《Naamkaran ✔️》AvNeil in Goa
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Next day.. Aman and Neav left for their mini picnic.. And after sometime.. Neil and Avni also left for Goa..
Rab kare.. inke bich jitni anban ho sab dur ho jaaye..
Ye dono apne kaam mai itne busy rehte hai ki dono sath mai waqt bita hi nahi sakte..
Sahi kaha.. jabse Avni vapas aayi hai.. Inki shaadi huyi hai.. Neil apne kaam mai rehta hai.. or Avni Neav ke saath.. ya tino saath.. lekin Avni or Neil ne ekele waqt hi nhi bitaya..
Haan.. Bas dono khush rahe..
And they go back to their work..
After few hours.. Avni and Neil reach Goa..
Neil.. hum konsi hotel jaa rahe hai..
Koi bhi nahi..
Henn to hum rahege kaha..
Wait wifey.. pata chal jaayega..
Later they reach a house..
Avni.. hum yaha rahege..
yaha..
Haan... Acha laga..
I love it Neil..
Abh chale.. fir ghumne bhi jaana hai..
Haan..
Both get changed.. Neil was wearing blue jeans and White Shirt.. and Avni was wearing off shoulder light pink colour kurti..
They visited different places.. Beaches, mall, Church.. and many more..
It was evening near by 6.. They were at beach..
Avni was sitting between Neil's leg resting her back head on his chest.. and Neil has wraped his hand around her..
Neil..
Hmm..
Tum ne Coorg jaane ke liye kyu mana kiya..
Kyu tumhe yaha maja nahi aa raha..
Aa raha hai na.. bas ese hi pucha..
Mai tumare saath akele mai waqt bitana chahta hu isilye..
Pata hai Avni.. jo waqt hum inn 5 saalo mai nahi je paaye vo mai jeena chahta hu.. tumare saath..
Jab tak tum mere saath ho.. sab acha hoga..
Neil kissed her forehead..
I love you Neil..
I love you too Avni..
Abh ghar chale..
ab.. nahi.. thodi der or beth te haina..
Thik hai..
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Vaise Avni... Tum chaho to muje return gift de sakti ho..
Avni understood what Neil was trying to say..
Return gift kis baat kaa.. Tumne muje kaha koi gift diya..
Acha.. to koi ni abhi de deta hu..
Neil was going to kiss her..and She stand...
ab.. chalo chalte hai.. muje bhook lagi hai..
Kyaa yr Avni...
Kya.. muje sach mai bhook lagi hai..
Neil make a sad face.. By seeing this Avni smiles and Immediately kiss his cheeks and ran towards the Car..
Neil shocked.. He smiles and ruffle his hair..
As they reach the pent house.. A girl was waiting for Neil.. Neil saw her.. and went outside..
Ohh.. so everything done..
Yesss..
Neil shake his hand with her.. and thanked him.. By seeing this Avni also came out.. Neil decided to tease Avni..
He started flirting with her.. Avni sees this and fumes in anger..
Bete Neil.. Ladydon ko jaga raha hai..
Avni cames towards them..
Tum logo ki baate ho gayi ho to chale..
Neil suppress his laughter..
Haan chalte haina..
Ok.. bye.. Vapas jarur milege..
Haan baad mai mil lena abh chale..
Neil understood that now he is gone..
As the girl left.. Avni started beating him on his shoulder..
Are..Avni.. maar kyu rahi ho..
ussi ke layak ho tum.. sharam nahi aati biwi saamne kadhi hai.. or tum flirt kiye jaa rahe ho..
Nahi Avni.. mai to sirf baat kar raha tha..
Achaa.. oh baby.. Hello sweety isse tum baat karna khete ho.. Or kon thi vo..
Pata.. tum jealous hoti ho to or bhi jyada Khubsurat lagti ho.. sachi..
He came close to her.. But Avni push him..
Acha baba sorry.. Acha chalo tumare liye ek surprise hai..
Huh.. Not interested..
Yr.. sorry na.. please chalo na.. (making cute innocent face)
Acha thik hai..
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Neil keep his palm on her eyes..
Neil..
shhh.. Mai hu na.. chalo..
They enter.. And whole area was decorated with candles and rose petals.. Two plate were kept on the dining table.. and Everything was decorated..
Neil remove his palm and Avni slowly open her eyes.. Avni was surprised..
Neil.. yeh sab..
Haan.. yeh sab tumare liye..
Tumne ye sab kab kiya..
Bahar vo ladki aayi thi na.. vo decorations vaale thi..
oo.. acha..
Haan..
He turn Avni around.. and keep his hand on her waist.. and Avni encircled her hands around his neck..
Oo.. iss.. vagah se.. tum muje beach pe or thoda beth ne ko khe rahe the.. Tumara yeh style.. Avni Khanna ko bahut pasand aaya..
Neil smiles..
Then they both have dinner.. They both feed each other..
After dinner.. Avni was standing near pool.. And Neil came and hug Avni from back..
Kya.. soch rahi ho Avni..
Kuch nahi..
Neil turns Avni.. and was going to kiss her lips.. but Avni push Neil and Neil falls in the pool..
Ahhh..
Avni laughs...
Avni ki bachiii..
Mr. Neil Khanna.. tumari punishment hai.. uss se flirt karne ki..
Avni yr.. Chalo abh hath to do..
Khud aa jaavo..
Neil makes a face.. Avni laughs..
Acha. Thik hai chalo..
She forwarded her hand.. and Neil pulls her in the pool..
Ahhh..
Abh Neil Khanna se majak karogi to esa hi hoga..
Avni was about to move.. but Neil pulls her.. Both shares the eyes lock.. Neil put her hairs behind...Neil shirt was wet his body was clearly seen through white shirt.. Avni looks down..Neil was staring at her.. Neil kiss her forehead.. Later he kiss her on her eyes.. cheeks.. and looking to her lips.. Avni understood and before Neil could do something.. Avni puts her lips on his.. Neil was shocked but after a while he also reciprocate.. The kiss was passionate.. Neil turns Avni.. And he make him stand.. like her back hits his chest.. Neil moves her hairs.. and place a kiss on her back.. later he kissed on her neck... Avni again turn and hugs Neil.. Avni kiss his cheeks and then on neck.. Neil lift Avni in bridal style and took her in the room.. He laid her on bed.. Room was also decorated with rose petals and candles..Hearessed her head...
I love you Avni.. Hamesha..
I love you too Neil.. Khud se jyada pyaar hai tumse..
Neil again kissed her on her lips..
And Neil dim the light and again they became one soul..
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