《Naamkaran ✔️》Avni's Decision
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It was 9:30pm but still there were no news of Avni.. All were tensed.. even Neil was tensed..
Sunny tu phone kar na Avni ko kaha hai vo.. abhi tak aayi kyu nahi..
Bebe.. mai kabse try kar raha hu.. lekin uska phone switch off aa rahi hai..
Mai usse dudh kar aaya..
Neil was just going to go but Avni arrived..
All get relief..
Puttar kaha thi tu.. subah se gayab hai.. or tera phone bhi bandh aa raha hai..
Sorry bebe vo kaam mai fass gayi thi or phone ki battery dead ho gayi thi..
Avni.. yeh tere hath ma kya hai.. kis chiz ki file hai..
Avni sees everyone and than file..
Flashback
Are you sure Avniji.. Aap fikar mat kijiye.. hum iska solution nikal lege..
Ji nahi.. mai bilkul sure hu.. or nahi ye pressure mai aake kar rahi hu.. Mai ye apne marji se kar rahi hu..
Lekin Avniji...
Please.. yeh hi mera final decision hai.. please..
Thik hai Avni ji.. aap wait kijye mai formality complete karke aaya..
Avni nodded.. After some time..
Yeh lijye Avni ji..
Avni just smile and leave..
Flashback ends..
Avni was going to speak suddenly Neav came...
Mumma.. I miss you so much..
I miss you too bacha.. and kiss him forehead..
All adore their bond..
Mumma aap ro rahe the.. aap sad kyu hai..
Nahi.. kuch bhi to nahi huva.. aap ke rehte hum kabhi sad ho hi nahi sakte..
Haan.. mai apni mumma ko hamesa happy rakhuga..
Avni closes her eyes take deep breathe..
Bacha agar aaj aapki mumma aapse kuch maange to aap unhone doge..?
Haa lekin mumma meri paas to sirf ek hi chocolate hai.. koi baat nahi aap kha lo..
Avni smiles at his cuteness..
Hame chocolate nahi chahiye.. Hame kuch or chahiye jo aap de sakte ho.. bolo doge..
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Haan duga na..
She closes her eyes ) Kya aap hamesa aapke papa ke sath rahoge..
All was shocked by her words..
Avni puttar..
But she didn't reply..
Nahi.. Mumma please muje aapke saath hi rehna hai.. please muje aapse dur nahi jaana..(He started crying)
Neav.. Bacha rote nahi.. aap to good boy hona.. Acha suno.. humari baat suno.. phele rona bandh karo..
Neav stop crying but still sobbing..
Beta.. aap yaha rahoge to aapko bahut maja aayega.. dekho aaya papa hai, dadu hai, dadi hai, bebe hai.. Or phir Sukoon Ghar mai Samarth Bhaiya, Saisha didi, Neha didi koi bhi to nahi hai.. Tara Sitara didi bhi kaam se bahar jaayegi.. hum or Sunheri didi bhi jaayege.. to aap akele rahoge.. usse acha aap yaha rahoge to itne saare log hai.. Dadu roj aapko park bhi lejaayge.
Agar mai papa ke saath rahuga to aap happy ho jaavoge..
aapse dur reh kar hum kabhi khush nahi reh sakte.. lekin yeh karna jaruri hai..
Avni just nodded..
Neav goes towards Neil and Praksh
dadu.. aaj jo hum saath mai khelne vaale the vo hum kabhi or khele.. aaj mai mumma ke saath rahu.. please..
All were having tears..
They just nodded to yess..
Thik hai mumma.. agar aap Happy ho to papa ke saath rahuga.. lekin aap mujse milne aavoge?..
Hum aapko promise nahi kar sakte.. lekin hum koshish karege..
Neav just nodded..
Sunheri issi Neav ko room mai le jaavo.. hum aate hai..
Sunheri takes Neav to the room..
Yeh lo Neil.. Neav ke legal custody ke papers..
Avni...
Avni yeh kya kar rahi hai tu.. khudko kyu alag kar rahi hai Neav se..
Papaji.. it's ok.. nahi abh muj mai or shakti hai ladne ki or nahi hi takat.. Or jis tarah Mishti ne Juhi ko chod muje accept kar liya tha.. ussi tarah Neav bhi meri jagah Mitali ko accept kar lega..
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Avni.. yeh tum kya bol rahi.. tum khudko Juhi ke saath compare mat karo.. aaj jo court mai huva uske baare mai hum shaanti se bhet kar baat karte hai na..
Dekho Neil.. tumhe Neav ki custody chahaiye thi.. mai ne de di.. kal mai chali jaavugi.. mere paas bas aaj ki raat hai Neav se saath.. please.. at least utna time to spend karne do..
By saying this she left.. and enters Neav room..
Chalo aaj mumma aapko khilate hai..
Neav doesn't speak anything..
Abhi bhi naraj ho.. koi ni aapke liye ek surprise hai mere paas..sunna chahoge..
surprise.. haan batavo na mumma..
Aap khe rahe the na.. aapko mumma chote the tab kese dikhte the vo dekh na hai.. to kal aap school se leave le sakte ho.. or Tara Sitara didi aapko Ayesha Nani ke ghar le jaayege.. aap vaha bahut enjoy karoge..
Sachii.. Ayesha nani..
Haan aapki mumma ki do mumma the.. to aapki do nani..
Uh are the best mumma yeah..mai kal nani ke ghar jaavuga..
Lekin yahi humara secret hai kisi ko batana mat..
Yeahh top secret.. mai kisiko nahi batavuga..
Avni sees towards Sunheri..
Flashback
Kal tum log Neav to Ayesha maa ke ghar le jaana.. or vaha team 123 bhi vahi hoge..
thik hai lekin tuje team 123 kaha mile..
vo mai graveyard se aa rahi thi tab mile..
Avni kya chal raha hai tere dimag mai..
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Avni tu pagal ho gayi hai kya.. tu esa kuch nahi karegi..
Sunheri tuje or koi rasta dikh raha hai kya.. nahi na.. bas abh yahi ek tarika hai.. please..
They just nodded..
Flashback ends..
After Avni feed neav.. they talk lil.. Avni narrated story while ruffling his hair.. they talk and enjoyed , laughed and giggle..
Chalo Neav 1:00 am ho gaya hai.. chalo abh soo jaavo..
Mumma Lori..
Avni smiles and started singing.. by listening her voice.. Neil, Praksh, bebe and Swetha came and stand at the window..
Kayi jannate tune tofe mai di thi,
Maa khe ke tune jab tha pukara,
Usi lamha sab kuch hame mil gaya tha,
Kuch na khuda see maanga dobara.
Hmm.. hm...hm..
Iss ghar ke aagan mai ek phool naya aaya..
Fir dhoop mai na jaayega dobara,
Iss dhoop si duniya mai maa hoti saya,
Dhoop mai jaayega dobara..
Hmm..mm..hmm..
(Song uh can find on YouTube)
All were having tears..
Avni swipes her tears and kiss him forehead..
I am sorry ma.. mai kal fir aapse kiya vaada tod dugi.. I am sorry muje maaf kardena..
What is Avni upto.. ????
Precape
Avni - please Vidyut.. neav ko kuch mat karna.. please.. tum jo bolege mai vo karugi.. please.. 🥺
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