《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》the confession

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Morning

Riya and Ali reached the hotel and they knocked the door no response..they pushed the door it opened..they r amused that door is not locked.

They went inside and saw that beautiful scene and a beautiful smiles came on their face.

And by then Avni opens her eyes partially..she open her face and looks at a cute boy sleeping peacefully she smiles looking at him..later she realised that face is Neil's and she is sleeping on his hand so...she woke up immediately..that sudden movement disturbed Neil's sleep.he opens his eyes slowly.

Neil: hi good morning...(to Aliya)hey good morning guys..how was Ur date??

Riya: superb...wt about u guys..

Neil: ntg much... routine

Avni looked confused at her dress..

Avni: Neil...wt happened yesterday

Neil: yesterday......we went to long drive and we party and came home and slept..

Avni: that's it...then y can't 8 remember anything.

Neil: hmm...u drank something so u slept off..so u could remember

Avni: oh..okay

Neil: now go n fresh n up guys let's go out.

Everyone nodded.nril and Ali went to another room and freshened up.

All of them went to a hotel there they had their favourite breakfast.there a boy was commenting on riya.avni heard him and immediately stood up..

Neil: calm down Avni..dogs will bark...let them bark...

Riya:ha ldhi..it's okay relax

Avni: no Neil..if now we will not say him lesson he will continue doing it.

Neil: Avni...

Ali: arey Avni stop naaa

But our stubborn Avni doesn't listen to them....

She goes near that table and stands in front of him.

Man: kyaaa..

Avni: oh kyaaa???and she holds his collar.

Man:how dare u to catch my collar ...remove it..if not

Avni:if not?? What will u do??

She directly likes into his eyes..

Man(frightened): u can't scare me with Ur eyes.

Avni: oh .then take this....taap....she slaps him..

His eyes become red..

Avni: once again if u dare to comment any girl should remember this slap...don't think whatever u say we will listen to them and tolerate...u better stay away from girls... understand

Man:sorry sis...

Avni: hmmm...one more if u did this...she goes to slap him.thrn Neil enters their and takes are away..

Neil: u warned him na.. completed now come let's go .

Avni: no Neil I want to slap him again.

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Neil:come na Avni...plz..

She nodded her head and want to him.

They four sat at beach..

Riya: hey..dhi..look at there(pointing a poster)

Avni looks at it...

Avni: what's wrong??

Riya: 50%off dhi...let's go to shop na..

Avni: again shopping no yar... yesterday only we did na

Riya:plz na dhi..we didn't even

Spend time in trip...so let's enjoy there..

Avni: hmm..okay done

Riya hugged her happily.

Both informed about there shopping plan to Ali and Neil..they said okay..

Neil: Ali...

Ali: ha Neil boloo..

Neil: I want to confess my feelings to Avni..

Ali: what??? R u serious?

Neil: yah I'm ...

Ali: ok done I will help you..

Neil:hmm... thanks broo

Ali: so what's plan??

Neil: treasure Hunt

Ali: treasure hunt???

Neil: ha just wait and seee....

Evng 4 o clock

Avni and Riya reached hotel..Ali and Neil said that they r waiting for them at room.they both reached room..Avni first stepped inside..while Riya stepping in..a hand held and pulled her out.

Riya: Ali...kya..

Ali explains about Neil's plan.

Avni goes into wash room to face wash.she looks at mirror.theirs a note.

"Note"👈note

A👈Avni pov

"Hello sunshine...u r already beautiful...no need look in mirror"

Avni got a smile on her face but immediately gone...who would be it... don't trust again Avni nooo....

When she goes out of room she notices 1 more note showing this direction ------->>>>

"Oye don't think who are doing all these ...it only gives u headache..come find me with this clues..."

Who r u man!? Neil🤔🤔🤔no he is my frnd he can't do this....

She goes in that direction and finds a note on table..

Who the hell r u man..u r testing my patience...

"Hello...ms brave...I'm waiting for u...where we can find a tasty food...in a table num (2×4)-2"

Oh god!! Are u testing my maths knowledge.🙄🙄

Okay let's find who is this man.

Wait a min where is this Riya..

A pops on her phone

Riya:sorry dhi...I didn't inform u..I'm with Ali..

Avni:it's okay

A:Ufff...ok Avni go for it.

She went to downstairs and went to restaurant...she then searched for 6th table...

Waitress: how can I help u mam??

Avni: where is 6th table..

Waitress looked in confusion and shown 6th table to her

She sat there and her eyes went towards a tissue paper

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"Hey u r late..its okay ..u can find me again and sorry for making u angry by asking a stupid math problem"

She rolled her eyes and then thought...what's next

Then a waitress came and gave a cold coffee to her..

Avni: didn't order and she again noticed a note under coffee cup.

Avni: okay understood goo.

she slowly opened it sipping coffee.

"Hey princess here's a beautiful bracelet...I know u love bracelets..plz take it"

She looks at bracelet and smiles and suddenly leaves it on table.

And asks for bill.

She sees the bill

Avni: what the hell is this note??where is bill??

Waitress (with fear): sorry mam..Ur bill is already paid..

Avni: it's okay go..sorry

That girls nodded and goes from their.

Avni opens the note..

"Hey angry bird cool!! "

Smiles forms on Avni face.

"Take that bracelet...that's the next clue"

Avni looks around if someone is seeing all moves..

"Oye don't look here n there...I am not there...I know about u..I know how u will behave..."

A:Who is he..yarr...us he really Neil...noo man ...it should not be plz...!!!bit he know everything about me... strange..

Then she saw the bracelet...

I saw it some where...oops in that street shops...I think I can find him there...

She immediately reached their in hotels car

She rushed into the street shops..there is very much crowd their..someone dashed her and kept a letter in her handbag

But she didn't notice it.and their she saw a girl who is crying.

Avni: kya huva...kyu rorahi hoo??

Girl: mujhe...I..ice..care..cream.. Chahiye...😣😣

Avni: ok ok...and she takes 1 ice cream and give to her.the girls smiles and asks Avni to bend.

She bends and then girl kisses her cheek and runs away..Avni smiles at her and opens bag to give money..she gives money to Ice cream boy.and then notices a note..

A:Wen Did this came into my bag🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️.and remember that man who dashed her.

She opens it.

"I know you will find this place very easily...find me now..this is the last clue...u can find me there...all the best...dear..

Now I'm exactly at a place...

Here's a riddle to find me.

I'm three words place:

1 word:I'm the place where people will get gather to have fun...to dance...to have food...to drink...guess me.

Other word: Goa is famous for me..people come to Goa to visit me... especially people will enjoy sunrise and sunset...

Another word: .....14.25.5.24

Don't think I gave words in order😁😁"

A:Uffooo..this guy is definitely testing my patience 🤦🏻‍♀️

She re-reads the letter..

1st word🤔🤔people gather to fun dance eat🤔🤔hmmmm.......,yes club..

1.club 👍

Now second ...Goa is famous for what...Goa means u remember only beach...sunrise and sunset...

Yes its difinetly beach.

2.beach👍

Now 3rd what the hell is this man kya hosakta hey🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔..off cool think..

14...25...5...24...wt is this....yes what's 14th letter....okay..It's N..25th Y..5th..E...24th..X...

3.nyex

Yes nyex...what's nyex...🤔🤔

Wait what r letters..club..beach and nyex.

Nyex club beach...chi..no no..

Yah...NYEX beach club..

Let me check in maps..

Yah I'm right...

She callz cab and says the location to him.

A: finally gonna find u..

She rea placementsched the club...

And went inside.what now🤔🤔

She goes to drinks and sit.

Avni: excuse me

Boy: yes mam

Avni: can I get some juice??

Boy: sure mam..r u Avni??

Avni looked him confusingly.

Avni: ha why???

Boy: here's Ur special juice mam.

Avni looks at the glass confused.

And sips it slowly.

After drinking completely.she sees a letters on glass.

A:What's this D.F..

D.F Ka kya MATLAB he..uff man..this guy is eating my head.

Then she hears someone speaking...come let's dance.....

A: D--->dance🤔

Yes dancefloor.

She immediately rushes to dance floor then suddenly lights get turned off ..

A: shit man..what's going on.

Then a hand holder are take n go to stage.

Then suddenly lights gets on..

Avni was surprised...Neil was standing on his knees in front of Avni..

Avni: neilll...

Neil: ha Avni...

The day i met u..I had fall for u...I loved every thing in Ur smartness ..Ur braveness...Ur smiles...Ur cuteness..Ur boldness...Ur calmness..ur forgiving nature...Ur stubbornness...subh Kuch...Ur so fearless Avni...I had never met a girl like u...plz just trust me once...no Matter what happens I will always be there for...no matter if whole world is against u or Ur decision..I'm gonna support u..I love you Avni...he forwards rings towards her..will u marry me.

Avni looks at him in surprise...

Finally done with the chapter.i hope u all enjoyed it..what do u think..will Avni accept him..plz do comment and let me know Ur views..

Thank you

Take care

Vidhya

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