《Avneil - being with you》Chapter 5|Neil's confession

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Here we go.

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Neil and Avni are on there way back to khana house.

Avni:"Neil thank you very much"

Neil:"for what"

Avni:"for making my birthday the best birthday ever. You know something, after my mom's death I used to not like celebrating my birthday because I thought that my birth was a mistake and I am a big mistake "

Neil:"Avni your not a mistake! Your the most best gift to your parents, and for people that think that, they don't know the real you if they did, they will fall in love with you like I did"

Avni:"what!?"

Neil:"I mean they will love you as a friend"(to himself)" Avni if I tell you my feeling right now you will kill me , first I will make sure you love me too"

Avni and Neil arrived at home.

Sweata:"look they came"

Bebe:"where were you ?"

Sweata:" Neil I dont know what you did but I know you made Avni happy and for that good job tillu"(she said showing thumbs up towards him)

Prakash:" go in your room and relax"(Neil and Avni went in room)

Avni:"Neil main change karke aati hoon"

Neil:(put his arms around avni's waist and pulles her closer ) " first call me hubby"

Avni:"Neil what has happend to you leave me"

Neil:"first say"(just than Bebe comes)

Babe:"oh ho puttar close the door than do romance"( Avneil got separated)

Neil:"Bebe woh actually she was..."

Bebe:"Neil plz no details keep your private staff to youself tillu" (she went laughing )

Avni:(angry)"Neil yaar tum sab karo and they tease me "

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Neil:"sorry I didnt know she will come but now she is gone so lets continue" ( he said with a smile)"

Avni:"continue what "(Neil pulls her closer)

Avni:(joking)"papa ji"

Neil:(pushing Avni away as Avni ran in restroom )"papa woh" (he turns and see no one there)"Avni ab tum dekho, I will make you call me your hubby "

In the evening , Avni was in her room talking to herself.

Avni:"yeh muhje kya ho raha hai, am I falling for neil? why do I feel good when he touches me? why do I like to spend time with him ?why?"

Neil stood by the door listening to her and smiling.

Neil:(to himself)"matlab she loves me but how do I make her realize it?"

Avni:(still didn't see Neil)"kya muhje pyaar ho gaya hai? nahi yeh pyaar nahi hai , hai na?

Neil:(comes and stand behind her. Then slowly bends to her level and whispers her ears )"hai pyaar hai"

Avni:(shocked and turns around)"Neil tum...wo....woh main ...actually"

Neil:(taking avni's hands in his own)"Avni pata hai when I saw you for the first time I thought that you are some normal girl who lived her normal life. But after meeting you few times I started to think that you are a very unique, you were not like a girl who lived her life in dreams waiting for a prince charming, you were not the girl who know how to fight but don't have courage to stand up. You always stood up for yourself, you even made me less in front of you.(Avni by this point had tears in her eyes listening to neil.)

Avni:"Neil ..."(she got cut off)

Neil:"wait Avni let me finish. so where was I. Yeah, so than suddenly we got married I hated you for lying to me, I thought why are you always lying to me? Why are you so strict and hard, than I got to know your story. The real you! After our marriage I saw the Avni hidden behind Ananya varma. I don't know when I fell in love with you. Before marriage, after Dayavanti Mehta was put to jail. I just don't know. All I know is that I love you , I love you a lot Mrs.Avni Neil khanna!!(and saying this he went out)

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Avni:(full with tears) "Neil tum ek bhut acche insan ho, I can't destroy your life. My past, my birth will mess you up and your family life" (she fell to the ground and started crying. )

Downstairs

Sweata:(seeing Neil come down sad , she felt that he had been crying a minute ago)" Neil kya hua beta why were you crying, Neil bol na"

Neil:"nothing mom" (sweata takes Neil to the kichen where there is a mini breakfast table)

Sweata:"sit down and tell me what happened, tillu apni mom ko nahi bata sakta"

Neil:"mom woh actually I love avni."

Sweata:"and you don't want to loose her but she thinks her past will destroy your life and you deserve someone better right!"

Neil:"yes mom but how do you know"

Sweata:"because I am your mom. But you know something I have seen love and care in Avni's eyes for you. She really loves you a lot, she just thinks she doesn't deserve you."

Neil:"but mom what should I do"

Sweata:"nothing I will talk to her, you have to give her time to understand ok"

Neil:"ok mom thanks"

Sweata:"thanks? Mentions not! (suddenly the phone rang)

Neil:(picking up the phone)" Haan dd what happened? "

DD:" sir woh case ragu pandit ke bare me kuch information mili hai so can you please come here, sorry for disturbing but it's urgent "

Neil:" ok dd I am coming in a bit (cuts the call) mom woh...."

Sweata:"Haan Haan Mr. Super cop I know you have to go to police station go."

Neil:"mom aap avni ko bol dena, I have to go bye,"

Sweata:"haan go, I will tell her."

Neil leaves and Sweata goes to Avni's room.

In the police station

Neil:(arriving) "Haan dd kya hua bolo"

DD:" ji sir woh ragu pandit ke ek aur racket ka kulasa hua"

Neil:"good dd"

DD:"per sir we still have no clue about ragu pandit except his name"

Neil:"it's fine, we have proceeded a lot ,soon we will arrest him too!"

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So guys that all for this update.

I hope you guys like it.

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Precap: Avni propose Neil.

*guys there is a big twist coming up Soon!*

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