《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》the surprise party
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After 3 days of realisation.
It's Neil's birthday.
At 6 in the mrng.
Avni got ready and started her way to khanna's mansion.
Ting tong
Ting tong.
Shweta: itini suba suba John Aya
She opens the door
Shweta: avniiii..tum
Avni: ha...mummy ji surprise 😍
Shweta: kyu
Avni: ajj Tillu ki birthday naaa..
Shweta: tujhe yadh he??
Avni: ha mummy ji...
And she runs to Neil's room
Shweta smiles at her.
Avni slowly opens Neil's door.
She smiles at Neil who is sleeping very peacefully.
Avni:Tilluuuu
He doesn't move.
She sees whole room..it was so clumsy clumsy..
I need change it🤔🤔.hmmm
1st I need wake up this man.
Avni shakes his shoulder and calls...Tillu...wake up...
Neil: maaa...let me sleep
Avni: ma Nahi..Avni Hu
Neil: maa..a kelane ki time Nahi hey.
Avni: ek Baar eyes tho open kar
Neil opens his eyes and sees..
Avniii..
He shouts.
Avni: ha Avni only
Neil: thum Yaha kya Kar Rahi hoo
Avni: meta best friend ki Ghar ane keliye mujhe koyi invitation Nahi chahihe na..
Neil: Nahi chahihe..par intini suba Subha..
Then avni hugs him..Neil stands in shock.
Avni: happy birthday Neil...have a great day 😊.
Neil hugs her back tightly..
N: thank you so much avnii... 😍😍
Tear drop falls on Avni's shoulder.
Avni comes out of hug
Avni:oye pagal..kya huva??
He simply nodes nothing...
She catches his face in her palms.
Avni: oye sunn...ajj teraa birthday he...enjoy it and chore laduko Jaise Rona math..ok
Neil smiles and says okay..
Avni: hmm..good..okay now go n fresh n come..wear this
Holding a white shirt.
Neil: but Avni meh police station ko jaana he!!!
Avni:today is Ur birthday Neil...ajj bhi police jakar kya karenge yar..
Neil:I know Avni..but I need to go compulsory...last I had caught a criminal..but that idiot had escaped from jail..today I need to be there.
Avni: compulsory u need to ga ha!?
Neil: haa
Avni pouts..
Neil: arey..ok I will come soon okay na.
Avni: ok then 1pm u need to he at home.
Neil: I will try...
Avni: no tries..u will be there here at 1..it's final..now go and fresh n come.
Neil simply smiles n nodes.
Avni looks at room..and go to window and checks it's length and all.
Neil comes out in police uniform.
Avni: why is Ur room so dark??and opens Windows.
Neil: it's police officer room it need to be dark.
Avni: very bad explanation!!
Neil keeps his tongue out
Avni smiles
Neil: ok I will go to police station.. should I drop u home??
Avni: first have Ur breakfast then u can go p.s and later I will go by my Scotty .u don't worry..
Neil: hm..okay
They both go to downstairs.
Shweta hugs Neil and says happy birthday and kisses on hid forehead.
Bebe also hugs and wishes him. Neil touches her feet and Bebe blesses him and kisses oh his cheek.
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Prakash also hugs him and wishes him.
Avni smiles looking at them.
He prays to God and all khanna's along with Avni have their breakfast.
He takes blessings from his mom n dad.
Neil: ok Avni..I will go u take care okay..bye ma bye paa..bye Bebe..he kisses on her cheek and goes out
Shweta caresses Avni's hair.
Shweta: thank you beta...for making him happy.
Avni simply smiles .
Avni: mummy ji..ajj Neil ko surprise birthday party he!!.
Shweta/: oh Kaha??
Avni: Ghar meh.uska best friends koun he??
Shweta:DD tum Riya Ali
Avni: oh okay..they will come..so app uski favourite food prepare karloo..meh aur Riya and Ali decorations Kartleti Hu.
Bebe: meh Shweta ki help Karti Hu..
Avni happily nodes.
Avni(to Prakash): uncle jii..app Ghar jaldhi haa Jana..okay!!
Prakash smiles and says okay.
Shweta: apka family ko bhi buladho..
Avni: Ayo..meh bulgayi Hu..meh phone karti Hu.
Avni callz and says them to come.
Avni(to shweta): ma will come n help u for kitchen mummy.
Avni(to Bebe): app aur dadi usko koyi help Karna tho karlo..or rest karlo..
Avni(to Prakash): app evng papa ki bhi jaldhi lekar ajhana..
Everyone smiles at her excitement..and goes to their work.
Neela Daya Riya and Ali come to home.
Avni: oh..god..itini late Karti ho app...jaldhi apki Kam karlo...fast
Neela and Daya smiles and goes to kitchen.
Avni(to Ali): did u order cake.
Ali: ha I ordered.
Avni: did u invite DD ??
Ali: Avni...vo...Nahi Kiya..I will call him now.
Avni: do it fast (angrily).
Ali immediately go and all DD.
Avni: did u bring decorating items.
Riya: ha dhi..
Avni:okay let's start.
They start decorating.ali also joins them.
Avni: u doo them..I have another work.
They both nodes.
She goes to shop and buy some
Curtains, bedsheets and photo frames.and went back to home.
Where as other side..
Neil was very happy.
DD : kya huva sir?? Bahut lush lag Raha ho....ho forgot happy birthday 😍
Neil: thank you so much DD and hugs him.
DD: after some many days Ur looking happy..
Neil just smiles
DD: bhabi phone Kiya kya..
Neil: came to home😄😄
DD (teasing): oh..oh...haa.haaa
Neil: ha enough!! Say me about that case..how he explained..
DD explains about case..
Other side..,,
Avni re-decorated Neil's room
To make it look bright.
And also placed some photo frames on wall.
She collected his childhood pics his pics with his family and Goa trip pics and pics with DD.
She places some of photos on his room
Ignore the photos
And she went to downstairs.the decoration is almost finished
Avni:wow... Too good guys
Ali: thank you..thank you...
Avni: hello idea tho Mera he na..
Ali: ha madam ji idea or combination apki he..bas hum execute Kiya..
Avni smiles at him.
Avni: what's time??
Ali: 1 30
Avni: I can't believe this man..
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Ali looks in confusion..
Whereas Avni callz Neil
Neil sees time... shit man..she is gonna kill me
DD: koun sir
Neil: thumara bhabi
DD smiles first call lift Karoo sir..
Neil lifts call.
Avni: how much time u need to lift call??
Neil: vo toda busy Hu Avni...
Avni: are u coming now??
Neil: Avni...vooo
Avni: ha kk understood..bahut kaam he isileye Nahi Aya...
Neil: hmm...sorry Avni..I will come at 4 pakka okay
Avni: hmm..did u had Ur lunch??
Neil: vo..had Avni...tum
Avni: had...
Neil: hmm..kaam..he bye take care
Avni: k complete Ur work fast..bye take care.
Cuts the call.
Avni goes to kitchen.
Avni: maa...pack food for 3people.
Neela: kyu??
Avni: I'm going to police station.neil didn't had food so DD also not had..I also not had soo...
Shweta smiles at her care.
Neela: itana care or pyar..ha ha..
Avni.. blushes..
Neela packs food and give to Avni.
Ali: I will also come to u Avni..
Avni: no need I will go .u have Ur lunch okay..bye.
She goes to police station.
Everyone sees her surprisingly.
DD: sir Bhabhi..
Neil: kya Bhabhi!!!???
DD shows towards Avni
Avni enters his cabin.
Neil: Avni tum Yaha kya karrahi ho??
Avni: kyu..I should not come ha..
Neil: not like that but..
Avni: vo kya na..app Dino keliye kana lekar ayi huu..
Neil: I said u na..I had
Avni: I know u Neil...if u work u will forget to eat..juut math bolna...
DD: mujhe bahut buk lag rahi hey..
Avni: hmm..come n have
She kept 3 plates and served food.
Neil: 3plates kyu??
Avni: I also not had..naa
Neil: oh kk have have..
3 of them had their lunch with chit chat.
DD goes out togive them some space.
Avni: ok meh jathi Hu..
Neil: kahaa
Avni: Kaha kya?? Ghar jathi Hu..
Neil: kyu Mera sath time Nahi spend karenga kya??
Avni: police station meh??
Neil: ok come let's go out somewhere.
Avni: seriously!!!
Neil: haaa..
Avni smiles excitedly.
Avni: but where??
Neil: hmmm...hmm shopping??
Avni: shopping kyu..
Neil: time pass..
Avni: okay done.
Both go to shopping mall..they simply roamed all over the mall and then went to a coffee shop.snd spoke about some many things.
Avni: ok it's already 6..come let's goo.
Neil: ok I will drop u home.
Avni: hmm...
Both reach mehta's mansion.
Avni: come inside.
Neil: kyu??
Avni: come naa
Neil : okay.
Both go inside.avni take n go him to her room.
Avni:Go change and come..no u change her I will go inside.
Neil: but kyu??
Avni: chup..do what I say and she hand him a cover and goes to change room
Neil
Avni
Avni: wow..Ur looking too good.
Neil: thank you Avni(smiles)
U r also looking so beautiful.
Avni smiles.
Avni: chale.
Neil: Kaha
Avni: thumara Ghar
Neil: kyu
Avni: arey yar stop asking questions..comes naa.
Both reach home.
Avni: u be here okay..
Avni goes inside.
Avni: Neil came u all goo..I have little..work..u all go and recieve him.and time god papa and uncle app time par Agay...jao na surprise him..
Everyone goes out then Avni take some photos and hang them
This type of decoration
And then she switch off lights.
Other hand.
Neil was surprised seeing all of them their..
Neil: app sab yaha..neela ma uncle.dadhi ji...he takes their... blessings..
All three of them blesses and wishes him.
Aliya : happy birthday neillll
Neil hugs Ali and side hugs Riya.
Neil: thank you so much guys..DD thum..thank you yarr and hugs him too
Ali: hmm let's go in..
Neil goes inside and get surprised looking at arrangements he could only sees all the pictures hanging there and the decorations.
He looks those pictures..he recalls all the memories.hapou tears roll down his eyes.
Then suddenly he hears a balloon blast and suddenly flowers fall on him and sees Avni standing infront of him.
She forwards her hand and asks to gives hand.hera forward his hand .Avni holds hand
Avni: Neil...no matter what I will never leave Ur hand...I promise u to be Ur side in every situation and trust me..I'm sorry for rude behaviour..no matter how I'm u always loved me in same way...I love you Neil... will u forgive me..she then stands on her knees.will u be my side forever Neil??
Then Neil hold her hand and lift her up to stand.
Neil : I love u too Avni..I will be there for u.
Then Neil hugs her tightly and places a kiss on her forehead.
Everyone claps for them.
Riya comes and hugs Avni and Ali hugs Neil.
And then he cuts the cake.
Everyone enjoys there family time and have their dinner.
They took so many pics.
Riya and Avni😍
After everyone settles down at living room.
Avni take n go Neil to his room and closes his eyes.
After entering into room
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She opens his eyes..
Neil: wow avni..thank you so much ..it's do good.
Avni: did u like it??
Neil: like?? I loved it avni
Avni smiles at him.
He looks all around the room.
Neil: it's really very nice and this pictures..wow thank you so much..
Avni:hmm..every body eil be waiting come let's go.
And she goes to door.
Neil : wait
He holds his hand and pull her close
Avni: wh..what r u dng Neil??leave me..
Neil: no I will not.
Avni: Neil...
The he suddenly hugs her tightly.dhe hugs him back.
Neil: thank you so much Avni..it's my best birthday ever...I just loved this day .
Avni comes out of hug and cups his face.
Avni: it's ntg before u Neil..I love you 😍and kisses on hid forehead.
Again both gets into tight embrace.
Hey guys...I'm here with my next update..it's the longest chapter..I had ever wrote.i hope u all enjoyed it..thank you for all Ur love and support.
Take care
Thank you
Vidhya ♥️
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