《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》family time ♥️♥️
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It has been 2days from the Sunday.
Goon2:boss.us ladki Ka naam Avni he..vo ek boutique bhi open Karna chayiti he aur vo Neil khanna ki girlfriend..
Goon2: ha vo dono hat shin meet hota he
Boss: ho us ladki baare meh Kuch aur patha he.
Goon2: says about vidhyut and engagement
Boss: Acha... interesting..hmm
Mera plan Acha se sunlooo..
........
....samajhe meh Aya na..us Neil khanna ko torture dena he. Meh usko chadunga Nahi..
Other side everyone are very happy..they didn't know that a Strom is waiting for them..let's see how they handle this.
After 1 week.
In mehta's mansion
All q kohanna's and mehta's along with DD and Ali had United to official speak about Neil's and Avni's marriage.
Daya: kya Neil kab Shadhi Karne va wele he Avni see..
Neil smiles
Neil: vo ready he tho..meh abhi usko Shadhi karne keliye tayar huu..
Everyone smiles
Daya: Avni beta tum tayar ho kya.
Avni:bilkilll Nahi huu
Neil: kyuuu..ab kya huva
Avni: first tum mujhe impress Karna hee
Bebe: Mera Neil Kisi ki impress Nahi Martha he..apko pasand he to shafi Karo Nahi tho hum sure ladki ko dunte he..
Daya: Acha tho dundloo..
Shweta: Kisi aur ki meh Nahi accept karungi...mujhe meri Avni hi bahu air beti
Neil: Acha...tho app hi impress karlo na...meh kiski impress nagi karungaa..arey yar proposal we em bar impress Kiya..ab shafi keliye bhi impress Karna kyaaa .
Neela: ha tum bilkul Sahi Bola Neil...Mera beta kiski impress Nahi karte..
Shweta: achaaa tho meri beti bhi apki a attitude Bacha se shadi Nahi Karnevali hee
Prakash: tho chodhooo
Neil: papa..
Prakash: arey tum impress Nahi Karna chayata he..vo tujhe shadi Nahi Karna Nahi chayite ..isileye meh chodhoo bolaaa..
DD: ha bilkul correct bathaya uncle..
Both hi-fies..
Riya: tho abb no marriage.??
Ali: haa..😳😳
Ashish: ha dono meh koyi compromise Nahi huva tho...shadhi cancel naa..
Ali: arey I thought to dance by heart fully in Ur marriage Avni..
Riya: chi..yar tum dance keliye feel horahi hoo.
Neela: I have an idea..
Neil: kya maaa
Avni: hmm...kya???
Neela: Neil tujhe impress Karna he naa..
Avni: haa..
Neela: tho tum bhi usko impress karni he
Avni: what??
Bebe: ha Karna padega naaa..
Ali: no..my frnd is not gonna impress anyone.
Riya: then my friend Neil is also not gonna impress dhiii...
DD: ha Nahi karegaa
BOTH Riya and DD hi-fies..
Ashish: ok then let's take a compitation b/w both of them..who losses they will impress the winner
Avni: ok done..what's plan??
Prakash: tho let's split into teams.
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Neil: haa good idea..
Neela: meh Neil Ka team
Shweta: tho meh Avni Ka team huu..
Ashish: meh bhi meri beti Ka team
Prakash: meh mera beta Ka team Hu..
DD: meh mera sir kaa team
Avni glares at him.
DD: Nahi meh Bhabhi Ka team Hu..
Avni giggles and Neil death glares at him.
DD: arey yar meh dono Ka team meh Nahi he..meh empire HUuu..
Everyone laughs at him.
Bebe: meh mera Neil Ka team
Daya: meh Avni Ka team..
Ali: meh mera best friend Ka team ..
Riya: meh mera jijju Ka team.
Neil smiles and hi-fies to her
Avni: Riya thum Meri sister hoo..
Riya: but Neil Mera jijuu he.
Avni: meh usko shadu Nahi Kiya naa..
Riya: vo sab mujhe pata nahii..
Neil smirks at Avni..
Both challenges each other with their eyes.
DD: teams divide hogayi abb kyaa..
Neela: abb compitation between both the teams..if Neil winz Avni will propose Neil again..vice- versa same goes with neil
Neil: ok done👍
Avni: challenge
Neil: ha challenge.👍👍
DD: ab winner koun decide karegaa.
Avni: thum ho naaa
DD: mehh😳😳
Neil: ha thum .
Avni: wt about rounds..
DD: meh booths Hu...hmmm..ok
Round 1.song a team Vs n
2.dance
3.cooking
4.decoration.
5.dum charades
Neil: yeh kounsa rounds a banana.. decoration a sab kya.
DD: look sir..marriage meh Ghana dance decoration khanna yeh Saab common he na vahi important yeh naaa...isileye...
Avni: yeh dum charades kyuuu???
DD: kyunki marriage meh most important understanding he.. understanding between bride and groom and their families...isliye..
Bebe: waahhh DD bahut acha rounds banaya Tumne..
Daya: haa...
DD bows dramatically saying thank you.
DD: so let's start our first round.who is gonna come to sing song??
Daya aur Bebe: meh..meh meh...
DD: ok Neil Bhai Ka team se Bebe aur Bhabhi Ka team se dhadhi Wawa Wawa...first let's welcome harleen khanna jii👏👏👏
Everyone cheers and claps for her
She sings a very melodies and religious song..
DD gets very impressed.
DD : harleen hi me bahut acha Gaya..ab dekthe he dayavanthi Mehta jii..kaise ghate hee..
She will also sing a religious song.
DD: wow..bahut acha he..plz clap.👏👏
Neela: winner koun he..
Shweta: ha koun..
DD: the winner is one and only.... harleen khanna ji...woo.. everyone hugs her..and Neil kisses her on cheek excitedly..other side just teases and smiles at their happiness.
DD: dono bahut acha Ghana Gaya..but mujhe harleen hi voice bahut acha laga that isliye meh usko choose Kiya..sorry dhadhi (to Daya)
Daya: arey..it's ok beta..a bas game he
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DD:Abb second round he cooking.
Riya: u said dance na..
DD: ha but bahut buuk lagrahi her
Ashish: ha mujhe bhi..
DD: iss round meh.each team sedho persons participate Karna he..
Avni: hamara team meh🤔🤔Shweta maa..aur meh..no no meh decoration meh participate Karti Hu...papa app karte kya??
Ashish: ok done👍
Neil: Acha tho.eri teamse neela ma..aur papaa..
Prakash: meh.
Neil: ha apphii..
Shweta: Mera opposite app participate karte kya??
Prakash: shewta ji vo..
Neil: arey papa...haa maa papa hi participate karte he..
Shweta: meh bhi deklunga kya karte he Appka papa.
Everyone smiles at them.
DD: koyi aur help Nahi karenge ok..
Neil: done
Both the team starts cooking.
After 1 and half hour.
DD: time up.
Both the teams bring their dishes to dinin table.
DD: Nahi apka team meh kya dishes Kiya..
Neil: butter chicken and Dal makani with rotis and kheer
DD: wow.. yummy..Bhabhi apki team kya Kiya
Avni: tandoori chicken and paneer tikka with rotis and gulab jamun..
DD: wow..wow..sonograms bahut Achi dishes banaya he...ok chalo let's have lunch.
Everyone gave their lunch happily with lots of teasing and fighting and chit-chats
Avni: abb bolo DD koun win huva..
DD: donoki dishes bahut Achi hey
..dono meri favourite food banaya he..but neela maa app ki food aur dishes bahut tasty he..very good neela ma and papa but.
Neil: hey hey...he hugs Neela.
Avni: oye..listen to him completely
DD: but Shweta maa ki dishes mujhe Kuch jyada hi pasand Aya...so Winner is Avni Bhabhi Ka team
Neil: arey yar a cheating he Avni:arey Yaha koyi cheating giting Nahi hey.
Everyone hugs Shweta and Ashish .
Neil just keeps his tounge out and teases.
Avni smiles at him.
DD: ok ok next round dance...Nahi.. decoration.
Ali: arey ab kya huva yar.
Neil: now only u had na..u can't do dance..it will be heavy.
DD: ha exactly so abb decoration.
Koun karega..Yaha Dekh doo boards a aur Kuch decoration items a..insise koun cha karte he..winner hogaa.
Avni: meh aur Neil he naa
Neil pouts.
Neil: yeh kaise round yeh yar USS ladki bahut decorate Karti he..but meh😒
DD: arey try tho karo na baba
Neil: hmm
DD: apko baas half n hour he.
Ur time starts now
Two starts doing decoration.everyone cheers them.
After half n hour.
DD:Ur times upp...
Neil: arey yarr.
DD: wow Bhai bahut acha Kiya..apbhi Bhabhi..a tho bahut difficult he..but Bhabhi be professional jaisa Kiya isliye
..is round ka winner Bhabhi.....hey..
Neil pouts.
Avni: Ayo..and she squeezes his cheeks cutely.
Neil smiles at her.
Everyone smiles at their cuteness.
DD: ha ha..app opposite team he.
They both move away.
DD:now the most awaiting round for our both Riya and Ali.
In this round we will play music
.both need to dance at the same time..who will stop first they r gonna lose.
Neil: oh..man..Riya all the best..just rock it.
Avni: all the best Ali..
Both smiles.
Music starts..both dances gracefully.after 2 songs Riya gets a idea to distract him.
She winks at Ali and gives a flying kiss while dancing.ali sees it and stops dancing in shook.
This is observed by Neil and Avni and they hi-fies and then Avni realises that lost the round.
DD: as Ali stopped dance..Bhai Ka team won the round.
Neil shouts and hugs Riya excitedly and says that's my friend man superb trick.
Riya winks at him.
Ali: yeh cheating a yar
Riya: it's just a trick
Everyone looks at them in confusion except avneil.
Ashish: kya trick.
Neil: Kuch nahi papa leave it.
DD :Last round...dum charades
All of them settle down as teams.
DD: ok start the game.one need to act from 1team.which group will answer first they will get a point..first from Bhai team
Riya: meh jathi HUuu..
Neil: ok jao...
She opens the chit and sees it's chak de!! India and shoes to DD
Riya: oh god..k see.
She acts it
She shows a bat hitting a ball.
Neil: cricket.
She nodes negatively and acts to think another with her hands.
Neil: hmm..door ball..tennis... batmenton.
She nodes negatively.
Neela: hockey.
She hops excitedly..
Ali: chem de! India
DD: correct..1 point to Bhabhi.
Riya cheater to Ali.
He just smirks at her.abd Avni giggles at neil.neil glares at Avni and she giggles more.
DD:Next Bhabhi apki team se koun a Raha he
Avni: Shweta maaa
She goes and opens chit...she smiles and shoes to DD "kaabi khusi kaabi ghami"
She acts and Prakash guesses it.
DD: Nahi Ka team 1 point
Then all of the plays it.
Neil guesses Avni's
Ashish guesses neela's
Daya's Bebe
And vice versa.
Dd: so it's a tie..wow..wt an understanding family yar..a jodhi's meh tho bahut hi understanding he..very nice.
Neela: tie na..ab kya Karna he
Shweta: ha ab kun impress karega..
Riya: dhono dancekarte he..aur Hume impress karega...
Avni: wt nooo
Ali: Karna padegaaaa..
Everyone cheers them...Avni Neil..
Neil forwards his hand to Avni..Avni takes it..both goes to middle of the stage.
There plays a ae Dil he mushkil title song.
" My favourite song"
Both of them dances happily without missing the eye contact.
Finally song end with Avni on Neil's arms.
Everyone claps for them..
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