《Avniel》Hospital
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Niel drive and goes to the hospital ( guys let me tell u that Niel get the call of Avni when they were going back home and then he left bebe in the Khanna house and goes to meet Avni )
In the Mehta house bebe comes
D : arrey Harleen ji aap
B : ji main Ajayun
D : arrey aai Yien ye aapka dusra Ghar hain
B : yahi toh baat Karen aayi hun apse
D : matlab .. aacha chaliyen phele Baith Jaiye
Suddenly a call comes neela picks it
Nm : hello
N : neela ma Avni is in hospital
Nm : what ? But how is she fine are you fine ?
B : neela what happened
Nm : bebe Avni is in hospital
N : bebe ?
Nm : Niel In which hospital I am coming
N : in the city hospital
Nm : ok we are coming
N : hmm
Put the phone and say
B : neela pls let's go to hospital
Nm : yes but pls wait here I will go
B : Neela we both are going as I will then go to home as I know Niel will be there
Nm : ok Maa pls wait here I will come with her ok
D : hmm
They both went to the hospital
Nurse : sir pls fill the form
N : ok
After filling doctor Says that she can be discharged and u can meet her
N : Avni
A : Niel
N : are u fine now
A : yes
N : but what happened exactly
A : ( tells the whole story )
N : ok
Nm : Avni are you fine now
N : Neela Maa
Then somebody comes and pulls Niel ear
B : oye Khote don't you have mouth to speak that Avni is in hospital
N : ouch... bebe sry
B /hmm
N : now pls leave my ear it's hurting
B : par agli baar se kiya toh ( going to pull his ear but Niel closes his ear with his hand everyone starts laughing except Avni she was so tired that she asleep when they were talking )
Niel , bebe and neela see and smile
N : cute ( looking at Avni )
B : ( roll her eyes ) kya Kahan
N : k.. k ... kuch nahi
B : hmm
Bebe and Niel laugh and Niel get embarrassed
Precap : bebe : marriage
Person : yes
Bebe : it's a good idea
Person : but
Bebe : pls don't worry I will handle it
Person : ok
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