《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》ignorance 😒
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The most powerful weapon in this world is silence and ignorance...the ignorance from our loved person is more painful then physical wound.
Next day Neil didn't woke up... Shweta was surprised and went to wake him up.
Shweta: Tillu...it's already 8 wake up beta...
Neil gets up and sleep on shewta's lap
Shweta: kya huva Neil...utooo
Neil: maa..Kuch Der sone do naa plz...
Shweta smiles and caresses his hair.....
After some time Neil phone rings..
Shweta: Neil beta tumhara phone ring ho Ra ha he ...utoo
Neil: itini Subha Subha koun call Kar Raha he maa
Shweta: 8 30 hogayi..suba suba Nahi..Avni call Kar Rahi hey
Neil: oh..meh fresh ho Kar..call back karta hu .and wakes up and goes to fresh up..
After freshing up he directly goes to police station (ps) without having breakfast.
Shweta : kya huva Tillu lo bahut pareshan lagraha he
Bebe: ha meh bhi kal as observe Kar Raha Hu...Kuch tho gadbad he
Shweta: kya ho sakta hey ma..
Bebe: mujhe bhi Nahi pata..ajj sham ko usko puchthi Hu..tum
tension math Lena
Shweta hugs harleen.
Avni pov
Is Neil ko kya huva phone attend Nahi Kar Raha hey...kal tabhiyat teek Nahi Bola tha..kya Kuch serious tho Nahi huva na...tension kyu..uska Ghar jakar dekti Hu...
She tries to call him again but he will not attend and she will get ready and goes to Neil's home.
Ting tong....
Ting tong...
Shweta opens the door.
Shweta: Avni beta tum.. and hugs her and welcomes into home.
Avni: how r u aun...mummy ji
Shweta (smiles ):teek Hu...tum kaise hoo
Avni: super mummy ji....Neil Kaha he mummy ji..phone bhi lift Nahi Kar Raha hey..
Shweta: Neil ps meh hey beta..tujhe call back Nahi Kiya kya
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Avni: Nahi mummy ji..uska tabhiyat kaise hey..vo teek he na..kal headache Bola tha.. isliye usko kaise he dekh ne keliye ayi Hu..
Shweta: vo bilkul teek he tum tension math lo..I think koyi urgent Kam isliye call Nahi Kiya aur nasta bhi Nahi Kiya..
Avni: tekh hey mummy ji...meh usko evng call Karti Hu ...mujhe bhi office meh bahut kaam hey...bye...take care maa..and hugs her..
Shweta kisses her on forehead and says take care..
Avni goes to office but her mind only thinking about Neil...
Avni(in mind) : mujhe kyu use lag rahi hey ki Neil mujhe ignore Kar Raha he...no no no..Neil will not ignore...maybe usko bahut kaam hey..evng call Kar sakte hey...dektha Hu...
Time passes Neil is busy with his new case and Avni is busy in doing her new design...
Whereas Riya could concentrate on her acting...she is thinking only about Ali....nor Riya called Ali or Ali called Riya...
In the evening
Mehta s mansion
Avni: hi ma..I'm so tired..give me some coffee..
Neela: meh abhi coffee lekar ati Hu...tum jao fresh ho jao aur Riya lo bhi buladho.
Avni: ok ma
Avni fresh ups and goes to riya's room and knocks door..but Riya doesn't open as she is sleeping and crying on bed after 5knocks..Riya realizes someone is knocking her door and wipes her tears and open the door.
Riya(fake smile): hi dhi
Avni: hi Riya and let's down let's have some coffee..
Riya: no dhi mujhe bok Nahi hey..
Avni: arey book Nahi hey tho kya Hoga... coffee pine se u feel fresh..see u look so tired..come na
Riya: ok dhi
Avni: u look so dull any problem??
Riya(fake smiles): no dhi...meh bilkul tekh Hu...no problem
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Avni: ok always keep smiling..u look so beautiful 😍
Riya nodes saying yes and smiles.
They both take coffee and go to balcony and sit
Balcony is fav place of these both sisters.. everytime they talk so many stuff while drinking coffee here especially Riya but today she will sit very quiet...Avni observes this and thinks something is wrong..
Avni: Riya
Riya doesn't respond
Avni shakes r shoulder and call Riya
Riya: ho bolo dhi
Avni: kya soch Rahi ho
Riya:Kuch nahi dhi bas ad key bare meh Soch Rahi Hu..
Avni : hoo ok
Riya: hmm...meh room jakar toda rest Karti hu...I'm so tired
Avni smiles
After some time she checks her phone and see whether Neil called her or not.for her bad luck Neil doesn't call and then tries to call him before that Ali call her and they both talk
Neil comes to home and Shweta informs him that Avni had come to home to see him and says him to call her.
He couldn't deny his mom words and calls Avni but he says busy..so that he throws his phone on bed and goes to fresh up.
After talking to Ali for 1hr Avni cuts call and notices Neil's missed call..and she calls him back.
Call
Avni: hello Neil!!
Neil(low voice) : ha Avni...boloo
Avni: Kuch nahi...how r u...??
Neil: meh teek Hu bas toda tired hu..tum??
Avni: I'm absolutely fine
Neil: hmmm
Avni: then how was Ur day??
Neil: full of work...ok Avni meh kal bath karta Hu thujse...I have lot of to do bye..take care
Avni: ok take care good night..bye
Neil ends the call
Avni(thinks): time good!! He is fine.
Take care.
Thank you
Vidhya
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