《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》pain😣😣😣
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(I think so many of u got doubt y Avni called Shweta mummy ji..it's because in new bondings episode... As u all know Shweta said Avni as her beti and also ordered her to call mummy... sorry for the confusion:-----
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Next day...Avni callz Neil...both decided to meet at cafe.
In cafe
9:30am
Avni is waiting for Neil and after 2mins Neil comes there..
Avni(smiles): hey Neil!! Kaise ho??
Neil: gud..tum?
Avni: superb...
Neil(mind): ha itine Achi boy friend Hoga tho superb hi rehete na..
Avni: Neil kya huva..
Neil: Kuch nahi
Avni: oh..okay...for Ur yesterday's behaviour I thought u r ignoring mee...I was thinking wt would be the matter and waited for Ur call..but u didn't call when I thought to give a call Ali called and then u also called....I thought time good...Ur okay..
Neil faces changes when he heard that she talked Ali
Neil: hmmm .
Avni: is everything okay Neil...
Neil: ha okay!!!
Avni: that day u said u need to say something!!.
Neil: ntg... actually I got a new case I will be busy for some days..I can't talk to u so thought to have so fun time..that's it
Avni:oh..okay!!
Neil:how's Riya??
Avni: she's good...but she wanted to go to US for some acting course itseems!!
Neil: oh when
Avni: next Monday
Neil: itini jaldi??
Avni: yah she is not listening to anyone...papa asked her to do same course in Mumbai it self...but she resisted
Neil: oh okay..meh ek baar bath Kar dekta hu
Avni: ok😇
Neil: okay bye..I have some work.
Avni:kal free ho??
Neil: no actually I will be busy for 1 week or more
Avni: oh...
Neil: bye take care and he goes to his car and goes from there
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Avni(mind): wt happened to him...is anything wrong with me or really he will be busy in case...from the day we met he never talked or avoided me..am I over thinking.. arey kya huva Neil😑😑
In police station
Neil callz Riya
Neil:hi Riya..how r u now??
Riya(with face happiness): superb tum??
Neil: don't lie Riya... I'm police I can understand that Ur lying..
Riya: hmmm
Neil: tum US course keliye jarahi hey ya Ali se dur hone keliye
Riya: cour(Neil interrupts her)
Neil: course keliye?? Jute math bolo..I know u r going sake of Ali
Riya: other than going for from him...wt can I even do Neil!!
Neil: cool!! Even if u go US u will be physically far from him...but mentally Ur mind will be also thinking about him and his memories...going away is not a solution...u know right Ur family is gonna miss u so much..once think about them!!!
Riya: hmm
Neil: not hmm..once think about it..only bcz of him...u will go for away from Ur fam Ur Avni dhi??.
Riya thinks for a while
Riya: yah Ur right Neil..okay I'm not going anywhere..
Neil: okay cool...bye take care
Riya : u too
Call ends
Evening
At Mehta's mansion
In living room
Riya: listen everyone...tension math lo..meh Kahi Nahi jarahahu...I will complete my course here only...
Ashish: Thank you beta...that's like my girl
Riya smiles and everyone are happy for her decision
In Riya's room
Avni: hi Riya
Riya: hi dhi
Avni: Neil phone Kiya kya??
Riya smiles and say yes.
Avni hugs her and says thank you
Riya: mujhe Nahi Neil ko Bola
Avni: hmm..I will call him bye..
Avni callz Neil but he will not attend...she will try again but no use.. after 5 times Neil lifts call
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Avni: hi..neil!! R u busy?? Did I disturb u??
Neil: ha toda busy.. no problem..kyu phone Kiya??
Avni: ntg!! Bas Riya keliye thank you bolnekeliye ..thank you Neil!!
Neil: it's okay...no need to thank me
Avni:hmm
Neil: k bye and cuts call
Avni: he might be very busy..
Neil was in driving and ends her call and goes to home... everyone r at living room
Shweta: hi Tillu!! Fresh ho jao.. sath meh dinner kasakte he
Neil): no maa..I have some work.....so San Kalo..meh abhi samosa kaya!!
Shweta: par Tillu!!
Neil: plz ma.. noo
And goes his room and locks it
And goes to wash room on shower cries...
Neil: kya Kiya Avni mujhe😣😣😣
After half n hour he goes to room and sleep.
Whereas other side Riya keeps herself busy in 1 or another work... silent tears rolls in her eyes...
Take care.
Thank you
Vidhya♥️♥️
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