《Avniel》Part 23
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Niel comes running to sukoon Ghar and see everybody laughing he get confused . Daisy comes there and hug him
D : bhaiya u came I'm really happy
N ; yeah
A : Niel tum yahan
N : Avni are u okay
A : yes mujhe kya hua hain ( confused )
N : wo phone pe Maine tumhe chilate hue suna toh .. who
A : okay , u know Amol na
N : yes
A : usne mere kaan pe chilaye isliye
N : oh ( relief ) then fine tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya
A : sorry ( cute face )
N : it's okay avni par tum aaj college kyun nahi aai
A : wo mogali ko lag gai thi
N : hmmmm ( thinking : ye mogali bhi naaaaa)
A : waise Niel punishment tumhe nahi mili hain toh Beth jao
N : yeah
Niel sit down Avni was going to sit beside Niel but mogali sit there so avni sit to the other seat
N : (thinking : ye mogali bhi na ) Av..Avni mujhe times kuch baat Karni thi
A : haan bolo
N : Avni aaj subah college ke bahar ek poster laga tha
A : Kis cheez ka
N : b..b..ba..basketball m..ma..match ( looks down )
A : what ( shocked )
N : yes
A : so do you want to join it
N : y..ye...yes but if you don't
A : it's so good ( happy )
N : what ( sees her with shock )
A : yeah , I mean it's good if you are joining it
N : but Avni u know the thing yaar
A : Niel is baat ko 1 saal ho Gaya now just leave it
N : Avni par main
A : Niel usko 2 saal ho Gaye ( Avni keeps her hand on Niels hand and stand him up then she bids bye to everyone and come out of the sukoon ghar ) walk Kare ( smiles)
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Niel nodded in yes . It was quiet silent Niel and Avni were walking hand to hand and Niel was staring Avni and Avni was walking silently after sometime she spoke
A : bas karo ( she says while standing straight and not facing him )
N : u..uhh
A : Niel mujhe ghoorna band karo ( now she sees him with a smile )
N : ( blushing ) n..no
I wasn't staring you
A : really ( raising her eyebrows ) look who is blushing ( giggles )
N : Avni stop teasing me
A : ok , I will not laugh
N : so you will tease
A : ummmm , no ( nodded in no )
N : avniiii
Niel starts chasing Avni and avni starts running
And after sometime both of them tired and started laughing
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