《avniel one shots》tum hi mere jee ne ki vajah ho!!!
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This also might be lil emotional os!!
This os is when Neil left avni at d alter!!!but it was a different one.nt juhi suicide
Neil is taking d oath just then juhi enters there running.
J:Neil!!neil!!
N:juhi?Kya hua???
J:neil....v....vo.....
N:juhi araam se.kya hua bathao!!!.....
J:Neil vi mujhe us vidyut ka call Aya Hai.usne mujhe dhamki di Hai ki mein agar uske pass nahi gayi tho vo mis...Mish.... mishti ko maarrr dega!!!
Everyone r shocked to d core listening dis.all d guests strtd whispering something something.juhi hugged Neil n strtd crying.avni felt very bad seeing this but couldn't say anything bcz she is aslo worried fr mishti n can understand juhi's pain,but couldn't take this.her husband's x gf hugging him in front of everyone killed her frm inside.
N:juhi Shant ho jav.pehle mujhe ye batao ki usne call Kiya kab?
J:das minute pehle.aur usne ye bataya ki vo mujhe ek address msg karega aur Kal mujhe vaha Jana hoga Varna mishti ko vo.....
N:hamari mishti ko kuch nahi hoga juhi.me huna.uska papa use kuch nahi hone dega!!
Some random guest 1:papa??? Matlab ACP Neil ka ek beti Hai??aur uski ma uski patni avni nahi?ye Kya Hai?aur ye.ladki kon Hai?
Another one:Arey mujhe lagta Hai ki ye ladki hi us bachi ki maa hogi Varna e aisa kyun royegi us bachi ke liye.
1:ha sahi kaha aap ne.aur me ne suna bhi Tha ki ye avni Neil see dokhe se shadi ki he!!
N:juhi don't worry.hum Abhi police station chalte Hain aur uska number track karke dekhtein hain.chalo
Juhi nodded n both r ready to go all d family members felt very bad fr avni.she was shattered completely n couldn't even utter a single word.
S:tillu beta!!baad mein bhi ja sakte ho na beta ab...swetha couldn't continue bcz Neil interupted her
N:nahi mom.ab mein mishti ke alava aur kuch nahi soch sakta.mujhe Abhi Jana hoga.with tht he ran outside nt even sparing a single glance at avni.she strtd crying then n their.neela kept a hand on her shoulder trying to console her.
Guest:agar kisi ladki ki Zindagi se khelogi tho anjaam aise hi hoga.tum to us bechari ka Zindagi Barbaad kardi Neil se dhoke se shadi karke ab Dekho vo tho thume mandap mein hi chod ke chalagaya.shadi karne se kuch nahi hoga avni ji us rishte mein pyaar bhi hona chahiye.agar tum un dono ke beech ek deevar ban me baithogi tho thum hi toot jaoge.yaad rakhna.chalo ab aur Kya dekhna...said some random guest n left d place n all the guests followed.their Neil was busy in his mission Saving mishti along with juhi.avni locked herself in a room n was crying badly.here in d hall everyone was also feeling low n neela was also crying.she was very much angry on Neil fr behaving lyk dis n all d family members feeling was also d same.none were in support of Neil.
Avni was remembering all d incidents happened few hrs ago.her first anniversary.....she didn't want to celebrate this occasion bcz of all d happenings.but Neil assured her that everything will be fyn n he said tht he wants to make this day memorable fr her.n yes he did it.he made this a day very memorable fr her by giving much pain instead of much happiness.she felt lyk her living was a waste of tym.she felt lyk someone were snacthing her life frm her.her life her Neil whom she believed more than herself was going away from her.
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A:Kya mein Sach mein un dono ki beech mein agay.kya Neil ko mein jabardasti is rishte mein baand rahi Hoon?lekin Neil tho mujhse pyaar karta Hai na vo juhi se pyaar nahi karta.kyun Neil kyun tum mujhe aise chod ke Chala gaya.kyun? tum hamesha yehi kehtey ho na ki tum ashish Mehta nahi ho lekin aj tum ashish Mehta ki tarah mujhe chod ke chala gaya.she said holding her legs clz to her n crying.
Two days passed but Neil didn't show up till nw.lastly all of them saw him n heard from him was tht day,2days before on their wedding day.none knows what has happened.avni was still waiting for him to return.she was sitting on thier bed holding his photo.
A:Kahan ho Neil?mein tumse naraz Hoon phir bhi ek bar ek bar mere samne tho aao.ek bar mujhse baat tho Karo Neil plss.thak Chuka Hoon mein ro ro ke. tumhe Meri Dil ki dard Nazar nahi a raha Hain kya.jo tumne Kiya Hai uskeliye tumhe mujhe explanation tho Dena hi hoga.ek bar ek bar Jane see pehla mujhse baat ki hoti,ek baar mujhe samjani ki koshish karti tho mein samaj jathi thi na neil.mein bhi thumare sath dethi mishti ko bachane mein jaise juhi ko bachane keliye Kiya tha.palat ke bhi nahi dekha tumne mujhe.i wish tum theek ho neil.just then her phone rang.an unknown number......
P:hello....am I speaking to avni Neil khanna.?
A:Han!!jee boliye.
P:mam mein media mein kaam karta hoon.apke pati ACP Neil khanna hospital mein hain.kya ye baat app jante Hain?
A:kya??? hospital mein?kab admit hua Hai wo?tears started rolling down her eyes....
P:day before yesterday mam.
City hospital mein dehka Hain mein use.
A:ok Thank you mein Abhi athi hoon.she immediately went to hospital.
A:ACP Neil khanna??
Receptionist:mam aap?
A:mein unki wife Mrs avni Neil khanna.
R:room no 302
A:thank you.with tht she ran to d room n opened the door.her heart broke seeing Neil with a kid lying on his left shoulder n juhi Making him have his medicine.it is obvious that he was wounded as their were some bruises on his face n some cuts on his body.her eyes were welled up.she wanted to run to him n engulf him in her arms n she slowly strtd moving towards him.but.........she didn't dare to go near him.seeing thoz 3 together she felt lyk his family was complete n she has no place in it.he didn't want her to know abt his where abouts,so he didn't even inform her abt being in hospital.it's been two days he left her.there was nt evn a single call nor a msg from him.her anger flushed again.she took 2steps back n rushed out nt evn sparing a glance at him.neil understood wat she was going through but he also couldn't help in making her situation better.he has seen a ocean of tears in her eyes n he was d reason fr thz tears.their relation was at stake bcz of him n d thought of loosing avni scared him.he decided to talk to her wen he will go home.he was dying fr her touch, dying to be in her arms.want to talk to her but tht is a danger fr her.if tht vidyut comes to know abt his lifeline, his wife,he might harm her.so he didn't even dare to msg her.he couldn't c avni in danger.he was away from her fr her safety.
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N:avni.....a tear escaped his eye.iam sorry.me janta Hoon ki mein thumhara Dil thod Diya aur mein hi use wapas judaloongi.i promise my love I promise.
Avni came back home.everyone were in hall.
B:puttar kahan gayi thi tu?
A: hospital.avni didn't even raised her head bcz by seeing her face everyone can get to know tht she cried n she didn't want tht.
S: hospital?par kyun beta.
A:Neil hospital mein Hain.
N:Kya hospital mein?Kya hua use?aur tum??agar wo hospital mein Hain tho Tum wapas kyun agay?
A:ab Neil ko Meri zarrorat nahi Hai ma....uske pass ab sabkuch hai.ab mein sirf uske upar ek bhoj hun aur kuch nahi... this broke Neil's heart who listened to dis conversation from phone.yes!!!!he called prakash to knw whether avni reached home safely or nt.prakash's phone was in auto answer mode n Neil listened everything.avni left to her room n locked herself from inside.all d family members were confused but immediately rushed to hospital for Neil.after few mins everyone came to hospital n understood y avni said lyk tht seeing juhi n mishti there.
S:tillu Kya Hai ye sab!!itna kuch hua par tumne ham sab se ye bat chupaya?
N:mom iam sry....just then doctor arrived n said tht Neil will be discharged with in two days.swetha n prakash stayed in hospital n neela,bebe came home.
2days passed, Neil is getting discharged today everyone came to hospital but his eyes were searching for avni.she didn't show up again after tht day.
N:avni kyun nahi ayi tum?janta Hoon tum mujhse naraz ho lekin itna narazgi?itni nafrat hogayi thume mujhse?is duniya mein sab kuch seh sakti Hoon avni lekin tumhari nafrat nahin.pls avni mujhe maaf kardo pls....
Avni didn't come out of her room in dis two days.she asked them not to disturb her.
Neil came home.bebe gave aarti to him.he came inside,juhi took mishti n left to her room.
N: bebe.....
B:avni kamre me hain.jo bhi hua hai use vo bardaash nahi Kar payi aur khud ko kamre mein band kardiya.5 din hogay lekin aj thak usne ek paani ka bhoondh ko bhi nahi Chua!!!!
Neil's heartbeat stopped.he felt lyk d land under his feet has slipped.he immediately rushed to their room n banged d door.
N:avni.......avni........darvaza kholo.....avni plsss...........kholo.....
She opened d door.her face was pale n dull.he couldn't cntrl himself n took her in his arms..but she didn't reciprocate.
N:iam sry avni.plss mujhe maaf kardo plss.agar tum itna naraz ho to maarlo mujhe par khud ko takleef mat do avni plsss.mein tumhe aisa nahi dekh sakta avni
A:tum agay?theek Hai me aj raat hi chali jaongi...she said as she didn't hear his words.neil broke d hug n asked her
N:chali jaogi?par kaha?
A:pata nahi lekin jaungi...tumse door sabse door.jaha log nahi hote.
N: Matlab tum mujhe chod ke chelijaogi?
Avni didn't answer....he took her silence as her answer......
Pls avni mat jao.tum hi Meri jeene ki vajah ho,agar tum mujhse door jaogi tho mein Mar jaunga....ek baar Meri bath tho suno avni...
A:bolo!!! Kya bolna Hai bolo Neil khanna.......khud hi sab me samne chod ke chali jati ho aur bolte ho ki me hi tumhare jeene ki vajah hun!?vo kaise......pagal Hoon mein,bewakoof Hoon..itna sab muchuch hone ki bavajood bhi yaha tumhare Ghar mein rah rahi Hoon,chahkar bhi ja nahi pa Ra hoon.,pyaar Jo karta Hoon mein tumse.....lekin tumhe tho ye sab nahi dikhti na neil.sab ke samne aise chod ke chali jate ho ki mein thumhareliye koyi Matlab hi nahi hoon.aur phir ye bhi nahi batogi ki tum kaha ho kis halat me ho.
N:avni pls mein majboor Tha... mishti aur juhi dono Katherine me Tha mein aur Kya karta un dono ko bachana Mera responsibility Hain na.mishti Meri beti Hai avni.
Avni gave a sad smile n said
A:sahi kaha tumne.un dono ko bachana tumhari farz hai.mishti tumhare beti Hai aur juhi uski maaa. Hain na Neil!!par mein??kuch nahi.hain na!!un dono keliye apni jaan bhi de sakte ho aur mein yahan pagalon ki tarah tumhara intazaar Kar rahi thi......in dono ko bachana keliye kuch bhi karogi kuch bhi karne see Piche nahi hatogi.agar tumhe kuch hojatha tho Mera Kya hoga neil.kabhi ye Socha tumne.tumhe yaad bhi Hai ki yahan pe ek Dil tumhare sason ki wajah se dhadak rahi Hai?sab ko kho Diya Hain Neil mein apni Zindagi mein.agar tumhe bhi ko Diya tho me jeeyun kiskeliye.....with tht she took a few steps back n grabbed a knife from d table n placed it on her wrist.
A: isileye ab mein is duniya mein nahi rahna chahta...
Neil then saw avni holding a knife near her wrist.... he was literally shattered seeing her lyk tht.she is d strngest person he had ever seen.wat ever be d situation she faced it bravely...but suicide??????tht to bcz of him.......
N:y.....y.......ye......tum ......KY...kyaaa Kar rahe ho avni....pls avni.plssss.....kuch mat karna a....
A:Kya hua dard ho Ra Hai.... yehi dard tumhe takleef mein dehk me mujhe bhi hota Hai Neil....she throwed d kinfe aside..Neil felt to ground infront of her.....
N:iam sry avni iam sry.i promise mein kabhi aise nahi karoongi.pls mujhe maaf kardo.
Avni came down to his level.
.A:.Kya Teri Zindagi mein mereliye koyi jagah Hai?thodi si jagah hi mereliye kafi Hai Neil.mujhe tumhare pass rehna do Neil pls....
N:tumhe mere Zindagi mein koyi jagah nahi de sakti avni.kyunki tum hi Meri Zindagi ho.....mein tumhe apni pass nahi rakh sakti avni kyunki mein tumhe tumhari jagah apni Dil me Diya Hai.tum meri Dil me basti ho avni,har ek saans me basti ho.i love u avni,I lv u.zindagi me tumse zyada mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.kaha Tha na mein tum hi meri jeene ki vajah ho.....kabhi bhi mujhe chod ke janne ki baat mat karna avni pls..Varna mein pagal ho jaungi....with tht they tightened their hug to sooth each other's pain in tht embrace
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