brought up the ring and held it up to him (*just like in the picture above)
Neil:(picking Avni up)"Avni , (putting the ring in avni's ring finger) I love you ,I love you a lot Avni and I will except you my Perfect wify!"
Avni:(hugging Neil)" I love you my super cop hubby "
Neil:"what did you say?"
Avni:(smiling)" hubby , my hubby Mr. Neil Khanna"
Neil:(full of joy)"Avni I will always be with you and I will never ever leave you , I love you"
Avni:(breaking the hug)"chalo ghar pe sab wait kar rahe hoge"
Neil:"haan"
Neil and Avni headed home, entering the house holding each others hand
Sweata:"wait ,wait"
Neil:(confused)"kya hua mom"
Sweata:"finally happiness is coming aarti toh uthar ne do"
Avni ,Neil and all family memebers got a smile on there face. Sweata did aarti and every one left for their rooms .
In Avneil room.
Neil:(to Avni, while laying on the bed)"Avni tumhari waja se sab theek ho gaya"
Avni:"mari waja se? I didn't do anything"
Neil:"accha leave it , I wish now every thing in fine is our life"
Avni:"yeah ,chalo so jao raat bahut ho gayi hai"
They slept. Next morning at the breakfast table , the whole family was having breakfast.
Bebe:"I am really happy my whole family is together"
Sweata:"haan bebe"
Neela:(entering house)"ek aur good news hai"
Bebe:"oh Neela come in , good news what tell tell"
Neela:"Bebe woh maine Avni or Neil ke liya honeymoon plan kiya hai"
Avneil:(shocked)"honeymoon!!!"
Bebe:"good Neela , it's a very good news"
Sweata: "haan Neela ji aapne bahut accha kiya"
Neil:" I can't go on honeymoon!"(all look at him shocked )
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P recap:
Someone:(anger)"i will not let avneil be together, never !!!"
Will Avni be able to make Neil ready for their honeymoon !
Will that person separate Avneil
keep reading to know
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