《AVNIEL: Come Fall In Love✅》I love you Avni💙💙
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Days are passing happily and routinely....all are busy in their works... whenever our youngsters are free they are meeting at cafe or hanging out.
Mehta's business meet with khanna's was also very successful.. now they are not only family friends but also business partners.so when ever they are free they are frequently visiting and meeting each other.
Neil and Avni are very happy for their family.in these days Neil got very very close Avni ..his feelings to Avni had increased.he couldn't be without talking to her.avni had also developed some feelings for him without her knowledge.. and
One fine day....a beautiful and most awaited day for lovers and 1 side lovers had arrived...the valentine's Day 💙. Neil decided to confess his feelings to her.
He got up and went to police station and completed his work.and called Avni...
Neil: hey avni!!!are u free??
Avni: yah free.. what's matter???
Neil: ntg much!! let's meet at
cafe???
Avni: yah sure!! I'm already on my to cafe...see u soon
Neil: ok...bye
Avni in mind is he gonna propose me...?? Wt should I saw?? I'm thinking over???ok let's see....I don't know why I thought not to trust any guy but I don't know y I will be very comfortable and happy in his company..I can see his pure heart💙.pure care towards me!!!ok let's wait n watch wt is gonna do??
Avni reached Ali's cafe
Avni : hey Ali!! What's up??
Ali: ntg as usual!!! Finally u came!I thought to call y
U to come..
Avni: oh...what's the matter??
Ali:ntg Avni...I just wanna talk to you... something important
Avni: okay tell me
Ali: not here come to kitchen.
Both goes to kitchen.
Ali holds her hand...Avni looks at him confusingly.
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Avni: kya huva Ali???
Ali: Avni.... stammers
Avni: haa kyaa..
Ali : ok wou we....Avni.....I... love u Avni ..i really love u so much...and then he stands on his knees and gives a Rose and Ada a week 1propose Avni...will u marry me...
Avni was very confused...
Ali gets up and says
Ali: I know u r confused Avni...but I can't my feelings....I m just falling for every minute I'm with u...Ur heart Ur innocence...and shares their most beautiful moments...and gets emotional
Tears roll in Avni's eyes and she hugs him and control his tears...
Here's 2 heart's are broken.
There are other 2 pairs of eyes who was watching them and literally their hearts are broken down and tears are Rolling in their eyes without their knowledge.
Who r these two people..???
Whose hearts are breaking??
Any guess guys .??
I know u have definitely guessed of of them is Neil!! Yah Ur right!! And who is other 1🤔🤔🤨🤨...
Let's see..
Neil wipes his tears and see another person crying behind him...
Neil: Riya tum!! Tum kyu rorahi oh??
Riya: ne...IL....Ali....aur dhi and starts crying...
Neil: it's okay Riya cool cool... don't cry ...come let's go from here...if not Ur gonna break down...
They both goes from there and sits in Neil's car and goes to some mountain..
Riya: Neil...Ali cannot be mine...vo dhi ki karte hey...and cries...
Neil: it's ok Riya...I can understand u...but rone se Ali tujhe pyar Nahi karta hey..sambal ko Apne apko..rekax
Riya: no Neil ...u can't understand my feelings..if it happens to u...u can understand
Neil: it happened to me Riya...meh Avni ko pyar karta Hu infact usko propose Karne keliye ma vaha Aya tha but vo mujhese Nahi Ali se pyar Karti he....and tears starts rolling in his eyes...
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Riya: I'm sorry Neil...
Neil: it's okay...u be cool...Rone se Kuch nahi Hoga..okay?? Calm down ..come let's go.
Riya nodes in yes and Neil drops Riya in home...and goes to his home and lays on bed and tears roll down in his eyes...and suddenly his phone rings and he wakes up..
Neil: hello!( In low voice)
Avni: Neil Kaha ho tum??.
Neil: Ghar meh... kyu??
Avni: Ghar meh..u asked me to come to cafe right??
Neil: ha I'm not feeling well Avni!! I can't come..sorry..
Avni: kyu kya huva??
Neil: Kuch nahi bas toda tired hu!! That's it
Avni: okay meh abhi athi Hu!!
Neil: no Avni..I'm fine...Ghar and Ka koyi jarurat Nahi...toda dher soya tho I will be okay..!!
Avni: Tek hey...take care..
And Neil immediately cuts call and starts crying..
Avni ( thinks): kya huva Neil ko...Kabhi vo aisa Nahi kiya..kya ho sakta hey..ok I will meet him tmrw and ask..hmm
Take care
Thank you
Vidhyaaa
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