《avniel one shots》i hate ACP NEIL KHANNA!!!!!!!
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HEY READERS!!!!!THIS ONE SHOT JUST POPPED IN MY MIND SO THOUGHT TO PEN IT.......
IT WOULD BE A LIL EMOTIONAL ONE,NOT A LIL BUT MUCH MORE!!!
dis is after avni save mishti frm vidyut clutches....n now vidyut is vry much determined to harm avni n dis is unkown to neil....he thought tht he will harm mishti,him or avni or juhi or any other but didnt except tht vid will do smethng bcz of which he will loose his life!!!!!!!!!
nvr wrote an os lyk dis so pls spare with me!!!!
B:swetha!!!!!oye swetha kaha hai tu??????its already late v have to go fast......they both will also come now!!!!
MAN:nt come now bebe already came......
B:arey DD tu agay?wah u both look too beautiful together.....ahana beta how r u?(DD is married guys n his wife name ahana)
AHA:iam really gd bebe n u all?
S:vry fyn beta!!!!
AHA:bebe,swetha aunty atleast u ppl tell me na where r v gng?
S:DD tumne use nahi bataya?
AHA:ye?arey wen ever i ask him he will only say one thng!!its a place where i wil come to know d actual meaning of love......waha hame pyaar ki paribhasha milegi!!!only dis sentence.....
B:tu aisa taang karta hai nayi dulhan ko???(they were nely married its just 6-7 months)
S:bebe kya galat kaha hai usne????he said truth only na!
AHA:aunty pls atleast say me whom we r gng to meet???
S:mera beta neil aur uski patni avni!!!!!
AHA:kya!!!!!!!!!!sach me aunty aap ko pata hai DD hamesha un dono ki bath karta rahta tha!!! jab bhi me yaha aati hoon na i will b wishing to see them....finally aj me bhai aur bhabi ko dekh ne waali hoon....(she is really a jovial person jus lyk our DD)
seeing her excitement every1's were welled up....as they remembered somthng frm past!!!!!!
just thn prakash came down n neela came frm her home.....dd n ahana took blessings frm them....n they left.....it was 3 hrs journey frm khanna mansion.....
AHA TO DD:waise bhai aur bhabi sab ke sath yaha kyn nahi ......
DD:shhhhhhhh he didnt let her complete her sentence....waha jaane ke badh me tumhe sab kuch batati hoon par ab sab ke saamne kuch mat bolna ok....
AHA:ok ok i wont....
P:waise DD tera bussiness kaise chal rahi hai????
DD:theek papa aur aapka?
P:han sab theek hi to hai!!
S:DD fr neil sake u left ur police job n strtd bussiness......u r really a true frnd DD thank u soo much!!!!
DD:sirf sir keliye hi nahi maa bhabi keliye bhi.....
AHA:kya DD tum police officer ho???aur neil sir bhi police officer hai kya?
B:the!!!!!!!lekin dono ne ab wo job chod diya!!!aur han ahana tu neil ke saamne police ke baare me ya uski nokri ke baare me bath mat karna ok....
AHA:ok bebe par kyun?
DD:i will tell u later....they reached a place after 3 hrs long journey!!!ahana was shocked seeing d place!!!it was completely a isolated one........one could find only big big buildings in area of 10-15 acres...n other thn tht it was completely filled with trees....it was lyk a forest...n thn she found a big arch n d name on it was "AVNI AYESHA FOUNDATIONS"with a big block words.....they came in n she was admiring all d buildings lyk diff blocks in d surrounding....they were diff diff blocks with d same n single name....
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1.AVNI AYESHA GROUP OF SCHOOLS
2.AVNI AYESHA FOOD COURT
3.AVNI AYESHA HOSPITALS
4.AVNI AYESHA LIBRARY
5.AVNI AYESHA SELF DEFENCE CENTRE
6.AVNI AYESHA HOSTELS
7.AVNI AYESHA CATHOLIC CHURCH
8.AVNI AYESHA WORKER HOMES...
n d last one with a lil diff name...
9.AVNI NEIL KA GHAR!!!!!
all d others were buildings but avni neil ka ghar was nt It just looked lyk a big room.....
just den a grl cme runnung to them....
GIRL:hey bebe aap log agay?????
S:ha avni beta hum agay!!!!yes thts grl name is avni.
AHA:DD yaha sab avni ke naam pe kyun hai?i mea all d buildings names n tht grl name also avni!!!!!
DD:there are totally 30 grls here n nt only tht grl name is avni,those 30 grls names r avni only!!!!
AHA:what!!!!!!!she was shocked n srceamed at her high voice......
S:ahana beta cntrl.......
AHA:how could tht evn be possible aunty....every1 name is avni?how will they call them???n who r all these kids?
B:ye sab orphans hai aur neil yaha sab ka khyal rakta hai!!tumhe pata hai here u will find all d thngs fr lving..A TO Z everythng will be provided her......education hospital all...is se bahar ane ki zaroorat hi nahi milti hai......itna khayal rakti hai avni in sab ki!!!!!
AHA:wow bebe iam really surprised....whole life living here?grt!!!!!aur bebe wo rrom kya hai??avni aur neil ki ghar???
S:there only neil will stay along with avni!!!chalo v will go....
they went to tht room n swetha opened d door....to ahana's shock she didt find a room where 2 ppl cal live a life.....there was just a dining table,a study table n a bed.....thts it!!n d walls of d room was full of big photos....on 1 wall there was a photo wen avni n neil met fr d frst tym near tht cliff
on 1 wall there was their wedding photo,along with avni's bridal look
on one wall there was a photo wen they confessed their feeling fr each other...avni on her knees proposing neil
on d fouth wall there was a grid of two pics of neil n avni,s close moments
and on roof there was a grid of avni's smiling face pics
AHA:wow bebe bhabi ki itne saare tasveer!!!
neela:ye hum sab keliye sirf photos hai lekin neil keliye uski duniya........uski zindagi........jab se avni hum sab ko chod ke chaligayi hai neil ne is duniya ko janam diya!!!!!aur ye uski duniy ban gay!!!!!!!yaha rehte neil ko aisa lagta hai ki wo avni ke sath hai!!!!!
AHA:bhabi is duniya me nahi hai???ahana didnt expect dis in her wildest dreams!!!!!!!she was hell excited to see d lovely couple who were termed as love brds by her husband!
S:nahi ahana avni is duniya me nahi hai lekin wo uski duniya me jo neil ne uskeliye banaya hai wo us duniya me zinda hai!!!!u know y did neil name all d grls as avni?????bcz he wanted avni to listen to him,see him al d tym,so he thought tht if he calls every1 with d name avni!!avni will always stay alive in all these grls..ahana ye photo hai na ,dis d photo where neil n avni met fr frst tym!aur ye undono ki shadi ki photo hai!!!ise dekha hai tumne?ye neil ka favourite tha,everywhere guys will propose girl but here avni proposed him gng on her knees!!!!avni ki sare dialouges neil ko aj bhi yaad hai!!!!!
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B:they both were together only fr 1 yr but neil was living with thz memories frm past 10 yrs!!
AHA:das saal???lekin bhabi ko hua kya hai??
10 yrs before....
neil n avni saved mishti n came back frm goa along with vidyut!!!they brought mishti to hospital!!!after juhi saw mishti she went back n vidyut was nt yet arrested as neil didnt have any proofs aganist him...vidyut was abt to go out frm hospital just then he saw neil n avni talking to doctor abt mishti...after dr went frm there vid went to them
V:hello acp!!!!i am feeling grt playing dis game with u......well we will see who will win atlast!!u saved mishti fr now but u cant keep her with u fr long,nt even her mother also...u ppl cheated me fr mishti n juhi only know,i ll see how wil save them fr me!!!!
N:vidyut tum abhi tak ACP NEIL KHANNA ko samja nahi.....juhi aur mishti dono police ki observatin me hai....tum use harm nahi kar sakte ho!!!!
V:tsk tsk tsk neil!!!!!really!!!!do u really feel tht u ll be safe after having enemity with me??do u really think tht ur police will keep u n ur.......(seeing avni)family safe?
neil came infront of avni wen he saw him seeing avni showing tht i ll protect her.....
N:use choone ki koshish bhi ki tho dekh lena tum!!!!
V:she is d reason fr my mother's state now,she is d reason tht iam standing her now!!!she prroved tht she is a ACP wife....
N:ACP WIFE NAHI ACP NEIL KHANNA KI WIFE!!!!!!!!
V:ohhhh come on acp!!!!!!be ready to safe guard dis grl n her mother!!!he said loooking at mishti....c u!!!!!
just then dd came n heard all d convo
DD;sir!!
N;dd jaldi hume vidyut ke khilaf sabot dhoondna chahiye.....be in tht case!!
Dd:ok sir!!!avni was angry on neil in juhi's thng(same as serial)she didnt talk to him n went to misti...she was discarged n they went to home!!
(neil n avni convo in kitchen was same n avni was now cooled down n was ok with neil n juhi also)
two day were done,neil n dd along wth mumbai n goa police were searching fr proofs against vid..there were almost 5-6 police officers outside khanna mansion fr their security wen neil was in ps)wenever juhi, mishti or other family membs go outside always dd or other conistables used to go with them...avni was mostly at home these two days evn though she goes out neil used to be with her..
nxt day morning..
it was a special day fr neil n avni as it was d day they met each other fr d frst tym...
nei was getting ready fr office wen avni entered...she went n hugged him frm back!!!
N:kya hua madam aj thoda romantic mood me ho kya????he said still combing his hair looking in mirror.
A:aj ka din yaad hai tumhe???
N:aj???aj kya specal din hai???its nt ur birthday,nt my birthday,there is some more tm fr our anniversary,mom n dads anniversary was done!!!!wat special????saying dis he turned to her...
A:wats tdays date????n where were u last year on dis day??
neil thought fr some tym n he remembere tht tday was d day wen avni opened up infront of him shared her secret
N:arey ha wifey yaad agaya mujhe!!!!!i dint remember tht d day is tday but tht day was a very special day fr me infact fr us!!!!thanks fr coming into my life avni..thank u soo much.she smiled n they hugged....they broke d hug
A:aur isiliye me chahta hoon ki hum is din ko celebrate kare!!!!kya tum aj ghar me ruk sa......she stopped as neil got a call!
N:ek min avni...han dd bolo!!!!
DD:sir vidyut ke khilaf proofs mil gaya hai!!!!
N:kya?????dd tum sach bol rahe ho??his happiness has no bounds.
DD:han sir!!!!!ab hum vidyut ko arrest kar sakte hai sir!!!!!bas thodi aur ghanton ki intazaar hai!!!come fast to ps sir.its very urgent.agar us vidyut ko patachal gaya ki hame us ke khilaf prrofs milgaya hai tho mishti sur juhi madam ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai....comissioner sir bhi aa rahe hai sir...sir chahte hai aj hi hum ye case clse kare!!!!u come fast sir we r waiting..
listening dis avni was feeling happy as well as sad...she want to be wit neil tday but destiny dnt want tht to happen...neil smile aslo vanished seeing avni's eyes welling up!!!!one side his duty n more to tht his family safety on d other side avni's happiness...dd hanged d call without neil's reply....avni didnt show her pain as she dnt want neil to feel guilty.......she forced a smile through her glittery eyes n said nt evn looking at him....
A:get ready n come fast breakfast ready hai. she left before he opened hismouth......
N:avniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.he was really upset seeing her lyk dis....she never forced her wishes on him or she asked anythng frm him till now......evn now she didnt ask anythng which will cost him or his tym or his money...she just want him to be her side tday...he was feeling helpless n ashamed of himself as he was unable to give happiness n his tym......
she came out of there room devastated as she thought tht neil would definitely accept her request but everytng was opp to her......she came down wiping her tears n composing herself n saw mishti juhi bebe swetha on dining table....she was abt to serve them n neil also came down n took his seat......
B:arey neil tum aj itni jaldi tayar hogay!!!acha suno hum na bahar ja rahe hai malhotra uncle hai na uski beti ki birthday hai aj.ok..
N:ok bebe but wen will u go??n pls just fr tday take two conistables with u.....ek min saying dis he called them...but got to know tht there r only 5 polive officers were on duty n one was on leave...ok i will send some other conistable here frm ps..
S:after breakfast tillu aur juhi wen will u both go?
J:after breakfas only aunty..
N:juhi tum dono matlab?where r u gng n with whom?
J:neil acutally mishti is feeling bored in home so i thought we will go to park fr sme tym n movie n dnt worry i ll take conistables with us n will return by evening.......
N:if u all go out then avni will be alone na????
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