《Avniel》Part 22
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After class all went to canteen except Niel , ali and Riya .
A : Niel kya hua Bhai
R : haan Niel kya hua
N : kuch nahi yaar
A : yaar Niel bata to sahi
N : yaar abi nahi main library jaa raha hun bahaut kaam hain bye
He takes his bag and started going when his mind stuck on Avni
N : Riya Avni kahan hain ?
R : wo aaj nahi aai
N : ( tensed ) k -kyun nahi aai uhh kahin usse fever to nahi kahin usse lagto nahi gai , mujhe bataya kyun nahi bolo chalo chalo him yahan kya kar rahe hain chalo Avni ke pass chalte hain chalo jaldi
A : abbe ruk abi toh tu keh raha tha tere pass bahout kaam hain ab kya
N : arre yaar time waste kyun kar rahe ho chalo
Riya was listening all this while putting her down on the table
N : oye tu so kyun rahi hain
R : main so nahi rahi aur Avni ko kuch nahi hua hain so toh bas sukoon ghar gai hain
N : kyun
R : tu kyun itni puchtach kyun kar raha hain haan tu koi police wala nahin hain
N : dost hun uska
R : accha dost haina (stretching sirf )
A : arre bas karo Avni sukoon ghar kyun gai
R : mogali haina usse lag gai isiliye
N : ( mind ) ye mogali bhi na
Avniiiiii
A : mogali ab dard ho raha hain
M : ( nodded in no ) gf aap kahin mat Jana
A : hmm no way ( phone rings ) hello
P : Avni are u fine there
A : Niel kya hua main sukoon ghar mein hun
N : oh should I come there ( hesitate )
A : no Niel it's ok I will manage wo mogali
N : pata hain Riya told me
A : oh
Suddenly someone came from behind and scream on Avni's ear
Avni : aahhh
N: Avni
Phone cut
N : Avni hello Avni
Ali : kya hua bro
N : Avni kuch hua main abi aya
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