《Naamkaran ✔️》Neil's anger
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Neil and Avni enter the room.. Neil close the door and sat on bed.. before Avni could speak
Tumhe or kuch pata hai.. kif KK or Saisha kaha ho sakte hai..
nai..lekin vo jungle mai koi goons kese ho sakte haii..
kyu.. koi nahi ho sakta..
kyu ki 3 saal phele vaha kuch police investment ke through vaha sab bandh karva diya tha or jitne bhi illegal activities mai the unhe shoot at site ka order tha..
Haan.. lekin aaj kal kisika bharosa nahi.. log marke bhi jinda hote.. dusre ke emotions ke sath khelne mai unhe bada maja aata hai..
Neil...
batavo kese bachi tum uss aag se..
Avni didn't say anything..Neil again get angry he holds her shoulder tightly...
maine pucha batavo kese bachi tum uss aag se..
vo.. vo maine fire proof shawl cover ki thi.. isislye..
Neil clap and moved around her..
- wow.. what a master mind plan Avni.. he again hold her tightly.. Tumne ek baar bhi mujpe bharosa nahi kiya.. bas khud ki manmani ki.. Police apna kaam kar rahi hi thi.. vo Vidyut ko giraftaar kar leti.. lekin nahi Avni ko to mahan ban na hai (leave her) Tum.. tum Vidyut ki lanka mai gayi aag laagayi.. khud ko mara huva saabit kiya or hum sab ko chod ke chali gayi... (He again hold her shoulder) Tumne ek baar.. ek baar mere baare mai nai socha.. mom,papa, bebe unke baare mai nahi.. Haan.. batavo.. (tears any anger in eyes)
Neil esa nahi hai.. mai.. mai majboor thi..
And suddenly someone knows the door.. Avni get panick.. she run to washroom and close the door.. Neil understand what she meant..as she locked.. Neil goes to door and open it..
Mitali tum yaha.. I mean itni raat ko.. aavo na..
Mitali came inside..
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Neil vo tum itne time tak vapas nahi aaye isislye.. Neil mai jaanti hu tum Avni se aaj bhi bahut pyaar karte ho.. lekin ese kab tak itni late night aate raho ge.. I know muje esa nhi bolna chahiye.. lekin just think of your mom..
Neil was angry..
Mitali... Mai Avni se pyaar karta tha.. Lekin abh.. abh mai Avni se pyaar nahi karta.. maine jaan liya hai.. kisi ke chale jaane se kisi ki Zindagi nahi rukti.. hum yaha uss ki yaad mai tadap rahe hote hai.. or vaha koi nayi Zindagi suru kar dete hai..
Everything was listen by Avni.. she was crying silently..
Neill..
Nahi Mitali.. I am serious.. bahut ho gaya abh past mai nahi jeena.. I moved on from Avni.. (tears in eyes)
Vo sab chodo.. jaan kar acha laga.. jisi meri fikar hai.. mai kab aata hu nahi aata..
And he again sit on bed..
agar Neil Avni se move on kar chuka hai to muje Neil ko avni ke zinda hone ki baat nahi batani chahiye.. Haan.. Neil mera hai.. or abh meri yahi koshish rahegi ki Neil ko Avni ke baare mai kabhi pata na chale..
Neil.. I mean.. agar tum sach mai move on kar chuke ho.. to kya hum humari friendship ko ek chance de...
(After listening this Neil was shocked.. Avni was crying more.. Yes she want that Neil moves on but still handing his Neil to someone else.. is not possible for her )
Mera matalb hai.. mai bhi to tumhe smile karati hu na.. hum humari friendship ki nayi survaat nahi kar sakte.. Neil.. I love you.. I really do...(Neil was hell shocked).. I know uh need time.. Take your time Neil..
With that she smile and leave the room..
Avni was crying by remembering all the flashes of their Happy Moment.. Neil stand and close the main door and opened washroom door.. Avni came out..
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wow.. yaani Mitali bhi jaanti hai ki tum zinda ho.. bas ek mai hi hu.. jisi kuch nahi pata.. great.. (he claped)
nahi Neil.. Mitali ko bhi abhi pata chala jab mai saisha ko dudhne gayi thi..
or usne usne kya kiya.. tumne usse batane ko mana kiya.. or vo ussi baat ka fayda utha rahi hai.. vo jaanti hai ki tum kabhi apna sach saamne nahi laavo gi.. isliye jese hi usse pata chala ki mai move on karna chahta hu... Usne apna confession kar diya...
(Neil smiles) Ek ladki hai to muje paane ke liye juth bol rahi hai.. or ek vo jo muje se dur jaane ke liye juth bol rahi hai.. Sahi hai Neil Khanna..
Neil.. tum kyu itna overreact kar rahe ho.. 5 saal baad mai tumare saamne iss tarah achanak aa gayi isislye tum esa behave kar rahe ho.. kyu apne emotions ko control kar rahe ho... Gussa aa raha hai.. daato chilavo.. maarna hai to maaro Neil.. 😭😭
Tum badal chuki ho Avni.. lekin mai.. Mai aaj bhi vahi Neil Khanna hu jo kabhi bhi kisi bhi aurat par hath nahi utha ta.. Tumhe pata hai kis tarah tadpa hu mai.. apna gum.. apne aasu kisi ke saamne bata bhi bahut nahi sakta tha mai.. Mom,bebe,dad.. sabke ke liye.. hamesa hasta rehta tha mai.. lekin jab raat hoti to.. kabhi khud ko rok nahi paaya.. Kyu kiya tumne esa Avni kyu.. ek baar kheti.. ek baar bharosa karti.. Lekin nahi tum na hi kisi pe bharosa karti ho.. or nahi kise ke bharosa ke layak ho tum..
Or haa uss din raat ke party ke baad.. vo tum hi thi na Avni jo muje Terrence par lekar gayi thi.. bolo..
Avni nodded..
wow.. uss din uss din bhi tum muje sach bata sakti thi lekin nahi tum uss waqt bhi chup thi.. To phir aaj kyu bataya.. bol dete koi or hu.. yaadash chali gayi hai.. at least muje ye lagta ki tum muje bhul chuki ho.. Tum jaanti thi mai tumare bina nahi reh sakta fir bhi tumne esa kyu kiya Avni.. khud se pyaar karne ki saja de rahi ho Avni.. bolo.. uh know what.. tum hamesa vo hi karti ho jo tumari marji hoti hai.. hamesa apni man mani karti ho tum.. tumari issi zid ke vagah se tum humesa apni khushiyo se dur chali jaati ho.. pele Ayesha maa.. fir Aashish mehta.. fir Neela maa.. Fir mai or humari perfect family.. uh know what.. (he cuped her face firmly) I hate uh Avni.. I hate you.. kabhi jitna pyaar kiya tha na.. usse kayi jyada nafrat karta hu mai tumse..
He was going to put his hand down but the mangalsutra tied in his hand get stick with Avni's hair.. He immediately remove for her hair and left the room in anger...
Avni fell down on knee and started crying...
KK and Saisha reached at Neil's house.. by 1:00am
Bheema opens the door.. They saw all were sitting in hall..
Saisha .. tu thik hai..
Saisha and Samarth nodded...
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