it was an ss at rang mahal tyms.......

it was same as show how avni went to rangmahal without neils approval...... wat happens if juhi still loves neil n wants him in her life??(pnt to b noted,her character is nt negative she is same juhi whom neil loved with all his heart 5 yrs ago,kind n active.but was suffering frm trauma as she was held captive in rang mahal these 5 yrs..neil all so has a very soft corner fr her n feels tht he was d reason fr her condition,she was in rang mahal bcz he couldnt protect her...)

here juhi dont knw tht neil has moved on in his life,she dnt knw tht he is married to avni...she still thinks tht he loves her.

neil loves avni n avni loves neil but they didnt confess......neil got to knw tht avni loves him through tht audio device...(scene frm show where avni speaks to bhallu n neils listens)neil is nt ready to leave avni fr juhi's sake......

i thought to write it as a one shot but changed my decision as i understood tht i cnt put it well in one shot.so it will be cmpleted max in 5-6 parts...

swetha still dont lyk avni but her hatred fr her was decreased knowing tht avni could endanger her life for neil....swetha lyks juhi now also...all d family members lyk juhi as they all know very well abt her n she has really bonded well with bebe n prakash also....but nt more th avni..avni is everything to them.they love her so much n couldnt take anythng wrong against her.she is their frst priority

no juhi bacha track in dis!!!!!!!!!!!

here we go......

neil entered rang mahal n was searching fr avni n by tht tym she rescued juhi n all other grls....she met DD n handed juhi n grls to him said to safe guard them...

DD:ok bhabi...par aap kaha ja rahe hain?

A:DD abhi bhi ali andar hai mujhe use bachana hoga....tum thumhara aur in sab ka dhyan rakhna ok

D:par bhabi neil sir aapko dhund raha tha andar...me sir ko call karke bata thi hoon ki aap yaha hai mere paas.

A:nahi DD!!ab uss se bath karna theek nahi hoga.wo andar hai aur agar use kisine dekh liya tho.....nahi nahi DD pls....me ajaoungi wapas.

D:nahi bhabi aap jante nahi hai sir kitna pareshan hai aapko leke.....jab thak vo aapko nahi dekhta wo chehan se saans bhi nahi le payega....

A:(smiled listening dis n her heart was overwhlemed with happiness n love seeing neils concern fr her)ok DD use bata do ki me theek hoon.....

in mean tym neil saved ali n was searching fr avni,juhi n grls n DD called him....

N:ha DD bolo?

D:sir aap kahan hai?bhabi yaha hai mere sath aur unhone juhi madam aur baaki ladkiyon ko bachali hai aur wo sab bhi hamare sath hai...

listening abt avni neil was over joyed n satisfied now.....since she left to rang mahal n he gt to knw abt it each second he was praying fr her safety n was continuosly sending his requests to keep her safe n sound to god......y dnt he, after all she is life line n reason to live his life.....

N:kya DD avni tumhare paas hai?kaisi hai wo???wo theek tho hai na DD use kuch hua tho nahi na?DD pls use ek baar phone do pls he said with excitement n was very eager to talk to her,to take her into his arms,to find his solace in her arms...but just then DD neil heard sme sounds probably sme1 are cmng there so he asked DD where were they n immediately left d place.

neil along with ali came to d same place where avni,dd ,juhi n grls were present.......

neil n avni saw each other,d instnt their eyes met all d world around them dissappeared fr them.....they were gng through so many emotions....frgetting d place n moment they just want to throw themselves on each other....they were sharing their pain through their eyes,d pain of being away frm each other fr few days which seemed lyk a galaxy of years,d pain of nt having d warmth of each other......neil slowly approached her n now he was standing infront of her,opening his arms wide enough to embrace her torso,craving to feel her touch,stood their closing his eyes to feel her fragnance,to feel her.......smiling ear to ear after seeing her safe n sound,without any bruises or cuts just lyk before,he was able to feel her evn at a distance,he could see her beautiful smiling face evn with closed eyes......his heart is jumping in joy n thrusting out with d feel of being loved by his love........jst then he felt her hugging him with all d love.........wrapping her hands around his neck n embracing him.........but he was nt feeling lyk before!!!!!!he was nt familiar with dis touch,dis is nt d thng he wanted...this is nt d touch he was craving for.....he couldnt feel d same fragnace he used feel wen wver he hugged her..........fr d very frst tym he was feeling uncomfortable in her arms!!!!!!!his hands still flyin n air,they were hesitating to touch her?d same hands till now wanted to pull her into him more n more so tht d air in between them could evn die due to suffocation, d same hands wanted to push her away frm him???he himself didnt understand d reason fr dis..he was confused with his own feelings?putting a full stop to his confusion n wanting to seek answers he opened his eyes n nw instead of getting rid of his confusions,but he was more confused seeing her in same place where she stood before,tears were flowing down her eyes evn before also but he could classify them as happy tears,may be bcz of seeing him after long tym,as he knows tht she was also gng through same emotions lyk him bcz she too loves him as he did or else may be more....he got to know abt her selfless love wen she endangered her life to save his X frm danger,sharing his responsibility in saving her!tht moment his love for her increased endlessly,no one could evn imagine to draw boundaries to stop his heart frm loving her,admiring her,frm respecting her pure soul.........he felt lucky to have her in his life,to be loved by tht pure heart.YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!he felt it as his resposibility."just RESPONSIBILITY.." saving juhi was his responsibility...as a frnd,mainly as 'POLICE OFFICER'but...............he didnt feel d same in avni's case,evn though saving avni is also his responsibility as a husband n ofcourse as police,he didnt feel lyk responsibility,bcz saving avni is his "NEED"

THE NEED TO HAVE HER IN HIS LIFE,BESIDE HIM,,,,,,ALWAYS,THROUGHTOUT.............. HIS LIFE....OR MAYBE EVN AFTER THT.....

but nw d tears in her eyes were nt bcz of happiness,he easily understooed tht they r bcz of pain..but d reason ??????just thn a voice broke his chain of thoughts.....

Person:i know neil,janti thi mein ki tum kabhi na kabhi aaogi zaroor.mujhe bachane!akhir hamara pyaar hai hi aise,zyada der thak hum dono ek dusre se door nahi rah sakte....janti hu main tum mereliye har diwar thod kar aaogi...i love u neil i lve u!!!!!!!!she said sobbing breaking avni's heart into zillion pieces.but neil was least affected with her words.these were d only words neil want to listen frm juhi 5 yrs before but nt now.his eyes were only on avni,n always will.

DD who was observing all dis,felt very bad fr his sir n mainly fr his bhabi.....he cant c tears in avni's eyes.he has had enough so just to break d moment he said

D:sir staying here fr sme more tym is vry dangerous v need to leave immediately....

listening dis juhi broke d hug n stood there composing herself.(neil dint evn touch her all d while)

N:han hame yaha se chalna chahiye,DD take all girls to police station n take their statement n inform to their respective families n hand over them to their parents officially with a record...any way police would also would reach here soon.

D:police?dd asked confused n avni also didnt understand anythng.

N:ha DD me ne comissioner sir ko inform kiya hai aur wo khud jail gaya hai investigate karne,waise pandit yaha hai tho sir lo pata chalgaya hai ab sab kuch.wo khud hi use arrest karne ayega.....

avni was feeling uneasy bcz of all d happenings.she was one who suffured a lot in saving juhi n grls...n now she wants to see her family n needs neela maa's support as she was feeling week emotionally more thn physical stress.

A:neil.........(she said in a low voice but to his ears it was as melodious as birds chirrping.this his wat he was longing for.this is wat he needed now,infact he also took lot of stress in planning,plotting n all.after so many hours which felt lyk yrs fr d frst tym he heard her,calling his name.....precisely calling him!!)pls mujhe ghar le jao,mujhe kuch bhi theek nahi lag raha hai,pls............she said in a pleading tone with narrow eyes melting him as well as bothering him.y nt seeing her lyk tht gives him immense pain....he stood infront of her in a giffy n cupped her face.

N:kya hua avni tum theek ho?...........

she smiled........after all she is hearing after a couple of days..atleast he heard her through d device but she didnt.........her heart felt peace seeing his concern for her...

A:me theek hoon neil.....aur tum?(he didnt answer her...he was unable to...he was lost in her eyes again....evn if she knows or nt he kows it.he knows tht he is fyn bcz SHE IS FINE..........)pls neil ghar le jao.....

he nodded his head in yes n blinked his eyes....

N:dd hum chalte hain tum ps jao aur mujhe sab kuch update karte raho........

Ali:neil me bhi DD ke sath chalti hoon,wo akele sab ko kaise sambhal e ga?

N:par ali tu kaise?pehle ghar chalo yr thak gayi hogi na akhir tum bhi yaha khaid the aj tak.

ALI:its ok neil iam fyn....tum dono ghar jao hum sab sambhal lenge..jao

N:ok take care...bye.he also didnt oppose as he wants some privacy to talk to avni n spend some tym with m ay be just to compensate d tym they lost....they both were abt to get into d car,neil in drivers seat n avni in passengers seat but juhi stopped her.....neil n avni bot stopped.

J:avni pls can u sit back i want to sit front with neil.......neil n avni were shocked.avni really gt dissappointed which was also noticed by neil,dd n ali...evn neil dnt want her to sit infront,actually he just dnt evn want juhi to come with them...

N:nahi juhi u wont come with us.....tumhe bhi ps jana hoga sare ladkiyon ke sath.tumhe bhi statement dena hoga,infact tum bhi yaha pe captive hai na!!

J:tho phir avni ko bhi statement dena padta hai na neil,us bhi kidnap kiya gaya tha!!

avni felt a point in wat juhi said,she thought tht if she also gives statement fr kidnapping her,rp would get more yrs punishment fr kidnapping a police officers wife..(i dnt knw if there is such a rule or not but it is a fanfiction so kuch bhi chalega!!!)

A:ha neil,me bhi jaungi statement dene....juhi theek keh rahi hai....neil was shocked listening dis......of course how could he miss d chance to spend sme tym with her.........but ds grl was least bothered abt him n still intrested in punishing thm..

N:nahi avni tum kahi nahi jaogi.....tumhari statement ki koyi zaroorat nahi hai......me thume is case me aur involve nahi karna chahta.its not safe fr u anymore.tum abhi tak bahut danger face kar chuke ho ab aur nahi pls....i wont let u take anymore risk now.ur saftey is my frst priority avni.aur tum ab bahut thak gayi ho tumhe araam ki zaroorat hai so pls come with me.agar tumhara statement utna hi imp hai tho me khud hi bad me lelunga.okay!!avni was happy to see his concern fr her she smiled n nodded in yes......

but here a brain is working so hard to process wat has happened jus now or to be precised wat it heard just now!n tht brain is juhi's.......she was nt understanding y neil was showing tht much concern n love towards avni.......

J:(in mind)neil avni ka itna khyal kyun rak raha hai???akhir ye avni hai kon?neil aur uska rishta kya hai?ab thak mujhe ye laga ki avni bhi ek undercover cop hai aur neil use hum sab ko bachane keliye bheja hai..par neil ko dekh ke aisa bhilkul nahi laga raha hai.......akhir chal kya raha hai?her trance was broked by dd

DD:sir u go..v will also leave after u.....

neil nodded n they got into car frst neil n avni went n nxt police jeep.......

precap:avneil moments(most probably confession)rp arrest.avni gruhapravesh......avni's insecurity seeing neil n juhi clz.....etc etc.......

if u all lyk it i would continue if nt i ll leave dis n will concentrate only on ff iam writing........share ur opinion n thoughts through comments.....

awating ur replies to dis......

thank u....