《Avniel》Part 8
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Rhea : yes
R : oh aur wo Kaun hain
Rh: Ali you know him
R : of course ..........wow
At dinning room
Neela : Avni there are some flowers basket in the kitchen take it and decorate the entrance
S: not Avni but Niel will also come
N : sure mom ............Avni let's go
A : ya sure
Enterance
Avni : where is the basket
N : Avni its in kitchen wait I will come and bring it
A : ok
( when Niel was he listen the talking between Rohan and rhea )
R: don't u think Niel will be good for Avu
Rh: exactly he will be the best for Avu
R : then you should talk to Avu
Rh : yes I will
N : ( mind ) (Avni is Avu cute name and I am going to be the best and happiest person then if I got Avu aka Avni )
When niel was going he heard his family conservation about Avni's beauty and Avnis family talking about Niels intelligent kindness now he was in the cloud 9 as he was getting a green signaled from both the family to propose Avni but he can't just go with the flow as he knew everything is not possible to get .
A : Niel
N : yes Avni I am here
A : fine ....thanks for bringing
N : Avni I thought we were friends
A : yes Niel we are (standing upon the stand )
N : so why you said me thank ( giving the flower to Avni )
A : oh sorry( seeing him )
N ; now sorry
A : fine I will not do it again
N : that's like a good girl
A &N laugh
Niel was giving Avni the flowers and later sometime he give her a flower and it pinched Avni
A : ouch ( and by saying this she was holding the door to get support but to see the wound she remove her hand and lost her balance to pick up Avni Niel just by mistakenly thrown the basket and they both fell down
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After some time they broke there eye lock they both stand up
A : sorry Niel
N : I am sorry that flowers basket
A : oh its fine the decoration is done don't worry
N : fine lets go
A : yes of course
N : Avni can I ask you something
A : yes Niel
N : Avni tomorrow is my cousin birthday Kareena so will you join me
A : okay
N : Avni you can call mitali too
A : okay fine now please sit I just come back in few minutes
N : fine sure
Later sometime guest arrived and mitali and Ali arrived Avni was also coming downstairs Avni was going to fall and Niel held her and gave an eyelock this cannot be get noticed by mitali she was fuming in anger
M : Niel ( in some louder voice )
Niel think she wasn't knew about it and say to her
N : oh hi mitali what a coincidence na
M: ( realize and say ) ya I was shocked for some time to see u
N : ya
A : ( whispered ) Niel you are holding me
N : oh sorry .......I mean.....it's ......are you .......are you okay
A : yes ( now standing on her feet )
Nm : now both of you talk later enjoy the party and Avni come with me ( some angry tone )
A : huh .... yes Maa
Avni goes
M : Ali .....where is ....
N : oh he just went to meet rhea
M : ( having a great opportunity she says ) let's enjoy the party Avu has really had done so much effort
N : yes you are absolutely correct
Kitchen
Nm : Avni ( give her plate in which food was there ) eat it
A : mom
Nm : Avni.. beta tumne Subha se kuch nahi Khaya hain do you realise that
A : Maa par bhindi
Suddenly Niel listen
Nm : arrey Niel will you please help me
N : yes Aunty
Nm : I have some work so I have to go and see her she is not eating her food
N : but y Aunty
Nm : Niel she doesn't like to eat bhindi and all so I am going please isse kuch khila dena
N : g Aunty aap tension may lijiye
Precap : I will tell you later
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