《Naamkaran ✔️》Vidyut is death
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Bye Neil Khanna
Neeiilllll...
Before bullet hit Neil Avni came in between and bullet hits Avni on left side..
All were shocked...
Avniiii..
Avni was loosing her balance.. Neil catch her and her head was in Neil's lap..
Vidyut was shocked.. before Vidyut can do anything.. DD shot him to death..
Neil was crying..
Avni.. Avni aakhe kholo avni..
She smiles.. put her one hand on Neil cheek.. She was not able to breathe properly) Neil... Ap.. apna.. oo.. or.. Ne.. Neav.. ka.. dh.. dhyan rakhna..
And she fainted..
Avniii.. Avni please aakhe kholo.. I am sorry yr.. please aakhe kholo.. Avni..
Neil ambulance aane mai time lagega.. hum khudi hospital le jaate hai.. Tu mere saath chal.. bebe Swetha aap log Mitali ke saath aaye..
Haa Neil tum log jaavo mai yaha ki investigation complete karke aayi..
Uski koi jarurt nahi hai.. yeh case mere under mai hai.. mai dekh luga.. sir aap bhabhi ko jaldi le jaaye please..
Neil carry Avni in bridal style.. Praksh was driving and Neil was sitting on back seat with Avni head in his lap..
Avni.. please aakhe kholo.. dekho hum hospital jaldi poch jaayege.. aakhe kholo avni..
But she was not responding..
Avni nahi.. iss baar nahi.. tum muje vapas chod ke nahi jaa sakti.. itni badi saja mat do.. please for god sake aakhe kholo... Papa.. papa Avni..
bass hum poch hi gaye..
They reach hospital.. Neil took Avni inside..
Doctor... Please Avni ko bacha lijiye.. please..
Aap himmat rakhiye.. Nurse please jaldi chalo...
Mitali, Swetha and Bebe reach their..
Praksh ji Avni..
Vo doctor usse andar le gaye hai..
Aaj Avni ne fir saabit kar diya.. ki vo hamesa kitna bhi dur chali jaaye.. Neil usse kitni bhi nafrat kare... Lekin Neil ko avni se zyada or koi pyaar nahi kar sakta..
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Tears rolls down from Neil's eyes..
Haan.. hum dekhte reh gaye..or aaj phir Avni ne apni jaan ki kimat laga di Neil ko bacha ne ke liye..
(while crying) Papa, bebe, mom.. Avni thik ho jaayegi na.. usse kuch hoga to nahi na.. nahi nahi avni tum muje vapas chod ke nahi jaa sakti..
Kuch nahi hoga Avni ko Neil.. Tera pyaar usse maut ke muh se vapas le aayega.. dekhna..
Neil was just seeing Praksh with teary eyes..
Kya ese kya dekh raha hai.. haa mai naraj tha.. lekin abh.. humara purana Neil vapas aa gaya hai.. jiski aakho mai Avni ke liye pyaar,fikar hai gussa or nafrat nahi..
Sunny bilkul thik khe raha hai.. Avni bilkul thik ho jaayegi dekhna..
Neil just nodded and hug bebe and Praksh..
Suddenly a doctor came with some papers..
Dekhiye.. aap log patient ke kya lagte hai..
Before anyone could say..
hum unki family hai..
All were having tears..
Dekhiye aap inn Papers pr sign kar dijiye..
konse papers..
Dekhiye.. unki halat bahut critical ho chuki hai.. hum kuch khe nahi sakte.. isilye ye papers par sign kar dijye.. jisme mai likha hai.. patient ke na bache pr hospital ki koi responsibility nahi hai..
The last line boils Neil blood..
He hold doctor collar..
(in anger) Kya matalb.. kuch khe nahi sakte.. kuch bhi karo.. meri Avni ko kuch nhi hona chahiye..
Tillu kya kar raha hai chod inhe..
Neil realize what he was doing and leaves the collar...
Sorry doctor.. I am really sorry.. please Avni ko bacha lijye please.. 😭
We will try our best..
Praksh sign the paper and doctor goes to OT..
Bebe Avni.. and hug bebe..
Shhh.. bebe rub his back.. kuch nahi hoga usse.. shaant ho jaa..
And Neil's phone rings..
Sunheri ka call..
Neil picks the call..
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Haan bolo Sunheri.. sab thik haina..
Haan Neil sab thik hai.. Avni kesi hai..
Doctor check kar rahe hai..
Don't worry Neil.. sab thik ho jaayega.. Maine isilye call kiya.. kyu ki Neav..
Just as he heard Neav..
Neav.. kya huva usse.. or ha..Vo hai kaha.. School nahi gaya to kaha gaya..
Neil relax.. Neav bilkul thik hai.. Vo Ayesha Aunty ke ghar hai.. Tara Sitara bhi vahi hai..
Ayesha Maa ke ghar..
Haan.. maine sirf isilye call kiya.. mai jaanti hu Neil.. abhi tumara Avni ko chod kar aana mumkin nahi hai.. lekin Neav.. vo aaj phele baar esa hoga ki ghar pr koi nahi hoga.. vo bahut royega.. agar tum aa sako to..
Kya huva Neil..
Mom vo Neav ghar pr akela hoga..
Neil tu jaa.. vo chota bacha hai Neil.. usse inn sab se dur rakhna hai.. usse Avni ke baare mai pata chala.. to bahut royega..
Ji mom..
On call..
Sunheri mai aata hu..
Papa.. mai aaya thodi der mai.. please Avni ki update dete rehna muje..
Praksh nodded.. Neil leave and reaches Khanna house..
Neil park the car and was going inside.. He see the garden area and all flashes came.. what happen just few hours ago.. And a long tear roll down..
Sir ji..
Neil turns back..
DD..
Haan mai aapse hi milne aa raha tha.. Sunheri ko call kiya to pata chala ki aap ghar hi aa rahe ho.. isiliye yaha aaya..
Hmm.. lekin tumhe mujse kyu milna tha... Or Vidyut ka case close ho gaya? I mean tumne Vidyut pe goli chalayi thi.. to tumse koi investigation.. I mean..
aap yahi soch rahe hai na.. ki mujpe Vidyut ko death shot pe koi sawal kyu nahi uthe..
Neil nodded yes..
Jiski Avni Bhabhi jesi Bhabhi ho usse bhala kabhi kuch ho sakta hai 😌
Kya matalb..
I am glad that uh like the previous part..
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